
Perfect World: the Happy Emperor
by Loose Cultivator In The World Of Mortals
About This Novel
(The new book "Douluo: Starting from Tianshui Academy" is welcome to make an appointment. (The new book "Dou Po: Emperor of Chaos" has been released. Welcome to make an appointment.) An Lan: "The top of the immortals, proud of the world!... You! You! Don't come over!" Dark Quasi-Immortal Emperor: "Young man! Everything is easy to discuss. Can you put down the sword in your hand first?" Dark Immortal Emperor: "Young man! You don't have martial ethics, come here to cheat, come to sneak attack on me, a crippled old man!" The Ten Weird Ancestors: "The Great Red-Haired Emperor! Save me quickly, save me quickly!..." The Red-Haired Emperor: "Sorry! I'm at a loss and can't do anything!" A time-traveler arrives in the perfect world, transforms into the biggest street kid in the world, and plays with things of eternity.
What Readers Think
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Official(306)Scraped 4d ago
Give me some advice
The book is indeed very good, but I found that the current fan fiction basically has the same mistake. Let's take your book as an example [The protagonist of this book is not Shi Hao, there is no need to give him and his woman so many scenes, and the protagonist does not need to follow the plot, the protagonist can go his own way] For example, some readers read fan fiction just to make up for their regrets. For example, if a certain heroine has a tragic ending, they are just for that In order to rewrite this ending, instead of like you, the protagonist you wrote is Xiaoxiao, but there are many scenes between Shi Hao and his woman in the work. For example, if you are reading a fanfic, the protagonist obviously does not accept the woman, but the author has more scenes than that woman, or praises her, how beautiful that woman is, how tragic the ending is, and then helps him rewrite the ending, but does not accept it, and then gives her away. Don't you feel uncomfortable watching it? I read a Naruto fanfic before, and the score was very low. The biggest poisonous point is that he described how beautiful Kurenai Yuhi is, but then refused to accept it, and gave Kurenai Yuhi a lot of drama. In the finale, there was a line about Asuma and Kurenai being resurrected, and Kurenai was pregnant with Asma's child, so what's the point of writing this? This woman was given so many scenes, but she refused to take them. You have to admit that some readers just hate this kind of writing, and most of them. In short, it's just one sentence. If it's not the protagonist, there's no need to give him so many scenes.
garbage
It's a little bit bad. Are all the current authors exhausted? Why are they becoming more and more popular as they get hotter? There aren't many in the fandom who can write good books.
I don't agree with Yue Chan, Huo Ling'er, Yun Xi
You all said earlier that Yun Xi, Huo Ling'er and Yue Chan should be taken away. I don't agree with this, because Shi Hao has his own path, and these people are his key figures, so they can't be taken in. Later, I also mentioned that Shi Hao's path must not be broken, otherwise he will not be able to become the Huangtian Emperor, understand? I also like reading this novel. I hope the author will update it more.
A novel about licking the pig's trotters in the original novel. Haha, if you are popular, you are considered awesome.
You can directly change into the nanny of Huangtiandi
It's not interesting to see your profile, and it's not interesting to follow the protagonist!
It's too intellectual, I can't stand it anymore, I feel like there's something wrong with them all
I really like this book. Great support for the author.
A very good book. This book is not as depressing as the original work due to too much killing, and the characters in it almost all laugh because of the protagonist. This is a very sharp contrast with the original work, and the author has given many characters a very happy ending, which has changed a lot of things. It no longer makes people feel sad, but it is very refreshing and happy to read. In a perfect world fanfiction this book is really great but still has few flaws. Come on, author, I'm sure your next book will cost money or not, hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Who are the heroines? Willow God. Ruthless Man. Female War Goddess. Do you still have any pollen?
Approximately how many words will it take to finish the book? Hehehe
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Community(0)
Official(306)Scraped 4d ago
Give me some advice
The book is indeed very good, but I found that the current fan fiction basically has the same mistake. Let's take your book as an example [The protagonist of this book is not Shi Hao, there is no need to give him and his woman so many scenes, and the protagonist does not need to follow the plot, the protagonist can go his own way] For example, some readers read fan fiction just to make up for their regrets. For example, if a certain heroine has a tragic ending, they are just for that In order to rewrite this ending, instead of like you, the protagonist you wrote is Xiaoxiao, but there are many scenes between Shi Hao and his woman in the work. For example, if you are reading a fanfic, the protagonist obviously does not accept the woman, but the author has more scenes than that woman, or praises her, how beautiful that woman is, how tragic the ending is, and then helps him rewrite the ending, but does not accept it, and then gives her away. Don't you feel uncomfortable watching it? I read a Naruto fanfic before, and the score was very low. The biggest poisonous point is that he described how beautiful Kurenai Yuhi is, but then refused to accept it, and gave Kurenai Yuhi a lot of drama. In the finale, there was a line about Asuma and Kurenai being resurrected, and Kurenai was pregnant with Asma's child, so what's the point of writing this? This woman was given so many scenes, but she refused to take them. You have to admit that some readers just hate this kind of writing, and most of them. In short, it's just one sentence. If it's not the protagonist, there's no need to give him so many scenes.
garbage
It's a little bit bad. Are all the current authors exhausted? Why are they becoming more and more popular as they get hotter? There aren't many in the fandom who can write good books.
I don't agree with Yue Chan, Huo Ling'er, Yun Xi
You all said earlier that Yun Xi, Huo Ling'er and Yue Chan should be taken away. I don't agree with this, because Shi Hao has his own path, and these people are his key figures, so they can't be taken in. Later, I also mentioned that Shi Hao's path must not be broken, otherwise he will not be able to become the Huangtian Emperor, understand? I also like reading this novel. I hope the author will update it more.
A novel about licking the pig's trotters in the original novel. Haha, if you are popular, you are considered awesome.
You can directly change into the nanny of Huangtiandi
It's not interesting to see your profile, and it's not interesting to follow the protagonist!
It's too intellectual, I can't stand it anymore, I feel like there's something wrong with them all
I really like this book. Great support for the author.
A very good book. This book is not as depressing as the original work due to too much killing, and the characters in it almost all laugh because of the protagonist. This is a very sharp contrast with the original work, and the author has given many characters a very happy ending, which has changed a lot of things. It no longer makes people feel sad, but it is very refreshing and happy to read. In a perfect world fanfiction this book is really great but still has few flaws. Come on, author, I'm sure your next book will cost money or not, hahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Who are the heroines? Willow God. Ruthless Man. Female War Goddess. Do you still have any pollen?
Approximately how many words will it take to finish the book? Hehehe










