Strange Recovery: I Can See the Script of Life

The minor characters can be described in more detail, but there is no need to be so detailed. The main plot has been seriously delayed. One or two pages describing the minor characters will suffice.

Water experience, water experience, water experience, water experience, water experience, water experience.

First, the insertion position of each short paragraph of the story is not appropriate. For example, the story about Ma Hongjun is just looking at one thing from two perspectives. You can just narrate it in flashback, there is no need to intersperse it. Inserting it halfway seems to be confusing, which greatly affects the reading experience. What's more, if you insert it in sections, you can either write it in two parts, with the main story first and then the memories, or you can insert it in the middle and finish it all at once, without any flashbacks. Second, clarify the main line. The protagonist is the protagonist. Even if each small story has a different protagonist, it is only the protagonist of each small story. For this book, Luo Yang is the protagonist, just like the novel in which the protagonist trades with others. No matter how each story describes that person, the protagonist will never be ignored. It is also like a game. Only after completing the main line can you proceed to the side tasks. Don't switch to the side tasks (accessory perspective) before the main line is completed (you are the protagonist here who has not finished the plot).

Why can't we ask Li Jun for the plot of "The Widow"?

It's scary. It's more like a cool novel. Some parts feel too detailed and it's not good. It could be simplified. The description of the atmosphere is great.

The plot in The Widow is called Teammates and Li Jun. It is a two-star plot, and it is definitely less dangerous than the three-star plot here. I don't know if the author is overestimating the word count?

The plot is good, but there are too many foreshadowings. In addition, the time in the book is so short that it feels like time will never pass! I've read more than 200 chapters and it hasn't even been a month. If you were to write a story that spanned a year, it would require thousands of chapters. The storyline and subject matter are both very good.

It's really well written. I beg the author to update it quickly.

It's worse than me being able to check character attributes. I even doubt that you wrote it alone.

I'm reading a novel here, but you've been telling me a few chapters of the story. Their story is not as important as the main plot. Don't be like Chen Xiao's version of the divine eagle. I'm bored to death. Half of the time, I'm just reminiscing and telling the story.