
Start in the Middle Ages, on the Crusades
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Before you is the Swordsman of Bohemia, the Burgundian Rogue, the Sword of God, the Grand Master of the Templars, the Grand Master of the Jomus Pirates, the Earl of Glamorgan, the Conqueror of Anatolia, the Lord of Egypt and Cyprus, the Great and Terrible, the King of Gold and Blood, Eric Hauteville! He was the second son of Robert Hautville, the conqueror of southern Italy in 1066, but his father sent him to a monastery without even being given a baron. A Norman monk began his adventure. (Microsystem novel, dominated by historical figures.) Heavenly Salvation System [Novice gift pack, junior master counterattack, two pairs of pick locks, junior priest qualification of Lucifer Servant Society] [Steal an apple, agility +1] [Defeat three robbers, strength +1, points +6] [5000 points for Nuremberg plate armor] [Complete resolution to establish the Kingdom of the Isle of Man and its Islands] With a master's counterattack and a pair of lock picks, his reputation is known to everyone from Ireland to Khitan. Participated in the First Crusade to capture Egypt, helped the Duke of Normandy seize the throne of England, wrote a biography for Anna Comnenus, and the Marquise of Tuscany... The vassals of my vassals are not my vassals..
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Official(15)Scraped 11d ago
The combat power has been reduced to pieces. I have read Chapter 20 or 30, and the Crusade has not started yet.
At the beginning, the protagonist can directly knock the charging horses to death with a mace. With your performance, the protagonist is covered in armor instead of a long sword. It should be no problem to use Wushuang in the Bandit Hundred. However, the protagonist is inexplicably captured by the Viking pirates. Are you kidding me? Medieval Vikings were good if they wore leather armor and chain armor. Most of them were without armor. Fighting with armor or without armor is almost like beating a son. Will the protagonist be caught by them if he guarantees a full set of armor? ? ? Moreover, it is still in a ship environment that cannot be surrounded by plains. In a similar environment, 300 Spartans killed 3,000 people, and the morale of the Viking pirates is very poor. As long as the protagonist kills their leader in a surprise attack and kills a dozen more people, they will break up and jump into the sea to escape. After all, bandits are only that kind of virtuous. What nonsense are you writing? And the plot arrangement is also very problematic. It's twenty or thirty chapters, and you and your title Crusaders are not even close to each other. What Gouba? It's okay to help the prince usurp the throne. At least it is a little helpful. The key is that you even help the prince usurp the throne. You don't know what the hell you write intermittently. Your plot always jumps and jumps, and the plot arrangement is scattered.
The author is great. After three chapters, I couldn't tell who is who.
It's a very good book. The author's writing skills are very strong. He must have checked the information on history and theology. The flavor is very strong. It feels more like a boss opening a trumpet to write a book.
The history is strong, creating a realistic Western European Middle Ages, and the writing style is solid, but not concise enough. The pacing is not very good, and the transitions are a bit confusing. Maybe it's because my history is poor. I don't know who some of the characters are. Sometimes they feel inexplicable. I only become familiar with them after watching more.
It is a rare research school. The author obviously has a profound foundation. He has a very rich knowledge of history and general roles. The plot is compact, the characters are three-dimensional, and the logic is reasonable. It is highly recommended. It is like a trumpet opened by a big boss. However, some of the author's habits are difficult for me to accept. I personally think it is a bit too vulgar (such as stealing underwear). However, these are just petty villains. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed.
The ck3 in the novel is a fighter with related themes.
Take your time and watch
Is the timeline correct? I read the introduction of 1066. The Eastern Expedition would not have started until 1095.
If you keep it, it will be gone. Is it mailed?
Is it okay not to break into chapters at the climax? It affects the reading experience too much.
With your update volume and efficiency, we have all been waiting for such a long time, and I don't mind if you take your time to finish the climax. If you write like this, many people will support the book.
