Douluo: I, Tang Wulin, a Kamen Rider

The latest chapters are really difficult to comment on, they are a bit overwhelming. 🍬50 Rushed into the enemy's lair without preparation and was beaten by others🤐

There are not so many b-things in the original work. The things that were mentioned in one sentence are covered in seven or eight chapters. This writing makes me feel uncomfortable. The cumbersome words and the fluctuating combat power are not enough to stress the combat power. Then why after three volumes, the combat power is not overpowering. Do you want to strengthen the protagonist? Then why don't you go out to Di Tian and fight the Soul Emperor to bring the protagonist to climax? If you are still deflated, then strengthen it for seconds. Then it is not overwhelming the combat power. Otherwise, it must be strengthened, and you have to break through in the battle. You are here and it is not special photography. We want to see the battle be fun and crush it all the way.

Daqin Temple: Fei Yuzhen, is this the only amount of awareness you carry? Kamijou Daichi: Hiba Makoto, your little strength can't protect you at all. Onoe Ryo: Hiba Makoto, saving humanity is not what novelists should do Fuga Palace Sage: Feiyu Zhen, I want to seal your holy sword Rintaro: Hiba Makoto, you keep saying that you can't do it, I don't know Dashan: Fei Yuzhen, I will destroy the world Lao Wu: Fei Yuzhen, that's enough. Admit it. Admit that you can't create anything. You can't write a new story at all. Fei Yuzhen: I will decide the final outcome of the story

Dear author, I have an idea to find Tang Wulin from various parallel universes and turn their power into books. In this way, it not only pays tribute to our little brother Ming, but also benefits Tang Wulin. Why not do it?

The last few chapters have been so difficult. I thought it was just showing off, but it turned out to be a failure🤗. You can even get injured and kill the opponent in the end. Then Gu Yue got involved again, and then the villain had too many words and they were repetitive. Then I saw the explosion😋. You can make the villain talk less. Even if you want to ridicule and anger the protagonist, you can use some different words🤗

False Protagonist: Tang Wulin It has explosive values and powerful mechanics, but it is always difficult to kill the enemy. He has no ambition and is not interested in improving his strength. He basically rests on his laurels when it comes to moves. He only figures out what to do when he is frustrated, and he still lives his life as he wants afterwards. When fighting, he is like a man-machine. When his teammates are not strong enough, he will use a large number of moves at the beginning, causing him to lose combat effectiveness in a short period of time, and easily reverse the situation (referring to turning an advantage into a disadvantage). He was easily aroused by the villain's emotions. When the opponent was holding hostages, they had to inflict an unknown environmental damage. As a result, when they were about to rescue the hostages, they were tricked by the opponent, causing the hostages to die in the magma created by the protagonist. Even when the protagonist's attack hit the enemy, the enemy was not found to cause trouble. The real protagonist: Dark Blood Demon Even if the opponent appears to be weak, he will use his clone to trick him first. As a strong man in the mainland, not only does he not have the arrogance of a strong man, but he also has a broad mind. Even if he was killed by a fledgling rookie, he didn't feel angry or humiliated. Instead, he used words to persuade him, intending to use words to shake the protagonist's will. He is good at making comebacks and can quickly come up with strategies and reverse the situation when the situation is not favorable to him. He didn't make excuses for himself when he was defeated by a group of weaklings. Instead, he lamented that "there are countless heroes in the world." He is good at taking advantage of the opponent's character weaknesses, directly grabbing hostages, and holding them hostage so that the opponent cannot use his full strength. Break through in the battle, have strong survival ability, and be able to survive when the opponent's numerical value is much higher than your own, and look for opportunities to counterattack. When his only advantage, resilience, was blocked and he faced the threat of death, he only panicked for a while, adjusted his mentality, looked for the possibility of breaking the situation, and tried to fight back again. Summary: In terms of numerical values, compared with the villain, the protagonist is basically crushed, and the villain is even almost defeated. But in battle, the villain frequently comes up with clever tricks and is good at seizing the glimmer of hope for victory in desperate situations. The protagonist is like a man-machine, easily giving away the hope of victory to others. Suggestion: It is better to just let the Dark Blood Demon take over the protagonist's body. The Dark Blood Demon will do better than the protagonist if he takes over the protagonist's body. It's better to just change the protagonist and become a villainous knight. The title of the book should be changed to "Douluo: Tang Wulin, a Passing Bad Knight".

You will not be a eunuch just like the author writes in this book. Is it an agreement? . . . . . . . . . . . . . Hearing this, Tang Wulin was slightly startled. On the other side, Ye Xinglan continued to speak. "I don't care how strong your future forging is, but are you worthy of us readers who follow you?" "The story is not over yet, but you, the author, want to give it up first. Is this really okay with you?" Tang Wulin fell silent as he listened to Ye Xinglan's words. In his mind, he couldn't help but think of the cordial relationship with Na'er in the past, as well as the agreement between the two. After half a sound, Ye Xinglan also stopped the firepower output after seeming to notice the silence of the other half. "Hello? Why don't you speak anymore? Are you still there?" When Ye Xinglan asked this question, Tang Wulin woke up from his memories. "Yes, still there." Looking at the thumb in front of him that was hooking up with Na'er on the beach, Tang Wulin responded with a hoarse tone. On the other side, Ye Xinglan didn't seem to notice the difference in Tang Wulin's tone, and just asked himself. "So what are your thoughts now? Are you really going to end it? Or will you continue to update after taking a break? " Regarding Ye Xinglan's question, Tang Wulin, who was still remorseful in his heart, naturally did not hesitate at all. "More!" "If that's the case, then you should at least... Huh?" Ye Xinglan, who was halfway through speaking, suddenly realized that Tang Wulin seemed to have said that he wanted to continue updating? Here, although Ye Xinglan didn't react, Tang Wulin was minding his own business. "Update, I will update today, and from now on, I will keep updating and complete the submission! I will not stop updating until the story is finished!" "This is the agreement between you and me!

It makes sense that the Combat Dragon can kill Ditian, since he is the ultimate form after all. The Emperor Dragon Armor can shatter the planet. BattleBlastmon beats Emperordramon.

The main character is already in his teens and yet he insists on being written as a boy and girl, which is totally disgusting. Is there no other way to make money? Your metal forging is very profitable and you have to write novels. Even if you write novels, you still have to write that your readers are all important heroines and supporting actresses, and there are always offline realities threatening you to write novels well. You always say that you need to work hard to get strong strength to protect your family, but you always write novels and delay how to gain strength through cultivation. If you have the time and readers, why don't you practice more and forge more with real offline skills? The protagonist has a lot of mysterious behaviors.

So far, the content of the last dozen or so pictures is really a mess. The author is yy Have you become an evil soul master? It's so fucking disgusting. I've never seen such a disgusting plot. What's the writing? A sidekick is killed so many times and he doesn't die. Why don't you change him into the protagonist? The original novel is not like you. He keeps being resurrected. Why not just kill the protagonist? What's the writing? The plot is exciting but not exciting at the same time. It keeps suppressing the combat power. Just look at the background of Dou San. If the goat comes, it will kill you. If you can't beat it, you can't beat it. It has exploded so many times. I'll give you candy. If you write it like you, you can write so many pictures for a walk-on. You can't write it 1,000 times until the ending, and you can be resurrected 10,000 times.