The Immortal White Ape Has Been Listening to Taoism for Thirty Years
by Fire To The Depths Of The Starry Sky
About This Novel
Ye Cheng was reborn as a little white ape adopted by Chongyang Temple, and unexpectedly got a sign-in system. Sign in once a day. You can 100% get one day's life span, and occasionally you can get other rewards. Ye Cheng was shocked. As long as he signed in every day, wouldn't he be able to live forever? One day, he overheard the sermon of Master Chunyang of Chongyang Temple, and signed a demon martial arts fruit. As long as he listened to the sermon continuously for thirty years, he could activate the demon martial arts fruit and start the path of demon martial arts. .......
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Official(32)Scraped 6d ago
The monkey looks more harmonious when using a stick, 🗡️ always feels weird
Let me help you lower your rating
So far I think your writing is pretty good, but no one has read it. I hope your popularity will increase and your motivation to write will be stronger.
The weapon is a bit difficult to stretch
For monkeys, a stick is better. The long-handled ones are almost the same. It always feels nondescript for a monkey to hold a sword with one hand.
Leveling up is a bit slow, and the level is so low even with plug-ins. It's not very reasonable. What book friends want is cool writing.
Really average.
This novel suppresses leveling in every aspect, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. The most important thing is that he still eats soft food. It's really frustrating for people who have traveled through time and space to still live in the same trap.
It's very torturous to look at the setting. Wouldn't it be painful to stay with humans even after turning into a monkey because of the loneliness and contrast? How much hatred does the protagonist have to have with the author even though he signed a lifespan?
It's so damn poisonous. The two people in the front were so cautious in digging the soil, but the water in the back turned out to be even worse than digging the soil. The result was never mentioned and the plot was pushed forward forcefully.
Very pretty
Although the protagonist is a little too cautious, the flaws are not concealed, and the overall look is still very good.
It's okay, but there's a little bug
It looks good, but there are a few bugs. A lady's sword weighing about 3 kilograms, based on a weight of about 600 kilograms (not considered demonic), is just like a monkey dancing sword with arms thicker than ordinary people's thighs (for example, you use chopsticks as swords).
Overall OK
The weak point is the protagonist's weapon. The ape's too light weapon is really useless and cannot be effective. Why should the monkey use a stick? Because long weapons have blunt weapons and critical hits, the protagonist's sword skills are either heavy swords or super long swords. I also hope that more adjustments will be made to the balance of force and character design. The gap in the balance of force is too big. The enemy is almost restrained by the mainstream. Only pig's feet are used to restrain the enemy. As a result, the protagonist's cultivation is extremely slow. Moreover, the characteristic of the monster should be racial talent. Just like the four monkeys in the world, each has its own abilities. The primate is dexterous. I think the protagonist's physique is comparable to that of an orangutan, and he can also add strength talent. It's also because you have done so much to create the protagonist, the sect can't always be blind. It will be even more uncomfortable if there is a plot that makes it difficult for the protagonist in the future. Although you arranged the protagonist's check-in in the end, you did not cheat it clearly. As a result, the protagonist's combat power is not up to par now, and he just watches the show when in crisis.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(32)Scraped 6d ago
The monkey looks more harmonious when using a stick, 🗡️ always feels weird
Let me help you lower your rating
So far I think your writing is pretty good, but no one has read it. I hope your popularity will increase and your motivation to write will be stronger.
The weapon is a bit difficult to stretch
For monkeys, a stick is better. The long-handled ones are almost the same. It always feels nondescript for a monkey to hold a sword with one hand.
Leveling up is a bit slow, and the level is so low even with plug-ins. It's not very reasonable. What book friends want is cool writing.
Really average.
This novel suppresses leveling in every aspect, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. The most important thing is that he still eats soft food. It's really frustrating for people who have traveled through time and space to still live in the same trap.
It's very torturous to look at the setting. Wouldn't it be painful to stay with humans even after turning into a monkey because of the loneliness and contrast? How much hatred does the protagonist have to have with the author even though he signed a lifespan?
It's so damn poisonous. The two people in the front were so cautious in digging the soil, but the water in the back turned out to be even worse than digging the soil. The result was never mentioned and the plot was pushed forward forcefully.
Very pretty
Although the protagonist is a little too cautious, the flaws are not concealed, and the overall look is still very good.
It's okay, but there's a little bug
It looks good, but there are a few bugs. A lady's sword weighing about 3 kilograms, based on a weight of about 600 kilograms (not considered demonic), is just like a monkey dancing sword with arms thicker than ordinary people's thighs (for example, you use chopsticks as swords).
Overall OK
The weak point is the protagonist's weapon. The ape's too light weapon is really useless and cannot be effective. Why should the monkey use a stick? Because long weapons have blunt weapons and critical hits, the protagonist's sword skills are either heavy swords or super long swords. I also hope that more adjustments will be made to the balance of force and character design. The gap in the balance of force is too big. The enemy is almost restrained by the mainstream. Only pig's feet are used to restrain the enemy. As a result, the protagonist's cultivation is extremely slow. Moreover, the characteristic of the monster should be racial talent. Just like the four monkeys in the world, each has its own abilities. The primate is dexterous. I think the protagonist's physique is comparable to that of an orangutan, and he can also add strength talent. It's also because you have done so much to create the protagonist, the sect can't always be blind. It will be even more uncomfortable if there is a plot that makes it difficult for the protagonist in the future. Although you arranged the protagonist's check-in in the end, you did not cheat it clearly. As a result, the protagonist's combat power is not up to par now, and he just watches the show when in crisis.
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