
Soldiers, Generals and Commanders
by Ao Porridge
About This Novel
Don't go away just by looking at the title of the work. This is a story about a group of people with dreams competing for hegemony. The story is very long, so please read it slowly.
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Official(2)Scraped 13d ago
We are here to read the novel, not the synopsis.
No, let's just say that you are writing a novel and not a biography. Can you not be so blunt and describe more about the mood, psychology, appearance and environment, and write purely about things, so that people have no desire to read on. Don't write a long paragraph, but divide it into a few short paragraphs, otherwise it will make people want to skip it. It needs to be brought in a little bit, and don't give people the feeling of being a complete bystander.
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Official(2)Scraped 13d ago
We are here to read the novel, not the synopsis.
No, let's just say that you are writing a novel and not a biography. Can you not be so blunt and describe more about the mood, psychology, appearance and environment, and write purely about things, so that people have no desire to read on. Don't write a long paragraph, but divide it into a few short paragraphs, otherwise it will make people want to skip it. It needs to be brought in a little bit, and don't give people the feeling of being a complete bystander.









