I Don't Want to Be a Saint Anymore

You can't get married, can you, can't you, can you?

The author seems to want to show his humorous side, but in fact it is awkward, boring, and ruins the character. In addition, I didn't see that my driving skills were guaranteed. I only saw a stiff insertion. This is not how you drive. You are just talking about porn. After reading eight chapters, there is no actual plot advancement, and there is no conflict between the game and reality. The plots of both sides are not written, or both sides are written, but I don't feel anything after reading it. This leads to the question: What is this book about? I don't know, I haven't understood it after eight chapters. Oh, if I follow the trend of this genre, I can still guess the plot: it is nothing more than that this is a real world, for what reason, what power connects the two worlds, etc. But this is the general trend of this genre, not the plot direction. It directly points out the virtual game at the beginning, and then writes the foreshadowing: given by my girlfriend, and then goes directly to the main topic, writing directly until the player arrives in a short space. Or during the 'internal beta' period, some interesting enough plots can be used to improve the character design, add characters, enrich the plot, and pave the way for the 'open beta'. This book review is not a guide on how to write a book, but the template is roughly the same: start - get to the point - create interesting points Obviously the author made the wrong first step, because in the first chapter he wanted to explain something and then start the game, but he wasted space on the so-called card drawing. This is not a lottery after the copy. Everyone came here after reading the book title and introduction. No matter how you write it, the result is the same. It is better to skip it and enter the plot directly. In addition, there is nothing exciting about it. Fantasy novels are all about being exciting. The exciting aspects are conflicts, fights, literary fights, and pretentiousness and slaps in the face. But the first few chapters into the sect were just watery. I had no impression at all, and I didn't think about how to write a sect election. The fantasy genre is all about this, so why not pick it up? It's not a good thing to rest on your laurels. Although the plot is boring, the production of entertaining people is first-rate. 2020.10.17 Reiya

Why does it look more and more like a fellow Zhetian fan?

The writing is OK, but why did I see that the two books you wrote before were discontinued... I feel , I hope I can write more than a thousand! Writers who are not too old should not set their goals too high and put pressure on themselves,

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You can't get married, can you, can't you, can you?

This is a game, right? Then where did the data go? Where did the system go? So does the protagonist travel to another world or to a game?