Please Call Me Huanxian

If this book were a modern urban type, or a book about tomb robbers and descendants of Maoshan, the skills that the protagonist learns at the beginning are okay, but you are writing about a semi-immortal world with gods, monks, monsters, etc. [Emot=default,04/] Then the protagonist's skills at the beginning without any system or any special features are too ordinary. It can be seen that the author wants to write the kind of book that relies on nothing. It's boring to watch the protagonist randomly ➕ luck and cultivate immortality , and the only thing different about the protagonist is a copper coin. After reading dozens of chapters, I didn't see what the protagonist did with this copper coin. This book would be much better if a system or special skill bonus was added to the protagonist, instead of being too bland. The writing and plot are the same as 10 years ago. I am tired of it. I can say that I will read similar books now.

The early pace seems to be passable, but after that it becomes boring! The current rhythm is a cycle of "the protagonist takes a rest~encounters something~deals with it"!

The writing is okay, and the author also has some writing skills. But for an online novel, the pace is too slow. And too bland

Come on, there are not many good books on my bookshelf. The author must write hard and carefully.

The writing is good, but there are a little too many characters and dialogues in the later stages. This is not a shortcoming, but the book is a bit bland, which is a bit bad for me personally. The main plot is also slow to advance, but it is already one of the very few online books that can be read.

The writing was good at the beginning, but when I started to take the painstaking route, the quality fell apart, and then it became watery.

The Golden elixir sect believes that cultivation is a process of cultivating and reverting back. It is believed that when a person is born, the innate qi gathers into the four limbs and all the bones. This is smooth, and the Tao produces one, one life produces two, two produces three, and three produces all things. The theory of the Jindan sect is that reverse cultivation returns to the innate one qi, three yuan reverses two qi, two qi reverses Taiyi, and one returns to the origin.

A very good novel. I hope the author will work harder.

I've read more than 130 chapters of "Fantasy Immortal". Except for blindness, the protagonist is controlled by others at other times.

The male protagonist is close to his family. He always catches his enemies. If it weren't for the protagonist's aura, his family members would have died countless times.