
Pirate General Akainu
by Snowy
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Reach the sky in one step, I am Akainu, I speak for myself! Travel through time to become Akainu and build the strongest navy! (New book "My codename is Green Bull", please support me)
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Official(342)Scraped 22d ago
My personality is wrong, I'm a bit conflicted
In the first chapter, you wrote that the protagonist traveled through time, ok, and you said that the time travel was between Akainu and Bingzhi. This shows that the protagonist does not like people like Akainu very much, but prefers people like Bingzhi. The second chapter explains the original background of the protagonist, including parents, brothers and sisters, without any dark twenties. So I would like to ask, how can a normal person who likes Bingzhi more than Akainu, and travels to Akainu, have no inner fluctuations and kill people at will? Forget about killing people, just like Akainu. The Demon-Slaying Order also sank the refuge ship. Are you the Akainu or a time traveler? Which one is dominant? I don't believe that you could have the heart to kill hundreds or thousands of people when you traveled to the past, and you still have any loyalty to justice. Please, although your body is Akainu, your soul is a time traveler, a time traveler with an attached system. If you say that you are someone who likes Akainu, then that's totally fine. Your own three-dimensional view is more childish, but your behavior is closer to Akainu, which is a little better than the original work. I can't stand it anymore. If you only write about Akainu, then I think this book is already very good among fan fictions (those who like non-Madonnas can give it five stars), but I really can't stand your character design. This is your mistake. Finally, the military is a sacred profession, defending the motherland, defending the people, and maintaining national stability. The outlook on life of most soldiers shouldn't be the same as Akainu's, right? You are not afraid of sacrificing your comrades and people in order to achieve your goals, right? Therefore, you can either write a real Akainu, then I will give you four or five stars for this book. But you are a time traveler who likes ice and childish behavior and behaves like Akainu, so sorry, I will give you one star.
Akainu himself is the darkest and most harmonious person
1. Akainu is absolutely righteous and cannot tolerate any evil. 2. Akainu can be written with a little bit of Madonna, but definitely not too much. 3. Akainu is a soldier and a human being. Soldiers obey orders absolutely, while humans are selfish. 4. The Virgin can only appear as a positive character in the novel. Akainu is a real person and soldier. In One Piece, Luffy himself is a lawbreaker, and he destroys and kills many marines. A battle destroys a lot of things. For example, letting Nico Robin's general Kuzan violate the navy's orders. Nico Robin is a scholar. O'Hara's mission itself is to kill all the scholars, but he let him go. Isn't this a disobedience to orders and not taking his identity seriously? That Kirby is also a ****. Both the pirates and the navy are trying to kill each other. He is a navy, and the pirates didn't even call for a truce. He, a navy, called a truce first, not to mention that he couldn't stop it at the time. It's amazing that he, a soldier, called a truce first and didn't get settled as a deserter.
Set up a sign-in building
Anyone who likes to read this book can come here to sign in. (Actually, it's water experience, hahaha.)O
I, Hu Hansan, am back again
I don't know why my previous post disappeared. But it can be vaguely discerned. There is ❌❌ full of squirting❌ To this I just want to say, let the storm come more violently. Seeking destruction. Asking for a slap in the face. I am not targeting anyone, I just want to say something to those who have no brains or lack IQ: I can't even understand the virtual world and the real world. I am not qualified to review this book. Well, finally I would like to emphasize my personal point of view, please don't criticize me. Admiral Akainu must win🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 The navy must win⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ Justice will prevail V🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
When General Akainu was crippled, Whitebeard got angry and punched the ground with all his strength. Your lieutenant general was slightly injured and Whitebeard, who was at his peak, punched him with all his strength. Hahaha, the strongest creature, Kaido, didn't even dare to say that. Have you seen One Piece? I just took a cursory look and wrote casually. Can I write more seriously? The basic strength settings are not enough.
Love Sakaski!
The navy is rising, the red commander is mighty and domineering!
