Establish a Clear Path and Set One's Mind

I haven't read it yet, but the introduction is great. Why isn't it blocked?

The rest is okay, but I feel like the author missed the point. If you don't know what you want to write, or if you don't have a plan, it's just trivial things, and some of them are very illogical, even for those who are cultivating immortals. A master stopped his disciples and gave him some instructions, but there were still people who were curious and guarding the door. And they are not acquaintances. Only acquaintances would care about such things, right? Or ask in the tone of an acquaintance. After all, there is not enough time to practice, how can you have so much free time? So no privacy? Are there any disciples from aristocratic families with such bad minds? There is intrigue, and there is a temple master in an area who has no qualifications to accept disciples at will. Does he have to accept them within the faction of the Aristocratic Family? Funny? Not logical. He is not a tool man. Aren't you afraid of killing the whole family in anger? Or, of course, just ostracize them, tell the subordinates, and it will be enough for them to eat a pot, and it will last for five or six years, hahaha, no matter how talented you are, it will be wasted on him. Without strong interests, who would do this midway? Aren't you indifferent and indifferent even when you are relaxing? Who would pay so much attention to you? It's not a trivial matter among the people. I don't even have enough time to practice, so why do you do this for you? . . Unless you attract other people's attention and have potential, if you don't even have these, what will they do to you? Besides, doesn't Sega also have its own trainees? (The resources are concentrated for training, and the most they can do is earn a few spots. And I only see the bad character of this group of immortal cultivators. Now that society is so indifferent, they will still care about people like you. Now that society is so indifferent, will they still care about people like you who may just be a passing passerby? Take the books you learned from and read them after you practice. "As he said this, Liu Zhiyun took out a book from his sleeve. The title page was yellowed, showing that it was old, and the corners were smooth, showing that the original owner cared for it. Wu Yi's eyes flickered, but he did not forget to take it with both hands. He held the book to his chest and thanked: "Thank you, Master, for the reward." "Go down." Liu Zhiyun waved his fly whisk and said calmly. Wu Yi made a bow, stood up slowly, and went out. I saw Wu Yi being stopped by Liu Zhiyun before, and some disciples deliberately slowed down their pace. Those with sharp ears naturally heard the conversation inside. Now when they saw Wu Yi coming out with a book in his hand, they all had complicated eyes. What's more, some of them looked arrogant and could not hide their sarcasm. Ignoring their gazes, Wu Yi walked out calmly, with a steady walk and an expressionless face, which disappointed some people who were interested in seeing his joke.

The author has worked hard and looks forward to more exciting articles in the future!

I found your book by accident today. Not bad, I'm very satisfied. Give me full marks. Very satisfied.

The writing is good, but I really didn't notice what you said was unconventional. There are a lot of clichés in the whole text, some unclear hatred, some unclear jealousy, it's very baffling, do you know? , Also, I have been in the door for a few days, and I am not in a hurry to practice. It is said that I need to read the rules first, which is okay, but when you look at it, you only watch it for three or two days? You can't see the feeling of blood feud between pig's feet at all. It feels like pig's feet are just adding drama to themselves all day long. What kind of self-righteous calculations are useless? If you can't improve your cultivation, what can you do if you continue to calculate? This is completely different from the world, okay? Qualification cultivation Because it can be said that everything is decided, what conflict points of strategy are really not worth mentioning in front of these two, but I really can't see the author's tension. Moreover, what is Pig's Foot planning? The whole day is to deal with other people's calculations. Also, you yourself said that there is a conflict between the family and the master and apprentice, but you don't explain it clearly? You also don't explain clearly the method of recruiting disciples? In short, one word, useless, two words, useless, and three words, no action. Let the author think about it.

I am currently reading Chapter 190. The first impression the protagonist gives me is not that of high talent or stable mind. My immediate first impression is greed, greed for wealth, greed for the road, and greed for the future. It's not that the writing is not good, but I don't feel that down-to-earth sense. Let's just say that in the chapter I just read, Li Gu's invitation is completely unnecessary in my opinion. Being undisturbed in Shige can be said to be the best opportunity to enrich yourself. Isn't it a small loss for not having enough experience? It always felt like there was a whip forcing him to take various shortcuts, but he just couldn't go up step by step.

Sorry for the readers who have been following the update.

After reading dozens of chapters, it's still trivial and doesn't look like a cultivator at all.

. . . . . . . . . . .

I just saw a few very good ones. People's hearts are sinister, world affairs are unpredictable, and there are all kinds of calculations.