Douluo: Book from Heaven Turns into Mortals

I have a book that is somewhat similar to what you have written so far. But I'm not sure, so can you send me the remaining few hundred pictures so I can compare them?

Wuhun is a book that has to take the path of turning pages into weapons. Wouldn't it be good to take the magic and rule-based approach? Forget it if you choose the weapon-changing category. The protagonist you wrote has been compressing and getting stronger after reaching the tenth level of soul power, enhancing his own quality. You also specifically mentioned that you should choose a soul ring that is the first in seven or eight hundred years, which is the best for a thousand years. The result? To level up to the same level as Tang San, for the sake of the soul ring's life span, you get a relatively good 360-year soul ring? Then why did you write those chapters or two? And that soul skill, what is the auxiliary soul skill that assists oneself? That's called a gain-type soul skill, which increases the strength and power of martial souls. They are all gain-type soul skills. If you create an inexplicable thing yourself, it can show that you have good settings? All I can say is imbecile. Then there is the level 12 soul power. What are your original words? After all, it is a century-old soul ring. After all, he has been practicing at the tenth level for half a year? What nonsense are you talking about? It only took more than a year for the protagonist to reach level 5 to level 10. Not to mention 1-2, 1-3 plus soul rings, you need to start at level 13 after saving the same amount of soul power. Author, don't write the same flow of settings as you did in the last book. This book collapsed at the beginning. I also commented on you in the starting point. The ban is terrible? What does it mean? It means you fell. I touched on your sore point, clown.

It is a good idea to use books to make martial arts, but the author's path is too narrow, and the development direction is wrong. The author wants to first improve the quality of the martial arts book, and then wait for the strength of the book to increase before focusing on the recorded characteristics of the martial arts spirit itself. However, I don't think it is necessary to be so complicated, because the compatibility of the book itself is first-rate, especially the book where the protagonist has no attributes or attributes, which represents the protagonist's martial spirit. The compatibility, plasticity and sustainable development are very strong. In this case, you only need to fill up the characteristics recorded by the book martial soul. The reason why the magic book is a magic book is because it is engraved with the skills and knowledge about magic. The same is true for the protagonist's martial soul. The process of absorbing the soul ring is used in the magic book. The absorbing soul ring uses the origin of the soul ring to engrave everything about the spirit beast on the book martial soul. This process itself is To strengthen the book martial soul, this method not only enhances the quality of the book martial soul due to the energy of the soul ring, but also has the ability to engrave and record to diversify attacks, and the attack methods are also comprehensive. It is a random soul skill. You can directly obtain all the skills of the spirit beast through inscription and recording. Because of the recording, you can even release the spirit beast's phantom to act as a summoner or directly integrate the book page into your body for pseudo-study. To possess a martial spirit, in the later stage, find a mirror beast to directly copy the opponent's skills, and because of the recording characteristics of the martial spirit, once you copy it, the copied skill will be permanent and 100% restored to its power. From the mid-term, you will be a serious all-round soul master, capable of kiting in long range, possessing a fake martial soul in melee, capable of fighting, milking, defense, summoning, assisting, and even copying the skills of a food-based soul master. It can only be said that the author has taken a narrow path.

Don't look at it, he actually brought together Yu Tianheng and Dugu Yan. To be honest, I was a little disgusted. In the original work, Grandpa Duguyan died in battle, the Blue Lightning Tyrant Dragon Sect did not accept her, and Yu Tianheng abandoned her without any sense of responsibility. In the end, she gained nothing. She was saddled with the massacre of the city's criminals, and everyone betrayed her relatives. There are also a lot of enemies of Dugu Bo, and a clean death is probably a luxury. Others don't know the outcome, but you, the time traveler, know the outcome and still push people into the pit of fire. I feel sorry for the money to subscribe to 30 tickets . Don't waste your money and waste a good day when you can see it

