Konoha Soryu

Actually, I'm quite curious. Since I am immortal, how did I die in my previous life? Note: I haven't watched it yet, just out of curiosity, not a tip.

1. Isn't the protagonist's resilience very strong? He can transplant some Hashirama cells. What a dick, wooden shield. If you don't agree with each other, come to the top and become a Buddha. Hahahaha 2. Don't expose your recovery ability too much, otherwise Orochimaru will easily catch you. . Ha ha ha ha

"Canglong" is also known as "Qinglong", Qinglong belongs to wood The protagonist's recovery ability is so strong. How can we not inject some Hashirama cells into him and let him learn Wood Release? It would be perfect if he were allowed to use the dragon veins for his own use!

Bamen Dunjia is immune to illusions. Illusions affect chakra, and his chakra is uncontrollable.

It started out okay at first, but one escort mission persuaded me to quit... From the beginning to the end of this escort mission, there were too many descriptions of how to lower my wits, and I couldn't bear it.

What is chakra talent? Taijutsu means Taijutsu talent, and Ninjutsu means Ninjutsu talent! Your old strongman has a small amount of Chakra to investigate, so will the amount of Chakra that can open the Eight Doors Dunjia be too small? If you take off the white eyes of the separation family, they will be useless. There is also no need to emphasize the character and setting. You don't need to emphasize them. This can only be felt by us if you write it in the article. We can't feel the character in your imagination, which only means that your writing is stiff and cannot achieve the effect. Don't finalize the character and tell us about it, just know it yourself. Everyone's reading experience is different. Once you finalize it, and others find that it is different from their own, they will be very uncomfortable and cannot get into it at all. You can definitely read some well-written novels and learn from them.

Chapter 1: I have died so many times, and I am afraid of death after traveling through time. Even if I am not numb, I will not be afraid. My abilities are still weakened, and I don't quite understand emmm.

It's normal for novels to be sloppy, but it should also be about some local scenes that describe daily life. It's really unacceptable to rely on wisdom to get the swagger. I don't know if the author is limited or intentional. Is it really possible for people to imagine the plot of the Chunin Exam where someone hides the sign and then has it stolen while holding it 100% safely? The conversation after meeting the trio in Chapter 82 was really funny. The trio stole the protagonist's sign and humiliated the protagonist. Then the protagonist politely went up to say hello but was kicked back. In the end, he didn't give them a good beating. He let them go without asking for the sign back. The protagonist looked like a wild dog on the roadside that anyone could kick. As a fan novel, most of the supporting characters are original, but they are not capable of shaping the characters well. It is better to copy the characters of the characters in the plot. The protagonist's character is really not suitable for physical skills. He uses so many words to describe the battle, but he is completely incapable of enthusiasm. In summary, it is useless

Chapter 17: The Third War hasn't even started yet, why is Tsunade suffering from hemophobia? In the original work, Tsunade got it after her husband and younger brother died in the battle after the third war, and she suffered from hemophobia. Speechless

There is no sense of immersion at all, just like a primary school composition