Soldiers, Generals and Commanders

Soldiers, Generals and Commanders

by Ao Porridge

Length:
3Kwords3chapters
Latest:
Ch. 3Foolish and Incompetent
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About This Novel

Don't go away just by looking at the title of the work. This is a story about a group of people with dreams competing for hegemony. The story is very long, so please read it slowly.

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The Sky is High, Let Me Fly42mo ago

We are here to read the novel, not the synopsis.

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The Sky is High, Let Me Fly42mo ago

No, let's just say that you are writing a novel and not a biography. Can you not be so blunt and describe more about the mood, psychology, appearance and environment, and write purely about things, so that people have no desire to read on. Don't write a long paragraph, but divide it into a few short paragraphs, otherwise it will make people want to skip it. It needs to be brought in a little bit, and don't give people the feeling of being a complete bystander.

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