One Piece: the Thief Who Robbed a Country

Garp was poisoned when he saw that he could chase and fight Steel Seadramon. Steel Seadramon's one shot was able to deflect Mechanical Greymon's belt, and Mechanical Greymon's ultimate move was set to nuclear weapons level. Garp is so awesome that it can beat the Steel Seadramon that can output nuclear weapons and have defenses that can withstand nuclear weapons. If you were to replace Immu, Garp would have a damn chance of winning.

The content of this book is generally good, and the plot and writing are both eye-catching. But the continuation is very poor. Why do some people still think that people with fruit abilities are afraid of water? Also, the author is a complete cloud and has no idea about the principles between various abilities such as elementalization. The elementalization ability means that the fruit ability user transforms his body into the form of the fruit ability attribute to achieve immunity to physical collision damage. The protagonist's Steel Seadramon is extremely weakened, and the Digizaloid on his body can be cut by someone using the Iron Cutting Realm. Even the ultimate energy cannon is ineffective against the elementalization of the fruit ability user. The only effect is because Steel Seadramon has water attributes, and the water attribute makes the effect of elementalization worse. How come energy attacks have no effect on elementalization? Then why did Luffy use blood and water to hit the elementalization of the Sharokshasha fruit? Isn't it just using water to condense the sand? Energy attacks damage all substances, and energy attacks are not physical damage, but they have no effect on the elementalization of the fruit. Author, please note that you are writing a fan novel, not an original novel. Writing a fan novel is to help readers sort out the possibility of adding other factors to the development of the original work, rather than letting you write randomly😎

At the beginning, Jie Guo seemed a bit cool, so I ordered all of them, but the more I looked at it, the more wrong it became. 1. It's understandable that you want to be a Shichibukai in the early stage. But in the later stage, when you are almost ready to be a Yonko, what's the point of begging to be a Shichibukai? Voluntarily waiting for others? 2. The original character took in Nami and signed an agreement with her for 3 years and then a long-term agreement. There was no question of whether to lick her or not. Will she give it back to the Straw Hat later? 3. The protagonist is still thinking about strengthening himself in the early stage, and is writing new characters in the later stage. Is this to write a behind-the-scenes portrait that downplays the protagonist? What about the protagonist's personality? ? To be honest, even if you make it more obvious that the protagonist laughs and cries whenever he wants from the beginning, and you can write the protagonist as a person who follows his own heart, but it seems that the protagonist has no attraction at all, no desire, no courage, no self-improvement.

You're almost good at blowing Garp. The key point is that you don't have to worry about blowing Garp. The King of Cooperation still teamed up with others to win Rocks and the Golden Lion. Strengthening Bogart to the epic level was unexpected. Also, the Iron Sea Dragon Hand and the Deep Sea King are too weak. In terms of the expressiveness of the Deep Sea King, it is not a bloody attack on Ace. After all, Ace's few pictures are no different from Genos, let alone the Iron Sea Dragon Hand. Garp's most powerful move, Bone Fist Shock Wave, is just like that. It looks a bit bluffing, but the sea battle is indeed as powerful as Whitebeard's Aerial Formation and Sea Shock. Garp's ability to hold up the sky is comparable to Whitebeard's strength.

It's shit starting from War Islands. It's the same as the last part of the book. I don't know what I'm writing.

That second prince you wrote about. Then the protagonist asked him to buy his life for only a fucking eleven. The protagonist had really never seen the world, so why did the prince want so much money? The most common Devil Fruit costs hundreds of millions. After seeing this, I really don't want to hear it anymore! Finally, let me tell you that the protagonist robbed the treasure house of Luffy's home country and didn't even have 10 billion, not even Devil Fruit. What did you write 🐶8️⃣? That TM is a franchise country after all.

It's been a complete garbage book since the main character did the Shichibukai and In the War Islands

The plot of War Islands is so good. It's useless to write so much. It's just to collect faith for Kavitua. What can you do with it after collecting it? Has your strength improved?

The setting and plot are okay. The only bad thing is the original characters (I don't know much about the minor characters in One Piece, just the highlight characters.) Such an awesome Goldfinger is fighting back and forth with some original little Luo Luo.

It looks good in the front, but it doesn't look good in the back starting from Jianguo.