Douluo: the Journey of a Heroine Starting from the Realm

For now, The depiction of Ning Fengzhi does not reflect wisdom. Writers need to work harder on details. Synchronization of the character, status, and way of doing things in the original work, This is a criticism of many fan writers. The description is not good enough, in fact, it is full of ugliness. Everyone who can come to the comment area, please express your opinions. Here, I would like to express my support and condolences. Free speech, unfettered. Tourists who have never seen the scenery farther away, Like stars all over the place. I want to help you all. However, I deeply regret... The "feelings" I share with you can never be conveyed. I hope this book list will make you enjoy it! (More than 200 books) It's a pity that the official is not good at it. I originally set my heart towards the bright moon, However, the bright moon shines on the ditch. I hope you will understand me. Today I am re-editing and inserting a message: To my surprise, I successfully uploaded a "post" in the "Square". "Discover" → "Square" → Find input "You deserve it, better recommendations". The screenshot posted is blurry when I look at it. Instead, what you see may be clear, If it is blurry, click on the picture to save it and you can view it clearly in the album. Enjoy your appreciation, everyone!

The protagonist is just a broom star. Whoever gets involved will die wherever he goes.

Recently, I have been tired of watching the plot of Dou San. The three protagonists are obviously stronger than almost everyone else in Dou San, but they are out of control in various ways. Everyone who resurrected them knew that there was an evil soul master coming to hinder them, but they didn't stop it in advance. Gu Yuena and Qian Renxue alone could kill them all. I thought the protagonist had some confidence, but it turned out to be really ruined. The evil soul masters also accomplished their goals, especially Qian Renxue and Gu Yuena, who felt like they were playing a fake game. One mastered the element of space, and the other ruled in the air. Even with god-level combat power, they couldn't kill them quickly. Then they moved to a position where the enemy was stronger. It was too late. Everyone knew that the four artifacts were very important, so they were left to be destroyed, right? . . Also, the protagonist's ninth soul ring has no idea what's going on, and it's inconvenient for him to do anything, but he won't tell why. .

Shouldn't everyone be allowed to die?

Good guy, after reading Chapter 278, I realized that Ning Rongrong's book was also written by the author. Is there anyone like me who subscribed to two books but didn't remember the author's name? ? ? ?

Turn it into a hundred for me. I guarantee that you will watch it with many people.

Is it a big collaborator? Want to see lilies

It is very good to maintain 4,000 updates per day. After reading the author's Ning Rongrong and this book, they are both good. The author has a good grasp of the daily atmosphere when setting up the plot and the tension of the plot. The protagonist is not brainless and one of the few Douluo fanfics that can be read to the end. The author's creativity in the original gods and Douluo is quite good. I just feel that the protagonist in the whole text seems to have to explain the changes in the supporting character's environment twice every time he guesses or improves in combat. It can be better handled here and not too repetitive. Repeating the strength improvement two or three times can be fun, but repeating the guessing and verification twice should not be exactly the same as before and use writing techniques to modify it for better results. The author's creativity is very good. The foreshadowing of the big scenes and the climax battle are also very good. However, in the later period, I felt that I didn't write much about the battle and only wrote the key fatal blow. I could write more foreshadowing of the battle scenes and then the final fatal blow, but most of them are sneak attacks. It is really difficult to grasp. All in all, I still experienced the best Douluo heroine novel this year.

It turns out that the protagonist is King Dharma.

Very nice Douluo fanfic, keep up the good work