Chainsaw Man: I Am Not My Brother the Devil

A lot of nonsense, a lot of short compositions, and a lot of second-guessing!

I have read more than half of this book, and I am only commenting because I can't stand it anymore. The previous plot is okay, but the chapter about the Fire Demon is really ugly, and it's all nonsense. There is also the chapter about the Eternal Demon. I feel like I am just reading the original plot. The author said that because he likes Denji as a character, he doesn't want to be upstaged by the protagonist. Head, but the role of the protagonist in this chapter is completely a narration. Not only has the plot not changed at all, but there is no outstanding plot, Denji still kills the eternal demon. I don't know what the author's purpose is in publishing this chapter. It has nothing to do with the rest of the chapter and it is a waste of readers' time, so the protagonist gains the ability of the eternal demon. The Machima in the middle was chatting with the protagonist in front of the convenience store, and suddenly said, are you looking for the meaning of life? Then Jiligulu said a lot, but I didn't understand a bit of it. There was no foreshadowing in the previous question and there was no specific follow-up content in the following sentence. Later, the protagonist used the 10 million bet to let Xiaohong go to college. Anyway, the plot was very awkward and there was no emotional line at all. Then the protagonist and Jiye did that kind of thing in the back of the car, and was discovered by Xiaohong who was driving. This kind of tauren is like the author opening your mouth and feeding si into your mouth. I would have given it three stars without this paragraph. This article has nothing to do with the introduction of the article. Makima gave very little plot. The protagonist obviously has the ability to obtain other demons, but it makes people look useless. Originally, the protagonist and Makima negotiated to join the police, but later the protagonist said that he wanted to gain strength and regain freedom to get rid of Makima. The summary of the article is: there are many flaws, few emotional lines, the protagonist looks useless, and there are many original text paragraphs in some places, which makes people watch Chainsaw Man again. If the author writes pure and refreshing articles, or describes the emotional lines in more details, some of the flaws can be covered up. The author has these abilities. You can see from the early stage of the article that this article is only suitable for those who are new to fanfiction.

Can it be updated? It's still very beautiful.

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