In the first few years, the fandoms were based on the works... Are they all aimed at Zhang Wei? It's embarrassing to be black for the sake of being black. Even if you do things that ordinary people don't have the consciousness to do now, you can still be black from another angle. I even suspected that the navy bought by Zhang Wei was laundered in reverse. The most disgusting things about being black for the sake of being black are 1. A hundred thousand year old rabbit, one hundred thousand years is just his cultivation level, not his age, and with his mother watching, Xiao Wu has not seen billions of brothers and sisters. 2. Waste martial arts and waste soul masters. The master is also comparing spirits of similar levels to those of soul masters of the same level. The most important point in this sentence is whether they can use it, rather than using the lowest-level spirits to counterattack the god-level spirits. 3. Regarding master plagiarism, the initial setting is to summarize and innovate by oneself, and to break the monopoly of aristocrats and open the title of master to ordinary people. Of course, Zhang Wei will read later, and many people will understand a lot of things. The most important thing is that after level 30, they will not be able to empathize with him. 4. Regarding Tang San's actions, this was a disciple of the Tang Sect. In his previous life, he was brainwashed without any education. As a result, he did things that even modern people can't do. In addition to the following few eating books, the most important thing is that Zhang Wei is responsible for it. Looking at Dou Yi alone, his moral level is higher than that of many people today, and he is not at all like those trained by the Tang Sect. 5. Regarding the conspiracy theory that the mother-in-law and daughter-in-law sacrificed themselves, it might be possible if the length of the story was short, but the emotional description throughout the story makes it difficult for people to think of it as a conspiracy theory. Although the character designs of the later Chishu books have also changed a lot, it is mainly the fault of the author. First, define them all as black and then find some points. If there is one black word in a hundred words, it is completely black... These are some dark and disgusting points. It's not that the person who wrote the book cannot empathize with the person who wrote the book, nor can he understand the specific harm Zhang Wei caused. From a spectator's perspective, this is all black for the sake of being black, but it is a bit of a whitewashing routine in reverse.

One of the few books that can clearly distinguish the priorities. This is not easy. In most fandoms, this woman is sexy and that woman is seductive. Either you are jealous or I am jealous. I'm writing about my mother! When I don't write about business every day, I am either breeding or thinking of ways to breed.

I just read it yesterday, it's not bad, but it's a bit short. I caught up to where it was just updated. I hope the author doesn't give away women he doesn't want. It's disgusting. I also read a book and gave Zhu Zhuqing to Dai Mubai. I vomited. Also, Dugu Yan and Yu Tianheng are really unworthy.

If you don't take up anything, you don't choose either Wuhun Palace or Shrek, then you write a Chicken Feather Hammer Douluo. Is that a Douluo? In that fantasy novel, you use Douluo's name, you write a piece of cake, and you don't take up both sides. What do you write about Douluo? It's fucking rubbish.

First, the setting of Shu Wuhun is not bad, but the development is not good. Isn't it good to use the mage? How to develop origami. Second, making enemies without brains. Let's imagine that you traveled through time and both your parents died. To be honest, you have never met them face to face. If you lived with your parents after time traveling, they brought you a warm life. I can understand that you always want revenge, but you don't even have a soul master, so you always want to take revenge on Wuhun Temple and Tang Hao. Third, build power. Generally, the protagonist grows very quickly. Building power is just to spend the money. The number of words is useless. You said you want to become a god in order to gain faith, but I don't think it's necessary. Isn't it good for you to create your own god? Isn't the God of Knowledge and the God of Dharma fragrant? Thirdly, I haven't seen any reasonable and awesome theories when it comes to theories, and the protagonist has neither the power nor the strength to engage in these? You don't have a little Kalami at level 40. Isn't this a crime of harboring a treasure? Do you think that the reason why a level 29 master is a master is really the theory? Blue Lightning Overlord and Bibi Dong are not just paper. It's not that I look down on theories, but I think you, a powerful netizen in the fantasy world, are you a person with no abilities and are trying to get the best of you among the major forces by relying on your theories?

I still prefer Douluo fanfics written by the author. Basically the books written rely on human wisdom. What is the difference between humans and beasts without intelligence. Just like Douluo Continent, Titled Douluo is powerful enough. But they have no wisdom. When hunting hundred-thousand-year-old soul beasts, there is no need for any smart things like poisoning, sneak attacks, and soul-guided cannonballs. Just like ordinary reckless men, they all rely on the soul skills in martial souls and soul rings.