The Holy Grail War Has Been Broken Through, and You Still Say It's the Dragon Clan?

It's embarrassing that the protagonist doesn't have the concept of dragons

Except for the protagonist's IQ, which seems to be okay, after so many photos, I still can't tell that it's not the world of Xingyue.

This book is still worth reading. For now, it is not a nanny style. The plot has been greatly changed. It is not the kind of book that just follows the original text and just adds a random person. It is the same whether it has a protagonist or not. Perhaps for some reason, the connection between the Dragon Clan and Xingyue went very smoothly. A cloud player like me can't see any problem at all. The comment section is all: "We meet again." "Which Lostbelt is this?" "Who dares to say this is not Xingyue?" The protagonist is a template for the Emiya Giant. He is not a literary person, has clear goals, does not engage in abstract and brainless actions, and has no obvious fighting power. As for the battle scene, what should I say? Gee, there is a little problem, but it's not a big problem. It's still very high-quality. At least it's better than someone else. The disadvantage is that some original fans may not be able to accept it, because the changes are, well, really big. It can be said that it has changed beyond recognition, and there is no obvious sense of literary youth, so some people may not like it very much. Anyway, I quite like it. I can't stand those who are weak and whining, and then don't do it when they clearly can, and then regret it when they can't do it. It's just hypocritical. Oh, by the way, another point is that the author's explanation in some places is not very detailed, but you can basically understand it by reading the comment area. Even a cloud player like me can understand it, but it still needs to be thought about.

The author's level is there, not much, but barely enough. Unfortunately, the ideas are clear and unusual. In addition, I have a deep prejudice against the character Chen Motong. I know that I hold a prejudice, but if I don't like it, I don't like it, and I don't want to change it. So when Chen Motong appears, this book will be finished for me.

After reading a few chapters, the setting was okay, but there was a sense of detachment and I couldn't really immerse myself in the novel.

It's a good idea, but the original work is from Fate's anime, and the little devil also used a chrysanthemum shield. If you want to write, you have to take this into consideration. At least come up with a setting to explain it.

Nuwa, also has titles such as Wa Huang, Ling Wa, Di Wa, Feng Huang, Nu Yin, Empress, Empress, Nu Xi, Goddess, Yin Emperor, Yin Emperor, Emperor Daughter, etc. According to historical records, Nuwa's surname is Feng (or Feng, Nu, or Yun), and she is the mother of the earth in ancient legends. --Baidu Encyclopedia I've searched on Baidu several times, but I haven't seen any related descendants of Nuwa with the surname Zhou.

Is it easy to write or not? Write about a small day, that's all

WowThe cover has been changed. It seems not as good as the original one.

It's very well written, I hope I can continue writing it and don't let it end unfinished!