I just want to ask the author whether this is a time-travel story or a narrative story, whether it is a successful time-traveling or a failure. After reading so many pictures, I can see that this is all Akainu's character, and there is no trace of the time-traveler, so it was Akainu who successfully killed the time-traveler? And then inherited a little bit of the traveler's compassion and part of the plot memory? Even if you write about a time traveler, it should be a different Akainu, right? The result is no different from Akainu in the anime, so I might as well watch the anime!
Everyone knows that Monet, a junior cadre, can sacrifice himself for Doflamingo's great cause, not to mention his four top cadres, who betrayed and lurked around Doflamingo as undercover agents. They all believed that Doflamingo was the chosen one. He was stronger than Dover just because of his overlord appearance. There was much stronger than Dover in the sea, and they were not seen as rebels! ! ! (Although I quite like Akainu, I can't stand this book anymore. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.)
I recently fell in love with Doflamingo, so I imitated his steps, made Kizaru's expressions, smoked like Smoker, and said to everyone: Give me face and be my son. So I had the left hand of red hair, the calf of Aokiji, the front teeth of Blackbeard, and the eyes of Fujitora.
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If you don't have enough strength to act like an overlord, you are seeking death. Even if the Navy lets you go, the World Government won't! !
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Official(342)Scraped 22d ago
My personality is wrong, I'm a bit conflicted
In the first chapter, you wrote that the protagonist traveled through time, ok, and you said that the time travel was between Akainu and Bingzhi. This shows that the protagonist does not like people like Akainu very much, but prefers people like Bingzhi. The second chapter explains the original background of the protagonist, including parents, brothers and sisters, without any dark twenties. So I would like to ask, how can a normal person who likes Bingzhi more than Akainu, and travels to Akainu, have no inner fluctuations and kill people at will? Forget about killing people, just like Akainu. The Demon-Slaying Order also sank the refuge ship. Are you the Akainu or a time traveler? Which one is dominant? I don't believe that you could have the heart to kill hundreds or thousands of people when you traveled to the past, and you still have any loyalty to justice. Please, although your body is Akainu, your soul is a time traveler, a time traveler with an attached system. If you say that you are someone who likes Akainu, then that's totally fine. Your own three-dimensional view is more childish, but your behavior is closer to Akainu, which is a little better than the original work. I can't stand it anymore. If you only write about Akainu, then I think this book is already very good among fan fictions (those who like non-Madonnas can give it five stars), but I really can't stand your character design. This is your mistake. Finally, the military is a sacred profession, defending the motherland, defending the people, and maintaining national stability. The outlook on life of most soldiers shouldn't be the same as Akainu's, right? You are not afraid of sacrificing your comrades and people in order to achieve your goals, right? Therefore, you can either write a real Akainu, then I will give you four or five stars for this book. But you are a time traveler who likes ice and childish behavior and behaves like Akainu, so sorry, I will give you one star.
Akainu himself is the darkest and most harmonious person
1. Akainu is absolutely righteous and cannot tolerate any evil. 2. Akainu can be written with a little bit of Madonna, but definitely not too much. 3. Akainu is a soldier and a human being. Soldiers obey orders absolutely, while humans are selfish. 4. The Virgin can only appear as a positive character in the novel. Akainu is a real person and soldier. In One Piece, Luffy himself is a lawbreaker, and he destroys and kills many marines. A battle destroys a lot of things. For example, letting Nico Robin's general Kuzan violate the navy's orders. Nico Robin is a scholar. O'Hara's mission itself is to kill all the scholars, but he let him go. Isn't this a disobedience to orders and not taking his identity seriously? That Kirby is also a ****. Both the pirates and the navy are trying to kill each other. He is a navy, and the pirates didn't even call for a truce. He, a navy, called a truce first, not to mention that he couldn't stop it at the time. It's amazing that he, a soldier, called a truce first and didn't get settled as a deserter.
