Purple Air Fairy Dynasty

I hope the author can handle the relationship between the novel's author, Cao Ruzhong, and the protagonist. After all, reading a novel is about being cool and happy, and there should be no betrayal or white-eyed wolf. Moreover, the protagonist is also involved, and he should have certain benefits or permissions in the spiritual realm formed.

The writing is okay, a bit immature and not sophisticated enough. I have a question. Everyone knows that the Great Ji Immortal Dynasty is going to fall. The prince's talent is not good. There are eight thousand years of royal family and there are tens or millions of people in the clan. Isn't the talent not enough? Does the emperor only have one son? There is a problem with the setting.

I'm speechless when I see the rewards. In the beginning, the mainstay of a dynasty only had 10,000 acres of farmland. But after just one war, you, a vassal state, were rewarded with tens of thousands of acres of farmland. Then when you unify the world, all your generals will have tens or even millions of acres of farmland... The author is totally clueless about rewards.

Why can the shabby house rented by the protagonist be separated by a wall from the top powerful family of the Immortal Dynasty? Even if the Nangong family is a big noble in Chaoge City and flees to the imperial capital, the Nangong family is an important minister of the Immortal Emperor and a top wealthy family. If they flee to the imperial capital, they won't live next door to the protagonist, right? And she is not hiding her name. The legitimate daughter of the Nangong family is still the phoenix girl that all the princes and kings want to marry. Even if her father is gone, she still has a mother and a large family, so she will not live in the slums, right?

Oh my gosh, Baili Dada has released a new book, praise, praise, praise

The indigenous protagonist teaches others to write "Journey to the West"? Is it considered poisonous?

The protagonist always has information gaps and feels like he's been treated like a pig. Everyone has plans for the protagonist, but the protagonist feels very clueless.

I was only in junior high school during the time of Zifu Immortal Fate

I have to give it a try, I've been a fan for a long time, haha

That's it. Three-thirds of the world. No holes are filled. Where is Long Jin, where is her mother? Where are your father and mother from the Yin and Yang Clan? Not to mention the few magic weapons in your hand? Not to mention the demon clan? The stories of the four major continents are no longer written. What you wrote is grand, but the result is nothing. If you can't control it, don't write so many foreshadowings. Even if you write it, don't fill it out. Not bad. It's better than a bad ending. How can an emperor divide the world with others? How do you upgrade to the Tenth Realm Saint? Faint. This is three years of silence. A blockbuster piece, so disappointing.