Tianying

The author, I can't get enough of your works. I am obsessed with your words. Although this is just an ordinary text, it becomes lovely because of you. Your writing is so delicate, and your content is so compact and dynamic. The author is really great.

Such a dynamic work can only be written by the author's pen. When I opened the pages of the book and tasted them one by one, the beautiful and connotative content was profound and inseparable from my eyes. I felt honored to read the author's book because you feasted my eyes.

I think your quality only goes so far. At the very least, you have to be worthy of the consumers who pay to read your books. You can't even show the most basic respect. I despise you👎

Regardless of the quality of the book, let's talk about your recent attitude. You are a writer, and since you have serialized a book, you must be worthy of your readers. Forget about asking for leave every three days because of family matters. Shouldn't studying abroad be something you do only after completing the amount of updates you should complete? Yes, you are now famous because of Zhu Xian, and you have your own certain readership. You no longer need to rely on updates to exchange traffic, but which author doesn't save articles first if something happens and he can't write, so as not to delay normal updates. Regardless of the quality of your book, based on this, you are not professional enough. Don't you regard writing as a writer as your first career, so that you can write good books?

It was very attractive when I first read it. The author's writing style is wonderful and delicate, the characters and psychological activities are described in detail, and the background description is exquisite and detailed. But after reading it for a long time, I felt that these descriptions were too repetitive, cumbersome, protracted, and took up space. The plot of the story develops slowly, or even not at all. The whole article is full of these descriptions, which are no longer attractive. Looking at the intuition, it has become a hypnosis book before going to bed.

Every day I either ask for leave or write another chapter. The number of words in each chapter is so few. I have already written seven or eight hundred chapters. How many words does this book only have? For an author who is about to be eliminated by the times, I don't know why there are still people coming to clean him up. Those rubbish things I wrote before, Zhu Xian? Now it's at the level of a third-rate novel. Not only has this scumbag author failed to improve his writing skills, but the content of the shabby novels he writes now is too slow and slow to update. He's also so arrogant that he asks for leave every day. I'm speechless.

This is a work with a very personal style, which is different from the normal Internet articles. It has a clear cheat code and main plot. The main line of this story seems to be very vague until the end of the story, which makes people feel sad that "this is the end". At the same time, in the entire narrative process of the story, the descriptive part accounts for a large proportion. Except for the redundancy caused by some authors who are not suitable for online writing, most of the words are used to describe the undercurrents that need people to think about. The author's update speed also leaves enough time for readers who follow the update to scrutinize the clues behind each incident, to judge whether the characters appearing are evil, and to see through the true meaning of the author's intention to express. Therefore, people who like this story will enjoy the reading process; people who don't like it will feel that it is full of nonsense and abandon the article in anger. The whole story begins with an undercover and a murder, leading to a very calm protagonist. The word "calm" seems a bit strange, but from the lines we can indeed see the image of a character who has experienced blood and fire, and suffered between life and death. Although he can eat a lot of meat and drink a lot of wine, he usually exchanges his meager salary for physical pleasure. But every time he opened the door to go home, there would always be a gray grass stem quietly floating down. Lu Chen will face those people whose strength and status are far superior to him with an indifferent attitude. He will find a way to live well in the most difficult predicament. He will endure humiliation and bear the burden for several years for a belief. He will be angry and become a beauty regardless of it... No label can be used to define him, and no label can completely define him. Lu Chen, just Lu Chen. To be fair, most people probably don't like the style of this story. Because there are too many complicated entanglements and grievances hidden under the surface plot, and there are also many far-reaching plans, which makes people feel a little distressed. The first three volumes and the beginning of the fourth volume are generally very comfortable to watch, but as the fourth volume gets longer and longer, there are more and more maps and foreshadowings. Many readers are gradually unable to grasp the main line of the story, and the author seems to be somewhat powerless. This probably directly led to the accelerated pace of the story at the end, the sudden ending, and the many disappointed messages from fans. There are many distinctive characters in this story, some of which make people care for a long time, some make people gnash their teeth, or make people sigh that everyone has their own destiny... Thinking about it carefully, you can't help but feel disappointed. This is probably Tianying, a story in which the process is more important than the ending.

Dripping hole, Live and die together. I am a fool in this life! Xiaochi Town, Who can complain about the melancholy? Ring the golden bell, Look at the moon platform. The farewell at the foot of Huqi Mountain, What year is it today? Killing Immortal Sword, Heartless and unjust. Arrogant and sentimental! Live your life for love and die first, Ten years of love and ten years of hate. How deeply affectionate, Why can't it go away? A broken corner. Where is the green clothes? Dear, is the lyrics I wrote great? Haha, after watching Zhu Xian, I was moved by Baguio!

I would like to ask Xiao Dada, whether the previous traps in the work have been sold, the reason why the southern barbarian Black Fire tribe appears in the work, and how all the traps and plots such as the Snowy Mountains, Sirius, and Lao Ma are arranged. I have been reading your book, and I feel that you really lack that kind of passion now. It may be due to various reasons, but I always feel that you don't want to continue writing this book.

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