Start by Controlling Your Own Shadow

Yes, well written! ! ! Come on! Come on! Come on! ⛽⛽⛽

I thought it was a fan of the Eternal World (=ﾟДﾟ=)!

It's been a long time since I've come across such a novel that appeals to my taste. The protagonist is intelligent and scheming, and the writing is logical. It's not like those novels that forcefully fill in holes just to cater to the nonsensical setting. Although it has unexpected effects, I still feel a little uncomfortable. The characters' emotions and inner details are well depicted, although sometimes the emotions change. The connection is inappropriate but inconsequential, and the three views of the protagonist are also to my liking. Killing decisively is not the Holy Mother. There is always a bottom line in people's hearts. Saving everyone but showing sympathy is the Holy Mother. Knowing who you want to save should or should not be saved, and whether you have the ability to save is in line with normal people. This is what the protagonist does very well. Secondly, there is the issue of the heroine. I also agree with the author's setting. Unlike those who only write about fights, intrigues, and passion, it's not that I don't agree with this, but I drive with my appetite and write the protagonist like a Like Liu Xiahui, I don't say whether the harem can be opened or not, and pure is not pure. I really know how to thank it for hundreds of chapters. The heroine has not been seen yet, and there are a lot of female supporting characters and they are not open to sex. It is better to just write no heroine and female supporting characters. What does it mean to not be good or bad? Back to the topic, so I very much agree with the setting of this book that there is no heroine but a female supporting character who can indulge in pornography. In short, subjectively speaking, I like this book very much, and objectively it is not bad. I hope it will not be a eunuch. Come on, the author!

It depends on the presentation ability, but it depends on the quality.

It's not easy to write such a dark plot with the flavor of the Virgin Mary

The background of the two prisoners was so strong. Is it reasonable for the author to have no bodyguards when they came out for training?

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The writing is okay, but the author starts talking nonsense just for the sake of darkness. The people in Black Wind Sailor are all monks. What they need are cultivation resources to kill and rob the mortals in the town. Is this useful? It would not be better to just go to the entertainment venues mentioned earlier in order to rape women. The novel about immortality you wrote is not a novel about martial arts.

Take your time. After all, the number of words you have written is not that many. Other people's books have millions of words. Work hard slowly. Come on, author.

The beads are evolving in the direction of world beads, and the story of adding self-created skills may be more attractive.