Douluo: Exposing Himself to Qian Daoliu at the Beginning

He also said that he is an LSP. He has not been with a woman for more than ten years, and he actually said that he pays attention to spiritual communication! ! ! Is it possible to communicate spiritually only by doing nothing? , Are you sure this is not a joke? And this is not stupid, this is not another problem, this is just a big fucking idiot. If he can kill him in advance, he has to wait until the battle of Jialing Pass to kill him. He stares at Tang San and stares at him. You can't stare at everyone. You can't kill Oscar first. You kill them in advance and don't even change the god's position. How can you be resurrected? You can grab resources but don't, you have to keep your mood, you can kill soul beasts, but you still don't want to fuck them, don't you know that people who are not from my race have different hearts? What she really is is a hypocritical bitch

It was really guessed. The protagonist is really a licker. Everyone who scolded him is a love-minded person, but in fact he is envious, jealous, and hateful. This protagonist can be said to be a loser. The reason for his failure has not been found. He licks the dog, licks the dog, licks the dog, and licks the dog until there is nothing left in the end.

The author just read the latest chapter, and I personally want to give you a suggestion. That is, whether it is the male protagonist or the Snow Emperor, these people always have a hermaphrodite tone when they defend themselves to others. I would say that it's okay if only the male protagonist or a few people have this tone. There is no need to say that everyone has this tone. (To be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch) For example, Snow Emperor, his personality is more suitable for telling the other party what you have done wrong "straightforwardly", and there is no need to always use such rhetorical questions to criticize others. And there is no need for Snow Emperor to say so many words, just say it bluntly. I feel like this is more in line with her character. Otherwise, Snow Emperor's words would always sound like a male protagonist. The most important thing is that everyone's excuses and criticisms are in the same tone. It's a bit boring after hearing too much, and the character image doesn't feel right.

Isn't the protagonist a mother's heart? As long as it is a woman in the original work, it seems that she wants to change. She knows that they have such a character, but she still plunges into it. What role do Ah Yin and Tang Yuehua in recent chapters play in the original work? Ah Yin could also be said to be used to threaten Tang San and his son. What is the use of Tang Yuehua? Its greatest use is to package Tang San as a humble gentleman in the original work. The ugly thing is that the clothes are dirty. He looks like a good person at first glance. I won't doubt his bad intentions. There is something wrong with the protagonist who still has the heart to change him. Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue felt like they were treating the protagonist as a dog in their original time and space. If the dog is disobedient, train him. To train it to be obedient does not treat the protagonist as a human being at all. The protagonist is reborn and feels like he's going back to his old ways.

It seems that the protagonist has been contradicting himself. On the one hand, he is thinking that I am not helping Wuhundian but just taking revenge, and on the other hand, he is hanging out with them. I don't understand. Is he reborn as a dog? At worst, I would go to Qibao as a son-in-law, or flee to the Sun and Moon Continent. I still don't care about their life or death. It would be a mercy not to help Tang San destroy Wuhun Palace after what happened in my previous life. To put it bluntly, the protagonist has been licking, but it's very subtle. He obviously wants to lick but can't shame it, and he's acting like a fool.

I just listened to a few chapters and kept repeating what kind of character and what kind of person I am. The profile description also said that I am a person who is very afraid of death and has cultivated to level 99 in order to live. He is an old pervert and has been used as a tool by Bibi Dong for 20 years, which means that he has been a licking dog for more than 20 years. In the end, the two gods fought and blew themselves up for the mother and daughter. It was said to be for Qian Daoliu's instructions. Don't you think this part is stupid? I have never been a dog licker, so I am a bit lacking in knowledge in this area, but I think it is not at all for the so-called Qiandaoliu's instructions. Chunchun just likes to lick, and I will lick even if I die. As long as the facial features are good, and the three views follow the facial features, it doesn't matter if others killed you in the previous life, as long as you look good. This is true regardless of the author's situation. When considering the author, it is that the author wants to simulate a tragic previous life, but he cannot be a substitute for it and cannot understand what it would be like for people who have experienced this kind of thing. Therefore, the writing is very contradictory and lacks a sense of reality.

The protagonist is a licking dog + a virgin + a brain tan character. The author successfully wrote that nt will still be nt even if he lives in the second life.

A man who has lived two lifetimes. After three days of meeting, I gave someone a soul bone, but he still wasn't happy after taking it with twenty thousand years old. I told him not to think too much about it. If he didn't choose, he wouldn't give face. Isn't this 250? There is really no need to live like a troubled child all over again. The rigid character design really ruins the senses.

First of all, I would like to declare that I am not a sailor, and secondly, I can't stand to read more than 100 chapters. I feel really sick at night. When writing a fanfic, no matter what faction it is, Wuhundian faction or Tang San faction, it must have the basic elements of a novel: the conflicting points that trigger the action, the action against the factors that cause the conflict, and the result of the action. OK, then let's take a look at the author. What kind of novelty did you write? First of all, the contradiction originated from God Shura letting the protagonist die. This is the only contradiction at present. There is nothing wrong with the protagonist wanting to kill God Shura. Then, the target is Tang San, but there is no description of the contradiction of Tang San at all. It is like A has a grudge against you, and you turn around and disgust B without clearly describing the reason for attacking B. The logic is not fluent, and the unreasonable situation is discovered, and a reason is forcibly "made up" and executed in the form of moral kidnapping. An illogical article kidnaps each character with a long so-called three views, and always uses a God's perspective to describe each character in a form without a sense of substitution. The method of moral kidnapping is used to make the protagonist have preferences for others. The way to die, and then the protagonist is also psychologically indecisive. The other characters who are aligned with the protagonist are written with an illogical plot and become an empty shell without a heart. The incomplete plot logic is forced to use the protagonist's hatred to lead the plot and activate contradictions wantonly. I won't talk about the three views, and I won't force the writing. I don't know why this book is still above 8 points.

A standard female channel regret story. The male and female protagonists accumulate a lot of misunderstandings while getting along, but they just don't explain them. Then after rebirth, they gradually resolve the misunderstandings and reunite happily.