The Rise of the Middle Ages

It took so long to write and there are no illustrations or explanations about where it is. It only writes about the time of the 13th century. It makes me dizzy. Let me show you a picture. Author The last one is from the Anglo-French war, so I can use it as a reference.

Don't be a prince or a duke from birth. You have to fight step by step. Besides this book, horseshoe, black iron, what else are there?

When I read Chapter 154, it can be seen from the front that the author writes extremely seriously and has consulted a lot of information. The first point is that the details are very reasonable, but the problem is that you spend too much time on the details and focus on rationality, but the big framework treats the readers as fools. Especially in the chapters after it was released, a group of bandits beat the protagonist team to heavy losses. Anyone who knows some history knows that it is completely impossible. This is purely intentional to add a halo to the opponent, and the addition is very blunt. The second point is the chronicle. This point is very serious from the beginning, especially the chapters about the development of the wooden castle before it was released. I skipped those chapters directly, and the subsequent plots are still connected. The author can re-read it himself. How many words did you use to introduce how much property the protagonist has? You even listed the number of farm tools in detail. Moreover, there are many chapters and paragraphs that belong entirely to the reading list throughout the text. However, this point has been reduced a lot since it was put on the shelves. There is nothing wrong with that. After all, it costs money to read the book after it is put on the shelves. But author, how many readers do you think can survive these parts? The third point: I haven't seen the following one, but I know from the title that the protagonist's daily job is to fight and kill. I've read a lot of this kind of book. Basically, fewer and fewer people will read it. Especially the protagonist of this book, whose role is only an infantryman, or an infantryman with mediocre combat effectiveness. I really don't know what the purpose of this protagonist's existence is. If you want to write him as Lu Bu is alive, I have absolutely no objection. The novel must rely on reality, and it cannot completely rely on reality. Your protagonist has no special features, so what's the use of the protagonist's existence? What we are reading is a novel. We don't want to waste time on a mediocre protagonist. When writing a novel, you cannot write the protagonist into a tool man. The last point is that there is nothing attractive about the article. Above I hope the author can improve his results in the future

The character descriptions in the early stage are relatively rich, and the customs and customs are infinitely beautiful! The war in the middle and late stages is an infinite loop, which becomes boring if you watch it too much! War scenes can be added with some passion, excitement, and a battle of wits and courage! The author can add some descriptions of life, scenery, architecture, humanities and geography, and add some supporting roles! I hope the protagonist's strength can be improved! At least one can fight ten! For example, Xiang Yu was able to kill more than a hundred elite Han troops by dismounting and fighting on foot at the end of the Wujiang Mountains! Let's include more historical celebrities to make it more readable! I hope the author can capture Jerusalem and defeat Saladin later! Let the Mongol Empire march westward in advance to compete with Temujin! Come on!

Please give your opinion well. If you don't reply, I won't vote.

I really like the content of this book. Especially the description of the medieval environment. It can be seen that the author must have memorized the book. Finally, could you please give the author some recommendations on materials that describe the Middle Ages? I am really interested in the Middle Ages. Thank you😘😘

Now that I see this, my suggestion is that the protagonist has already gained a certain amount of power, so stop running around. You don't need to do everything yourself. It's too busy and risky. For example, in the case of a commercial bank, it's more about giving guidance and development plans. You can tell them what to do, but don't run around in other people's territory. Another point is that I feel that the protagonist is a bit groveling. He sends money everywhere to do a little errand, even if he doesn't do anything, but no one takes him seriously. I feel that the writing is not suitable for the status of the protagonist. After all, he is a powerful viscount with thousands of troops at his disposal, but in the end he still has to be timid. This is a personal feeling, please comment.

Really, otherwise, don't add the soul penetration element. Are you really a medieval person? I thought it was a good novel.

I would like to ask how many days it will be until the next chapter is updated.

I really couldn't stand it any longer, so I looked at three pictures. This guy's names were all the names of other people and places. I went to the foreigner's list where the names are long, but you can write them very carefully. They were all names of people or places with more than five characters.