Cultivation of Immortality Starts from Jiweijinmen
About This Novel
Eight years of troubled times, with oppression by foreign powers and warlords fighting internally. The country is in chaos, and the country is destitute of its people. A modern man came here, and from then on there was a wonderful person in the world. He is a humorous and knowledgeable teacher in the eyes of female students; In the eyes of readers, he is a master of martial arts who writes freely and freely; In the eyes of the suffering master, he is an expert who saves the suffering and has unparalleled miraculous skills; He is a regular guest in the Marshal's house; Later they realized that it was not him, because he was the number one immortal here!
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Official(35)Scraped 11d ago
Does the author think that readers like the silly Zhu who fills the courtyard very much, with the same widow, mean mother-in-law, and child who steals food? Anyway, I don't understand the meaning of writing this widow at all. How does it promote the plot? It's annoying to watch. The first step is to sort out the relationship. Later, I have made more than 100 yuan, and I am fully capable of renting a clean private courtyard. I have to write a conflict between two women meeting each other, and the plot is the same as Qinman Siheyuan. Does the author think that we readers are not enough?
What special hobbies does the author have?
It's just that I can't get along with the widow. If I don't want to be trapped by the love between my children, just talk it out. Everyone goes his own way. It's always sticky. Can't you be more decisive?
good
If you don't want the heroine, then don't write it in a casual way. It's boring to read.
Give some encouragement
Although I think your writing is quite life-like, why don't you write about widows every day? Take out the protagonists from the pile of women, especially the two widows, otherwise it will basically be unfinished. There is no other possibility, because if you can't get it out in the early stage, you won't be able to write a protagonist who is dedicated to cultivating immortals in the later stage, unless you want to write the article as "the daily life of me and the ladies of the Republic of China." The above is the opinion of an old bookworm for more than ten years.
Abusing good people
The content is okay, but don't make the protagonist a bad guy. You should know the truth of making a common man innocent and guilty of having a treasure. You will inevitably kill people and seize the treasure later! Below Everyone pay attention to epidemic prevention! 🤞🤞🤞
So-so
The plot and story concept are very good, but the wrong names are often written, and strings are often written. Doesn't the author review them before sending them out?
A cultivator is entangled with a widow, still like Qin Huairu
It seems that during the Republic of China, per capita wages started at hundreds of thousands.
Do you want to check the information yourself? Do you know the exchange rate between ocean and banknotes? The opening price is dozens or hundreds of ocean dollars. At that time, a normal restaurant owner only made 8-12 ocean dollars a year.
Don't blame me.
The plot and writing are both good. I just can't accept it at all. I feel disgusted by the female aspect.
No, the theme is good, it would be better if those women were removed
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Official(35)Scraped 11d ago
Does the author think that readers like the silly Zhu who fills the courtyard very much, with the same widow, mean mother-in-law, and child who steals food? Anyway, I don't understand the meaning of writing this widow at all. How does it promote the plot? It's annoying to watch. The first step is to sort out the relationship. Later, I have made more than 100 yuan, and I am fully capable of renting a clean private courtyard. I have to write a conflict between two women meeting each other, and the plot is the same as Qinman Siheyuan. Does the author think that we readers are not enough?
What special hobbies does the author have?
It's just that I can't get along with the widow. If I don't want to be trapped by the love between my children, just talk it out. Everyone goes his own way. It's always sticky. Can't you be more decisive?
good
If you don't want the heroine, then don't write it in a casual way. It's boring to read.
Give some encouragement
Although I think your writing is quite life-like, why don't you write about widows every day? Take out the protagonists from the pile of women, especially the two widows, otherwise it will basically be unfinished. There is no other possibility, because if you can't get it out in the early stage, you won't be able to write a protagonist who is dedicated to cultivating immortals in the later stage, unless you want to write the article as "the daily life of me and the ladies of the Republic of China." The above is the opinion of an old bookworm for more than ten years.
Abusing good people
The content is okay, but don't make the protagonist a bad guy. You should know the truth of making a common man innocent and guilty of having a treasure. You will inevitably kill people and seize the treasure later! Below Everyone pay attention to epidemic prevention! 🤞🤞🤞
So-so
The plot and story concept are very good, but the wrong names are often written, and strings are often written. Doesn't the author review them before sending them out?
A cultivator is entangled with a widow, still like Qin Huairu
It seems that during the Republic of China, per capita wages started at hundreds of thousands.
Do you want to check the information yourself? Do you know the exchange rate between ocean and banknotes? The opening price is dozens or hundreds of ocean dollars. At that time, a normal restaurant owner only made 8-12 ocean dollars a year.
Don't blame me.
The plot and writing are both good. I just can't accept it at all. I feel disgusted by the female aspect.
No, the theme is good, it would be better if those women were removed
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