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Official(15)Scraped 11d ago
The combat power has been reduced to pieces. I have read Chapter 20 or 30, and the Crusade has not started yet.
At the beginning, the protagonist can directly knock the charging horses to death with a mace. With your performance, the protagonist is covered in armor instead of a long sword. It should be no problem to use Wushuang in the Bandit Hundred. However, the protagonist is inexplicably captured by the Viking pirates. Are you kidding me? Medieval Vikings were good if they wore leather armor and chain armor. Most of them were without armor. Fighting with armor or without armor is almost like beating a son. Will the protagonist be caught by them if he guarantees a full set of armor? ? ? Moreover, it is still in a ship environment that cannot be surrounded by plains. In a similar environment, 300 Spartans killed 3,000 people, and the morale of the Viking pirates is very poor. As long as the protagonist kills their leader in a surprise attack and kills a dozen more people, they will break up and jump into the sea to escape. After all, bandits are only that kind of virtuous. What nonsense are you writing? And the plot arrangement is also very problematic. It's twenty or thirty chapters, and you and your title Crusaders are not even close to each other. What Gouba? It's okay to help the prince usurp the throne. At least it is a little helpful. The key is that you even help the prince usurp the throne. You don't know what the hell you write intermittently. Your plot always jumps and jumps, and the plot arrangement is scattered.
The author is great. After three chapters, I couldn't tell who is who.
It's a very good book. The author's writing skills are very strong. He must have checked the information on history and theology. The flavor is very strong. It feels more like a boss opening a trumpet to write a book.
The history is strong, creating a realistic Western European Middle Ages, and the writing style is solid, but not concise enough. The pacing is not very good, and the transitions are a bit confusing. Maybe it's because my history is poor. I don't know who some of the characters are. Sometimes they feel inexplicable. I only become familiar with them after watching more.
It is a rare research school. The author obviously has a profound foundation. He has a very rich knowledge of history and general roles. The plot is compact, the characters are three-dimensional, and the logic is reasonable. It is highly recommended. It is like a trumpet opened by a big boss. However, some of the author's habits are difficult for me to accept. I personally think it is a bit too vulgar (such as stealing underwear). However, these are just petty villains. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed.
The ck3 in the novel is a fighter with related themes.
Take your time and watch
Is the timeline correct? I read the introduction of 1066. The Eastern Expedition would not have started until 1095.
If you keep it, it will be gone. Is it mailed?
Is it okay not to break into chapters at the climax? It affects the reading experience too much.
With your update volume and efficiency, we have all been waiting for such a long time, and I don't mind if you take your time to finish the climax. If you write like this, many people will support the book.
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A book about the Middle Ages, the beginning of the clergy is a bit slow, so go ahead and read it if you like it.




Before you is the Swordsman of Bohemia, the Burgundian Rogue, the Sword of God, the Grand Master of the Templars, the Grand Master of the Jomus Pirates, the Earl of Glamorgan, the Conqueror of Anatolia, the Lord of Egypt and Cyprus, the Great and Terrible, the King of Gold and Blood, Eric Hauteville! He was the second son of Robert Hautville, the conqueror of southern Italy in 1066, but his father sent him to a monastery without even being given a baron. A Norman monk began his adventure. (Micro system novel, dominated by historical figures.) [Heavenly Salvation System] [Novice Gift Pack, Junior Master Counter, Two Pairs of Picking Locks, Junior Priest Qualification of Lucifer Servant Society] [Steal an apple, Agility +1] [Defeat three robbers, Strength +1, Points +6] [5000 points for Nuremberg plate armor] [Complete the decision to establish the Isle of Man and its Island Kingdom] One move of Master Counter, one pair of lock picks, his reputation is known to everyone from Ireland to Khitan. Participated in the First Crusade to seize Egypt, helped the Duke of Normandy seize the throne of England, wrote a biography for Anna Comnenus, and visited Tuscany. The vassals I vassal are not my vassals.













