Fairy Tail's Thoughts Follow the Heart
by Yaoqi
About This Novel
Psychokinesis, super perception, hallucination... An experimental accident brought Experimental Subject No. 11 To the world of Fairy Tail. ... "So am I a superpower or a wizard now?" Elaine held his head, thinking about this meaningless question. ------------------------ No cheats, no system, no cameo from Pirate Naruto, pure Fairy Tail fanfic. What I want to write is a warm and enjoyable Fairy Tail story. PS: I really don't know how to write an introduction. I really can't read the comment area! !
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Official(28)Scraped 2d ago
To be honest, when I read Chapter 72 of your book, I was so disappointed! Fairy Tail is like a bright and dazzling light. Everyone has a passionate and adventurous heart. Anything that is dangerous to the union will be strangled in the cradle. Do you think Fairy Tail is a kindergarten or your private garden? Why should we join a union if we are afraid of danger? Secondly, what is most important to fellow union members? It's trust! Here the protagonist fights against Mestre, showing a strong desire to control, and the character of the protagonist is quite broken. All I can say is that for such a protagonist, the distance between the hearts of others will become farther and farther.
It's a pity. This book is very good in terms of the flow of the plot, the characterization of the characters, and the sense of reality. It's a pity! Gradually, narrations began to appear, like rat droppings appearing in a pot of soup. This kind of rat droppings-like narration destroyed the sense of substitution, destroyed the character [a common mantra of some troll netizens], and also ruined the flow of the plot [there were too many useless words, and it took a long time to pick up the plot]. Of course, this is only a big regret for an excellent story, and these flaws are not considered flaws in the eyes of 99.9% Of readers.
suggestion
I definitely still need some emotional ones to neutralize it a bit. After all, you will get tired of killing and killing every day sooner or later. It's just a suggestion.
Author, don't be proud
Among many Fairy Tail fans, this book can be said to be of relatively high quality. It is very nice. The only thing I am sure of is that I killed it too quickly and the author should update it soon. . . . .
I hope the heroine is Mira
It smells like Fairy Tail
It's pretty good. The author will increase the intensity of updates and it will become popular. 👍
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Who is the heroine? Is it a single heroine? .
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High-quality daily updates, I hope it can continue to be maintained, please come on⊙▽⊙! I put all my votes on you (/≧▽≦/)
Another day of encouragement for the author
The writing in big letters is very good. I can deeply feel the silly and warm feeling of Fairy Tail, which is about shaking the sky, the earth, and the air. The emoticons are also a highlight, and the writing is pretty good. It would be nice if the update could be faster. I believe many Fairy Tail fans will fall into the trap! (≧▽≦)
The writing style is very consistent with Fairy Tail style
There are no other problems, except that the protagonist's personality is too fragmented. Although it is given a process of growth and change, it is still very fragmented, especially during the battle scenes.
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Official(28)Scraped 2d ago
To be honest, when I read Chapter 72 of your book, I was so disappointed! Fairy Tail is like a bright and dazzling light. Everyone has a passionate and adventurous heart. Anything that is dangerous to the union will be strangled in the cradle. Do you think Fairy Tail is a kindergarten or your private garden? Why should we join a union if we are afraid of danger? Secondly, what is most important to fellow union members? It's trust! Here the protagonist fights against Mestre, showing a strong desire to control, and the character of the protagonist is quite broken. All I can say is that for such a protagonist, the distance between the hearts of others will become farther and farther.
It's a pity. This book is very good in terms of the flow of the plot, the characterization of the characters, and the sense of reality. It's a pity! Gradually, narrations began to appear, like rat droppings appearing in a pot of soup. This kind of rat droppings-like narration destroyed the sense of substitution, destroyed the character [a common mantra of some troll netizens], and also ruined the flow of the plot [there were too many useless words, and it took a long time to pick up the plot]. Of course, this is only a big regret for an excellent story, and these flaws are not considered flaws in the eyes of 99.9% Of readers.
suggestion
I definitely still need some emotional ones to neutralize it a bit. After all, you will get tired of killing and killing every day sooner or later. It's just a suggestion.
Author, don't be proud
Among many Fairy Tail fans, this book can be said to be of relatively high quality. It is very nice. The only thing I am sure of is that I killed it too quickly and the author should update it soon. . . . .
I hope the heroine is Mira
It smells like Fairy Tail
It's pretty good. The author will increase the intensity of updates and it will become popular. 👍
ask
Who is the heroine? Is it a single heroine? .
Check in
High-quality daily updates, I hope it can continue to be maintained, please come on⊙▽⊙! I put all my votes on you (/≧▽≦/)
Another day of encouragement for the author
The writing in big letters is very good. I can deeply feel the silly and warm feeling of Fairy Tail, which is about shaking the sky, the earth, and the air. The emoticons are also a highlight, and the writing is pretty good. It would be nice if the update could be faster. I believe many Fairy Tail fans will fall into the trap! (≧▽≦)
The writing style is very consistent with Fairy Tail style
There are no other problems, except that the protagonist's personality is too fragmented. Although it is given a process of growth and change, it is still very fragmented, especially during the battle scenes.
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8.6/10 It's pretty good. Although I haven't watched Fairy Tail, I can still watch it. The guild is noisy, and the protagonist is able to blend in very well, which is perhaps what a hot-blooded comic should feel like. No cp, no updates for seven months
Young protagonist I haven't watched Fairy Tail, but the characters are very three-dimensional and pretty cool to watch. The protagonist's psychology has almost grown from scratch, rather than being an adult in the skin of a child. This little bit of growth process is quite attractive. Single master progress: 31
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Fairy Tail fanfic A+ The protagonist was studied because of his extraordinary talent since he was a child (too bad), and then he grew up from a blank slate in Fairy Tail. The characters are not facial makeup, they are flesh and blood and emotional. The disadvantage is that it's a bit self-pleasant, but don't ask for too much. Fairy Tail fans can write it like this. The protagonist has telekinesis
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