Douluo: from Writing Diaries to Becoming the Mastermind Behind the Scenes

To be honest, this kind of behind-the-scenes diary flow, the plot is too confusing. I suggest to the author that you change your approach to this kind of behind-the-scenes flow. Seriously, it's so messy, you might as well switch to an anti-routine diary flow. Others call them goddess wives in their awakening diary novels, but you do the opposite. Others regard the goddess as a treasure, but when you see the goddess, you wish you could stay away from her as if you were avoiding the god of death. Avoid getting angry and causing death to yourself. Others complained about how hypocritical Tang San's master and apprentice were, and then they attacked the goddess and opened a harem. You do the opposite. In turn, he complained about the goddess's mindless and coquettish operation. Many goddesses like Bibi Dong, Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Ah Yin, Zhu Zhuqing, Hu Lina, Qian Renxue, Huo Wu, etc. Especially Xiao Wu and Hu Liena. Bibi Dong, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, Qian Renxue, and A Yin all have mindless settings. For example, the final boss is set to be God Shura. In order to become stronger, the protagonist frantically complains about the operations of the goddesses in the diary, and then avoids the goddesses. Slowly developing. After the protagonist became invincible, he found that all the goddesses in Douluo fell in love with him. The protagonist is trying to survive. Fleeing like crazy. Hide from the goddess. Avoid being noticed by Shura God and erasing yourself. After becoming invincible, he found that all the girls fell in love with him. This kind of plot must be very interesting, after all, most Douluo Diary streams start with calling my wife. There is no such anti-routine diary author, why don't you give it a try? Anti-routine diary flow.

He licked Ning Rongrong from the beginning, but what if Zhu Zhuqing did it? Why did you agree? So what if Dugu Bo agreed? Don't forget one thing, your character has been reincarnated n times.

When writing about Dou Yi, write about Dou Yi carefully, and you must write about Dou Er people in a messy way.

Why, the flow of the mastermind behind the scenes was so good at the beginning, why did he have to break in? Tang San has yet to break in, and the writing is very good, but he has to add superfluous things.

***What nonsense are you going to cause a chaos in all realms like this? I'm speechless after Douluo Star Will came out. The key is that it can also send super artifacts/upgrade martial arts/shield the divine world/can also restart! 666

***Written randomly, don't read it if you don't have any brains.

The writing is so fucking messy, and the 12 talismans and the Holy Lord were brought over. When writing about Douluo, just write about animals. How can I bring in other planes, and also bring in those people from 10,000 and 20,000 years later? Even Tang San, a dog, turned into a god. The future has been brought back. This is so fucking messy. The bosses in the lower world, Tang Hao, Hao Tianzong and others plus Tang Chen, and then the God Realm Tang San, Sea God, Shura God, etc., Killed them all, and then the abyss plane came early. This is almost the same.

Can you figure out the difference in strength? It feels like the power of each plane is very chaotic. Anyway, I don't understand

I personally feel that the protagonist should not accept Tang Wulin as his apprentice. As the saying goes, one day becomes a teacher. A father for life. Holding Fang Tian Hua Ji, isn't it just to stab the protagonist himself? And this Tang Wulin doesn't seem to have received the script for becoming a god. I feel like I can move my hands and feet from here. Let Tang Wulin worship the Tang God King and find an opportunity to use Fang Tian's painted halberd to blast the Tang God King's chrysanthemum. There is also Xiao Wu looking for revenge against Bibi Dong. I personally don't think it's necessary. If you remember well, this rabbit charm. It seems that he can travel through time and space. Go back in time. In "The Adventures of Jackie Chan", Xiaoyu took the rabbit with the rabbit charm and traveled directly to Valon's boyhood. Also, the plot is nice to watch, but it's a bit mind-numbing and very headache-inducing. The plot is too confusing. It's a headache to watch.

Come on, author, this book is so beautiful.