Douluo: after Awakening the Gu Insect, I Became the Leader of the Evil Soul Master

First of all, this should be your first book. Generally, the data for a novice author's first book is not very good. So I hope you can treat it with a normal mind. You should write this book well and treat it as a practice and test. Don't pay too much attention to the data. Try to write as much of the story as you have in mind (this is, after all, a reflection of your writing skills). Secondly, writing the first book completely can help you find the areas where your writing is prone to "toxicity". I have read a lot of Douluo fan fiction and read many books by authors. Some authors (maybe they just rely on writing for a living) are very concerned about the performance of the book. The first book only has 100,000, 200,000, 200,000, 300,000 words written. Once the performance of the book is not good, they will give up and start a new book. In this way, there will be many poisonous points in the plot that he did not write ("explore") in his first book. As a result, his next book will also be in the exploration stage. The poisonous points that were not explored in the first book will be reflected in his next book. Then comes his next book, and the next book, and even the next book. As long as he doesn't write a complete story in one book, and he doesn't discover the poison in the plot, his books will always be in the exploration (testing) stage. So I hope you can find out all the problems you may encounter when writing this type of book for the price of just one book. Furthermore, system flow articles are not so popular nowadays. After all, everyone has read too many system articles. Many of the cheats in such articles are too unnatural and materials are too easy to obtain, which makes them boring to read. Of course, if you use this book to practice, you should familiarize yourself with it first and learn to gradually reduce the protagonist's dependence on the system. Finally, there is the issue of the female protagonist. Personally, I suggest that Xiaobai start writing with a single female protagonist. After all, if you can't write a single emotional scene well, how can you have a harem? If you want to forcefully close it, you will face two problems: losing your wits and being brainless. Because giving the supporting characters intelligence will destroy the personality of the protagonist you established in the early stage. If you take in too many heroines without any thought, you will become a stallion. I don't mean to give any advice, I just want the author to pay attention to these issues when writing the book.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, at least much better than some hypocritical ones.

Human beings in two lifetimes, childish in nature, reckless and careless

You don't have to use Holy Mother, and eating it directly at the age of 6 is awesome.

Very good, very good, and the content is not poisonous. I hope there will be no interruption in updates.

It's really well written, I'll keep reading.

What a piece of shit, you have to show off in front of Tang Hao in Holy Soul Village

The first one or two were originally quite outrageous, but then I found that they couldn't pass the review, so I had to revise them. I'm sorry, but it's been normal since Chapter 3.

Don't you think there's something wrong with the first one? Awakened the martial spirit just after passing by? What else is there to strangle the neck, the protagonist is very resistant to wearing Douluo? Do you think there is a high probability that you will die? The use of this adjective feels so abrupt. The protagonist's expression is also quite strange. A second ring... It's so easy to die (it's nothing) But the reason why Wuhundian came was because the villagers noticed something was wrong in the woods, that is to say, they saw bones (if they hadn't seen them, the villagers would have been puzzled at first, as they couldn't have found the soul master so quickly, right)? The protagonist doesn't dispose of the skeleton after absorbing it?

Have you ever thought about writing Jagged Golden Centipede?