Doctor Fate in Marvel
by Writertlabg2
About This Novel
What would happen if a time traveler with amnesia became Doctor Destiny and came to Marvel? (Please note that this novel contains some plots from the Avengers animation. Readers who have not watched the Avengers animation please do not think that I am making it up)
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Official(3)Scraped 2mo ago
Good subject matter has been written by you🐶💩.
How about changing it to third person?
The plot is dry
Every dialogue and behavior of the character must conform to and reflect the character setting and action logic, and cannot simply push the main line. Looking at it now, all the characters seem to be tool people in the main plot. They do and say whatever the plot is, and there is no sense of reality. In addition, use whatever punctuation marks you need, and the broken sentences are really uncomfortable.
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Official(3)Scraped 2mo ago
Good subject matter has been written by you🐶💩.
How about changing it to third person?
The plot is dry
Every dialogue and behavior of the character must conform to and reflect the character setting and action logic, and cannot simply push the main line. Looking at it now, all the characters seem to be tool people in the main plot. They do and say whatever the plot is, and there is no sense of reality. In addition, use whatever punctuation marks you need, and the broken sentences are really uncomfortable.
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