Set up a sign-in building
Anyone who likes to read this book can come here to sign in. (Actually, it's water experience, hahaha.)O
I, Hu Hansan, am back again
I don't know why my previous post disappeared. But it can be vaguely discerned. There is ❌❌ full of squirting❌ To this I just want to say, let the storm come more violently. Seeking destruction. Asking for a slap in the face. I am not targeting anyone, I just want to say something to those who have no brains or lack IQ: I can't even understand the virtual world and the real world. I am not qualified to review this book. Well, finally I would like to emphasize my personal point of view, please don't criticize me. Admiral Akainu must win🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 The navy must win⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ Justice will prevail V🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
When General Akainu was crippled, Whitebeard got angry and punched the ground with all his strength. Your lieutenant general was slightly injured and Whitebeard, who was at his peak, punched him with all his strength. Hahaha, the strongest creature, Kaido, didn't even dare to say that. Have you seen One Piece? I just took a cursory look and wrote casually. Can I write more seriously? The basic strength settings are not enough.
Love Sakaski!
The navy is rising, the red commander is mighty and domineering!
I just want to ask the author whether this is a time-travel story or a narrative story, whether it is a successful time-traveling or a failure. After reading so many pictures, I can see that this is all Akainu's character, and there is no trace of the time-traveler, so it was Akainu who successfully killed the time-traveler? And then inherited a little bit of the traveler's compassion and part of the plot memory? Even if you write about a time traveler, it should be a different Akainu, right? The result is no different from Akainu in the anime, so I might as well watch the anime!
Everyone knows that Monet, a junior cadre, can sacrifice himself for Doflamingo's great cause, not to mention his four top cadres, who betrayed and lurked around Doflamingo as undercover agents. They all believed that Doflamingo was the chosen one. He was stronger than Dover just because of his overlord appearance. There was much stronger than Dover in the sea, and they were not seen as rebels! ! ! (Although I quite like Akainu, I can't stand this book anymore. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.)
I recently fell in love with Doflamingo, so I imitated his steps, made Kizaru's expressions, smoked like Smoker, and said to everyone: Give me face and be my son. So I had the left hand of red hair, the calf of Aokiji, the front teeth of Blackbeard, and the eyes of Fujitora.
.
If you don't have enough strength to act like an overlord, you are seeking death. Even if the Navy lets you go, the World Government won't! !
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A One Piece fanfic about traveling through time and becoming Admiral "Akainu" Sakaski. When the protagonist traveled through time, he happened to catch up with the Golden Lion invading the Navy Headquarters. In a hurry, the protagonist finally managed to fool him with his acting skills. The golden finger is a bit similar to the king's spare life. Using the "fear value" of others towards the protagonist can be exchanged for "dominance fruit" to increase the level of cultivation of domineering. [Subscription Ratio]6.5:1 [Book Friends Rating]: ★★★★★★★★★☆ Why recommend this book🌝🌝🌝∶ Starting point is a rare pirate fanfic that describes the protagonist Akainu, and it can be considered a rarity. Why don't you recommend this book🌚🌚🌚∶In order for the author to make the plot develop in the direction he wants, there are too many bugs in the book that are inconsistent with the original settings or change the character of the original characters. Summary 🤔🤔🤔∶ Actually, I personally didn't like this book very much. However, although there are many problems and the newcomer's writing style is stiff, But if you look at his subscription ratio and book friend ratings, you should understand that the audience for this book is still very enthusiastic about it. Maybe you are one of his audiences?




It's being serialized. I am Akainu, come and beat me. The war is over at the top of the plot. I probably can't continue writing anymore.




In the serialization, the soul penetrates Akainu. System flow, collect fear emotions, and travel to the time when the Golden Lion attacked Malinfando. The writing is okay, but the plot logic is not quite right. Long Kong has no ratings yet.




Good pirate novel












