Pirate's Soul Fruit

On the one hand, the writing style is on the other hand, the protagonist is too weak, to the point of being weak. He has not much talent, and the ability to develop fruits is not strong. The protagonist has directly become a support. It is written like this, which is very disappointing. Not to mention how strong the talent can be, but it cannot be so weak, which makes people feel tired. To write a good book, it needs to have a complete setting. The protagonist cannot be written as a weak character, and people must see growth in improving their strength. After reading more than 40 chapters, I am still confused about the strength of the protagonist. The writing is too vague, and there is basically no way to make it strong. Moreover, the setting is still very incomplete, and there is no concept of what the strength has reached. In summary, the settings need to be improved: the power system (not to mention the early, middle and late general peaks like some other fans exaggerate... But we also need to give readers a sense of strength) Protagonist's role: Although it seems that every chapter has a protagonist, a supporting character's various descriptions are better than that of the protagonist. A supporting character is innocent and simple, has good talent, strength, and a good personality. The protagonist has a cowardly character, and I don't see any other advantages. The supporting role has a clearer positioning than the protagonist. It would be really bad if the readers of the book feel that the supporting characters are better than the protagonist. There are also goals, what exactly the protagonist wants to do, what he wants to accomplish, and how hard he wants to work hard, so that readers can have expectations for the protagonist. Looking forward to this book

I suggest that in the later stage, you can imitate the elementalization of the natural system, spiritualize yourself, and transform yourself into the spiritual world of others. You can divide your spirit into thousands of parts, and you can inhabit different people's bodies, everywhere.

If it hadn't always been written in the first person, I would have thought that fat man was the protagonist. What a fucking loser.

Cole is the protagonist, right? We keep talking about Cole's progress, but the protagonist's physique has only improved a little bit? Is it reasonable? After practicing for so long, there are still fruits to enhance the physical fitness, which is almost the same if Cole is a little weaker. Then the fruit of my heart developed, and after three years, I still haven't had a chance. It's like lj. It's my first time to write a book, so don't be indifferent. The protagonist is so good, and the conditions are so good, even a pig can go to heaven.

Why did the sacred tree become the male protagonist's sister? I was immediately confused when I saw this. Am I not strong enough? ? ? A sacred tree that's hundreds of years old has seen the vicissitudes of the sea, and has seen generations of people grow old, sick, and die. Will you recognize a teenage baby like you and call him brother? ? (Compared to the sacred tree), written like a loli with the intelligence of only four years old ... I really... Is my poison resistance not high enough?

The protagonist's desire is a woman? ? It makes me sick to my stomach. People still write about stallions now? If you don't know how to write, don't write. Bah, bah, bah, it's really eye-catching.

The soul is faith, the soul is the mind, develop the Kingdom of God in the soul, I am the world, and whatever is said within the scope of the Kingdom of God will follow. The heart is the heart and the soul is sincere. If I am sincere to the sword, the sword will cut down all things. The sword will be innumerable. The mind is the soul. If the mind is not destroyed, the soul will not be destroyed. I am immortal. When the heart moves, the heart moves and the mind moves. All things follow my heart, and I control all things.

Written more closely to the real feeling

It is said to be a spiritual fruit, but the development has nothing to do with the soul. I want to go to sea and protect the island. Brother, were you an adult when you traveled through time? You can't even think anymore? On the one hand, he wants to become stronger, but on the other hand, he has low self-esteem. Don't you think the author feels conflicted? On the one hand, he wants the protagonist to be powerful, but on the other hand, he doesn't want him to be too defiant. I feel forced to explain.

You can refer to the prehistoric guide, Zhunti, and the Kingdom of Buddha in the palm of your hand Or the devil in the heart of Taoism There is also a virtual space It can also materialize things in dreams. There are also illusions that can invade other people's dreams, such as Inception. If you have deprived yourself of your five senses, then the Kurama clan in Naruto are also very powerful! These regular devil fruits are very scary.