Doupo: Marry Yun Yun, If You Don't Consummate the Marriage, Then Break Up!

It just ruins Yun Yun. It makes my liver hurt to watch it. What a different perspective. Yun Yun is very good in Anti-Inflammation, but Yun Yun's basic character has not been changed. It's very disgusting🤢. Yun Yun and the protagonist have been friends since childhood and they are husband and wife. They have a close relationship with Anti-Inflammation in the Warcraft Mountains. Touch Yunyun will only kill Xiaoyan and tell the protagonist proactively, instead of deliberately concealing it and still obsessed with Xiaoyan. He also writes Yunyun as a very stupid person with no brain at all and no basic judgment. It is really disgusting. Please don't watch it, avoid lightning! ! ! 🤮🤮🤮🤮

Brother. Do you know what your tmd is about? You know what you are writing is fantasy, don't you. Look at how much I regret this book. It's okay to watch less of the regret articles in short videos. This is a regret article from a fantasy novel. Do you know how to write it? If you don't know how to write, just stop writing, brother. For those who can't even tell the difference between modern literature and fantasy literature, to be honest, there is no need to write further. If you read more comments, I won't believe you. I don't know what the problem is with your novel. What I said before is clear enough, brother. As long as the male protagonist can leave and go solo. The male protagonist still works for Xiao Yan. I don't know where you regret it. Take this book off the shelves immediately, you don't have to think I'm talking nonsense, brother. What I said is the truth. Either revise it or write it properly later. If you continue to write like this, then I will have nothing to say. I am not talking nonsense. You can take a look. Your problem is too serious.

I don't want to give it even one star. If Liu Ruyan gets too many credits, I suggest you jump into a cesspool to wash your mind. Write a fanfic and change your character. I can only say that you are invincible, kid.

This book is the first time I have seen a book that was scolded bloody. It's so awesome. The author wants to kill the readers, but it's not like this. You are using Yun Yun's name and the setting of Emperor Ruyan. Generally speaking, when writing fan fiction, it is best not to follow the established characters casually, otherwise readers will scold them to death. 🤐My previous account was also written by Dou I was writing a fanfic for the first time at the time, so I didn't pay much attention to the background setting and just wrote it casually. As a result, readers said it was a low-profile Immortal Emperor. I couldn't laugh or cry at the time, so I read it again. It turned out to be a bit low-profile 😂 But it doesn't matter, as long as the character doesn't collapse. If you directly change the already fixed character, it's a miracle if it doesn't get removed.

Six brothers. The role of Douluo has been harmed by you. Am I now a Douluo? Next is Medusa Reposting those regretful short videos makes my head go crazy. Now it's hard to read a novel without him doing this to me. Kuaishou saw another one that was even more outrageous The heroine's ex-boyfriend. Of embryos. The heroine is pregnant. What's more outrageous? The male protagonist actually endured it? Is this the next development? It won't be like this, but it's almost right? This can get so popular that I chop off my head. 😎😎😎 Brother, I'm not saying that your writing is not good. It's this kind of subject matter that looks disgusting, you know? When I see you writing about having many children and being blessed, I can bear it. Let's say that some people don't need to use their brains when reading books when they were young. But don't think we are brainless. I feel like this kind of subject matter is really rubbing off my IQ. But if you can't see my comment section, you can delete it if you want, but I posted it.

I saw the update the day before yesterday and I didn't want to read it anymore. I felt so angry. I still think about this from time to time. I used to feel very sorry to see Yun Yun and Xiao Yan fighting each other. Now this book only makes me feel heartbroken. Maybe it's because the protagonist is different. In this book, I saw Yun Yun's behavior, isn't it the behavior of Emperor Ruyan? I also thought about the protagonist, but something happened to Xiao Yan, and I was worried about Xiao Yan. I used to think that Dou Po had a good impression of the character Yun Yun, especially Xiao Yan, but when I read this novel, I felt like I was the protagonist of the book, and I just felt like I hated Xiao Yan so much. He also thought about Yun Yun breaking up with Xiao Yan and getting back together with the protagonist, but his upper body of Yun Yun had been seen and touched by Xiao Yan, and even kissed her, and her heart was filled with thoughts about how Xiao Yan was doing it~ Hey~ Hey~ (The current Doupo should have been deleted, before. It was written that Yun Yun took the initiative to kiss her after eating something and the effects of the medicine took effect. Now I went back and read it, but it was gone.) My thoughts are~~"Bad girls don't waste, good girls live up to it"~~Don't criticize me, I'm just telling you what I think. I need some sweet books to heal me. Can you guys recommend them?

I suggest you read novels without thinking, but that doesn't mean you can write novels without thinking. After all, as a creator you are responsible for your own work, so what's the point of writing a mess. If it's just for fun, then pretend I didn't say it. If it's for making money, then you have to be serious. Using Doupo's name as a cuckold template, the character's personality is completely inconsistent with the original work. Yun Yun herself is not low in popularity in the original work, and the anime has even exploded in popularity. If you change her character like this, you really are not afraid of fans attacking you.

AI writes text? It has a broken shell, and then it smells like Emperor Liu Ruyan, and the character is completely ruined. Junk novel

I am afraid that the wind will blow into the perfect world again, and then there will be another one, "Perfect, Liu Shen marries his wife, but refuses to consummate the marriage xxxx". Hahahahahahahahaha😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

All I can say is that if you read this book for a sadistic or enjoyable novel, you should not read it. The male protagonist is written as a big licking dog, the female protagonist Yun Yun is written as a big**, and Xiao Yan is written as a little bastard. Zhen: I don't know what the author is writing about. But I have to say that you are good at pulling emotions, but you can't destroy your character just to pull emotions. After all, they are doujins, and what is most important about being a doujin is that they match the persona. You can change the plot as you like. The character must not collapse. You might as well just write about a city or the Immortal Liu Ruyan Emperor. It also saves me from being really scolded.