Start Cultivating Immortality from Prison

Does the author want to write about a heroine or a novel without a protagonist? 1. On the emotional line, if the protagonist wants to become stronger first and then fall in love, he should explain it directly to Xiaowei or refuse. As a result, it is written in such a bloody way, asking you what you mean by hanging on to Xiaowei. I really want to criticize the author. 2. The plot with the Song family is also a bit bloody. It feels like it is written like a detective novel, and it is very scheming. What a speechless plot.

Black energy? ! The protagonist doesn't have a system, and he doesn't have any advanced skills, so he's still cultivating immortality?

1. If you want to know about the situation in other countries, just ask the Song family directly for conditions or make a deal. The author writes the protagonist and the Song family very well. 2. Not decisive at all. The protagonist clearly does not want to let the Song family enter the house, but the protagonist does behave like a virgin. He clearly thinks in his heart that his behavior is indeed very reserved.

At the beginning, I wrote a lot about how corrupt the dynasty was and how miserable the people were, but it ended without even letting go of a single fart. It was rubbish.

Waste, only realm, hehehehehehehehe

This kind of book makes you feel like a non-existent person. No one knows who you are or what martial arts you know. . . What's the point of the existence of the Air Gang?

I won't tell you how bad it was before. What the heck is the emotional scene at the end about, is it both serious and serious? Or the author has never been in love at all. The funniest thing is that the protagonist has broken through from foundation building to the virtual elixir realm, and suddenly gives the senior sister some elixirs, allowing her to break through from the second level to the third level of Qi training! How generous are you? You wouldn't be so stingy if you raised a dog and gave him food, right?

It's a bit distorted. At the end of the dynasty, the people were in dire straits. A jailer visited the brothel at least 10 times a month. He also said that the protagonist rewarded generously. Wang Chao's tax exceeded 50%. Zhang Chenggong died with 10 taels of silver and consumed meat every day. In troubled times, food is the most expensive, let alone meat. Let alone the protagonist's monthly salary of 100 taels! This aspect is a bit distorted. It seems that brothel water is very popular.

Updates are so slow. Please be more diligent. All the flowers spent waiting have faded.

It's not as bad as the comment section says. The emotional line of the Song family is relatively early, and it should be to introduce Gu Shen into the world of immortality. The rest of it basically has nothing to do with the Song family. Of course, I have just seen the latest updated chapter, and I don't know if it will be continued in the future. Especially since the Song family gave birth to twins for Gu Shen, and on the other hand, Senior Sister Zheng has worked silently for so many years. Will the choice Gu Shen makes at a certain period be the final choice? I don't know if the author will let Gu Shen choose between the Song family and Senior Sister Zheng in the end. Will his choice satisfy the readers? In addition, even though Gu Shen has reached the Nascent Soul stage, I feel that the plot has not been fully developed yet, and I don't know where it will follow. I hope it won't be like the novels I read in the past, where the follow-up becomes more and more confusing.