
Naruto: My Progress in Konoha Liver
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Qing Minghun traveled through the ninja world and became an ordinary Uchiha tribesman. It coincided with the third ninja war. In order to survive better, he could only live...
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Official(69)Scraped 5d ago
Chakra skills, compulsory graduation thesis of ninja school, standard studio routines, chakra is the embodiment of spirit and spirit, let me tell you something, if chakra can be cultivated, Kakashi will not have too much chakra to ninjutsu a few years after the end of the Fourth World War. By the way, the Otsutsuki clan in other universes all eat fruits to strengthen themselves. Kishimoto clearly stated that ninja graduation must pass an assessment, and after graduation, you must have an instructor for practical training to achieve combat effectiveness. If you don't have the strength, the ghost will ask you to graduate.
Really hot
Author, what are you doing? What are you doing? ! You keep repeating the same plot and words, and everyone has tolerated it. Damn it, you have a cheat. It would be incredible for an ordinary ninja to upgrade a ninjutsu to level 2 or 3. But with your cheating cheat, you can upgrade a lot of ninjutsu to levels 5, 6, and 7, and even fuse and sublimate them. As a result, every time you hit someone, you have to fight for more than ten minutes! It takes ten minutes to fight a chuunin, ten minutes to fight a jounin, and then you have a kaleidoscope, but it still takes ten minutes to fight a few jounin, and you even have to use a kaleidoscope! Not to mention that your golden finger, Temeow, has made your chakra, spirit, and physique become monster levels. As a result, even after beating Aodu for a long time, you still haven't been killed. Even after fighting Mei Terumi in the early stage, it was still dangerous for half a day. You are often forced to use the kaleidoscope. You, Temeow, are useless without the Sharingan, right? There are so many perfect high-level ninjutsus, and ordinary ninjas will never be able to reach that level in their lifetime. You have a bunch of them, but the results are perfect and you can't use them instantly. I've lost hundreds of chapters, and every time I play for a long time, you are better than Kakashi Hatake, Uchiha is 50-50, and you are the King of Mizukage, right?
It's too ink-filled. I started writing it from the beginning of the Third War. It's almost 600 chapters. I haven't finished the Three War yet. It's all kaleidoscope and it still feels like it's not open yet.
Pretty good, just a bit overwhelming
One Magatama can kill Chuunin, two Magatama can kill Jonin, but three Magatama is still fighting Jonin, and even Mangekyo is still working hard to fight Jonin. To be honest, Orochimaru has no blood stains and can be promoted to Kage level. The protagonist's skills have been upgraded to Fire Style and Wind Style, and his chakra is far beyond. Kakashi, it turns out that he is not even at the Kage level, and then he has made a lot of military exploits, killed so many jounin, and rescued so many ninjas. But in the end, the meritorious service seems to be useless, and he does not change any skills, especially the skills in the Book of Sealings. Is this realistic in Konoha? Why do people contribute to the battlefield? You can suppress people, send them to dangerous places, and get meritorious service, but you cannot fail to honor your meritorious service. The skills that cannot be found in the Sealed Book can only be learned by the Hokage series. But this is not the case in the original work. In the original work, the Jonin Council is still an important authority. Duan also learned the art of spiritualization. Other Jonin can also learn it, just because they lack merit or there is no suitable person to learn it.
Fighter in the garbage. Ink marks are heavily digitized. This is the first time I have read a novel in 15 years. It is rubbish.
It's too long. The plot is all about improvement. Go out and fight, come back and improve again, go out and fight again, and the cycle continues. I have written four to five hundred pieces for each of the three battles, but I haven't finished them yet.
Fight, upgrade, mission, fight, upgrade, task, infinite loop. No plot, rubbish
So verbose
Just write it carefully and make up the word count. Many of them are just like a running account. There is no need to write it in such detail. You can add the plot yourself. . . 😐😐😐
Except for the beginning, everything else is water
After two hundred chapters, the combat power collapsed. The author himself set that Uchiha Santong is a Jonin. He has to escape one-on-one. The protagonist is kaleidoscope. Every time one-on-one, he can't defeat the opponent. A bunch of seventh-level illusions can only defeat Chuunin. Compared with Itachi Uchiha who directly defeats Kakashi, Kurenai Yuhi, you are like water😎
There is no plot, just collect chakra to improve, return to the village, go to the battlefield, repeat for 900 chapters
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Official(69)Scraped 5d ago
Chakra skills, compulsory graduation thesis of ninja school, standard studio routines, chakra is the embodiment of spirit and spirit, let me tell you something, if chakra can be cultivated, Kakashi will not have too much chakra to ninjutsu a few years after the end of the Fourth World War. By the way, the Otsutsuki clan in other universes all eat fruits to strengthen themselves. Kishimoto clearly stated that ninja graduation must pass an assessment, and after graduation, you must have an instructor for practical training to achieve combat effectiveness. If you don't have the strength, the ghost will ask you to graduate.
