Starting with the Evil God Doll, Do I Have a Choice?

Hahaha, how should I put it, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch.

Has anyone read this book? (´-Ω-`) Hahahaha

Like the title, the only bad thing is, can you please stop wearing it before speaking? It looks weird, I always feel like I'm on a female channel

Are there any novels about time travel and becoming a puppet master? They are all demon dolls

I saw three of them and I wanted to delete them.

Is anyone falling for this? D(ŐдŐ๑), anyway, I couldn't stand it before I finished the first chapter. Goodbye, I'm going to find some brains.

Let me state in advance that the subject matter of this work is very interesting. Secondly, this book reminds me of another book - Why Did You Call Me Finally, let me explain my reading experience It feels like the author is trying his best to shape the protagonist into a villain of the chaotic evil camp, but he presents to the readers a primary school student who is in the second grade for the sake of being in the second grade. A child in the rebellious period expresses some niche or non-mainstream views in order to show his uniqueness, such as attributes such as darkness, evil, and chaos. Even if it is foreshadowing, it needs proper foreshadowing. However, the beginning only explains how powerful the protagonist was during his lifetime, but does not state the protagonist's life goals, the style of behavior or life dogma he believes in. It gives people the feeling of a tool person. It is just that the heroine needs a plug-in, a tool such as a translator of the heroine's heart. If this was a supporting role, it wouldn't be a big problem. The existence of a complainer can mobilize the reader's psychology to a great extent, but it is very abrupt for the protagonist to take this position. The relationship between the cold protagonist and the young female protagonist is not as straightforward as the domineering president's "Woman, you attracted me." The relationship between the male and female protagonists makes me feel like I am watching a Japanese variety show. The protagonist's heart can be dark and bloodthirsty, but it is not reflected as to why it is dark and why it is bloodthirsty. For example, it believes in the theory of evil nature, so human beings are born with darkness, or they would rather teach me to betray the world than teach the world to betray me, which is similar to subjective idealism. The protagonist lacks a code of conduct and has no purpose. But if you add one, the heroine will become the strongest, or the heroine will become the leader of the evil god's camp, or the heroine will be infected with the same madness and become the second protagonist through memetic infection. I recommend the author to watch a movie - The Joker, who is also a villain, but can make people empathize, or Dio in Jojo, who is pure evil to the extreme, but full of personality charm.

After looking at the first few pictures, I can only say that they are OK but not very suitable to my taste. I think there are a few issues. 1 The protagonist is a female, and she is too young. I think most readers of the novel will not like that childishness. 2. The setting of the doll. If I remember correctly, the doll is the type of plush doll that children play with. It is not of much interest to most readers. Just like Rose Girl, the audience is basically 7 or 8 years old (I haven't checked, but it is probably around the elementary school age). Maybe the results would be better if I switched to a female channel. Improve If you change the protagonist to a male, his character should not be too weak. If his identity is a worker or a high school student, if he has the ability, write about having relatives. If he has no ability, it is best not to write. Moreover, the character must be well-characterized. Don't start the story at the beginning. If you don't tell anything about the character's background, experience, and personality, it will make people confused. They don't know what you are talking about, and it will be like skipping dozens of pictures to continue watching the plot. If you replace the puppet with a mechanical one that will not be injured, at least it will not be worse than this book.

First, there is no Minotaur plot. Second, the line is normal and not bad. Third, the characters are not boring. I don't ask for much, just meet these three points.

The system is a sign-in system! "Go to the system" I don't know if you are a full-time or part-time writer. Can you be serious about your work? Samsung encourages