Douluo: I Have a Game Panel

I feel like the author went too far when writing this book. It seems like I am writing an exciting game guide to clear "Douluo Dalu".

After reading the whole book, I can see that the author has carefully revised it. It is all settings. Rather than story promotion, it is setting promotion. It is full of various setting introductions, Douluo style mutants, and a book with completely unpredictable endings.

The previous writing was fine, but the last two or three chapters have been written like book reviews. You are writing Douluo Dalu fan fiction, not a book review of Douluo Dalu novels! If you want to complain about Douluo Continent, just go and write a review for the book written by the Third Young Master of the Tang Family. Don't ruin this well-written book of yours! ! ! !

I just finished reading the first chapter. There are too many explanations and too many opinions of my own. As the reader said, you are a fan of Douluo Dalu, not a book review of Douluo Dalu. This is also the common point of most fan fictions. You always have to comment, but actually it is okay. The key is to be afraid of comment after comment, comment after comment. We all come to see the fan, and we don't know what kind of person he is. Even if we don't know, just give a brief summary. You are the author's son in this book. As for Tang San, he is not the protagonist. If he doesn't interfere, he will be just a passerby. If there is interference, he will be killed later. If he is annoying, he will be killed later. There is no need to comment too much. I won't rate it for the time being. It's not suitable to rate even after reading the first chapter, so I'll read it again.

Author, your book is shit as long as you charge money for it. Free membership is fine, but it's shit if you can only pay money.

A bunch of nonsense, water numbers, the sea, you are all water, I jumped and read, and found that the only two or three words that are useful, the rest are just introductions that are useless.

It's so long-winded, there are too many settings and too many details.

There is too much nonsense that has nothing to do with the plot. Why do you keep writing nonsense if you don't write the plot? Only one tenth of a chapter is devoted to plot

Author, what did you write? Play card games in "Douluo Dalu". You don't even answer. You **************** thing

The author keeps talking about his own opinions, theories, and settings when writing. The content of the book is a large-scale interpretation of his own theories. Very little for actual content. It's like looking at a game's setting analysis and walkthrough, but this is a novel and not a game walkthrough. So although what you wrote is quite rigorous and tenable, this is not what we want to look at. I feel like the author himself was so excited when writing the setting. After watching it for a long time, there was no actual content or plot. It's just setting up the interpretation and inserting a little plot into the theoretical overview.