Really hot
Author, what are you doing? What are you doing? ! You keep repeating the same plot and words, and everyone has tolerated it. Damn it, you have a cheat. It would be incredible for an ordinary ninja to upgrade a ninjutsu to level 2 or 3. But with your cheating cheat, you can upgrade a lot of ninjutsu to levels 5, 6, and 7, and even fuse and sublimate them. As a result, every time you hit someone, you have to fight for more than ten minutes! It takes ten minutes to fight a chuunin, ten minutes to fight a jounin, and then you have a kaleidoscope, but it still takes ten minutes to fight a few jounin, and you even have to use a kaleidoscope! Not to mention that your golden finger, Temeow, has made your chakra, spirit, and physique become monster levels. As a result, even after beating Aodu for a long time, you still haven't been killed. Even after fighting Mei Terumi in the early stage, it was still dangerous for half a day. You are often forced to use the kaleidoscope. You, Temeow, are useless without the Sharingan, right? There are so many perfect high-level ninjutsus, and ordinary ninjas will never be able to reach that level in their lifetime. You have a bunch of them, but the results are perfect and you can't use them instantly. I've lost hundreds of chapters, and every time I play for a long time, you are better than Kakashi Hatake, Uchiha is 50-50, and you are the King of Mizukage, right?
It's too ink-filled. I started writing it from the beginning of the Third War. It's almost 600 chapters. I haven't finished the Three War yet. It's all kaleidoscope and it still feels like it's not open yet.
Pretty good, just a bit overwhelming
One Magatama can kill Chuunin, two Magatama can kill Jonin, but three Magatama is still fighting Jonin, and even Mangekyo is still working hard to fight Jonin. To be honest, Orochimaru has no blood stains and can be promoted to Kage level. The protagonist's skills have been upgraded to Fire Style and Wind Style, and his chakra is far beyond. Kakashi, it turns out that he is not even at the Kage level, and then he has made a lot of military exploits, killed so many jounin, and rescued so many ninjas. But in the end, the meritorious service seems to be useless, and he does not change any skills, especially the skills in the Book of Sealings. Is this realistic in Konoha? Why do people contribute to the battlefield? You can suppress people, send them to dangerous places, and get meritorious service, but you cannot fail to honor your meritorious service. The skills that cannot be found in the Sealed Book can only be learned by the Hokage series. But this is not the case in the original work. In the original work, the Jonin Council is still an important authority. Duan also learned the art of spiritualization. Other Jonin can also learn it, just because they lack merit or there is no suitable person to learn it.
Fighter in the garbage. Ink marks are heavily digitized. This is the first time I have read a novel in 15 years. It is rubbish.
It's too long. The plot is all about improvement. Go out and fight, come back and improve again, go out and fight again, and the cycle continues. I have written four to five hundred pieces for each of the three battles, but I haven't finished them yet.
Fight, upgrade, mission, fight, upgrade, task, infinite loop. No plot, rubbish
So verbose
Just write it carefully and make up the word count. Many of them are just like a running account. There is no need to write it in such detail. You can add the plot yourself. . . 😐😐😐
Except for the beginning, everything else is water
After two hundred chapters, the combat power collapsed. The author himself set that Uchiha Santong is a Jonin. He has to escape one-on-one. The protagonist is kaleidoscope. Every time one-on-one, he can't defeat the opponent. A bunch of seventh-level illusions can only defeat Chuunin. Compared with Itachi Uchiha who directly defeats Kakashi, Kurenai Yuhi, you are like water😎
There is no plot, just collect chakra to improve, return to the village, go to the battlefield, repeat for 900 chapters
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It's very normal for a Naruto fanfic to be relatively watery, using a lot of data panels to overwhelm the word count. Many readers complained about the slow pace of the game. In fact, the main character has been kaleidoscope for one and a half years. It is not slow at all, it is just watery. Only two years have passed after hundreds of chapters. There is a shortage of books. You can read it.













