Naruto: the Life-buyer of the Ninja World

It's really annoying. Others are on the shelves and killing you randomly, but you are still growing in the village. It's numb. In terms of the story, I wrote three chapters about contacting Orochimaru, and four chapters about Uzuki Xiyan's mother coming to seek refuge. Are readers' money blown by the strong wind? If I want to watch the tragic story, wouldn't it be easier to just watch the A slice? In daily life, the training is written in such detail. I read the book. Can I use ninjutsu or something? Are you writing a ninjutsu manual? Come on, real ink. If you are a member of the free book, I will say that it is not bad. But if you are a paid book, I will just look at the title and skip the hydrology part.

A real question, does this book include Mikoto and Sinai? If I accept it, I can only give two stars. The author is deliberately writing important characters to death. If it is just to accept the heroine, forget it. It really makes me sick. So far, everything is good, the writing is very good, the creativity is also very good, the battle scenes are relatively complete, but during the battle, the protagonist It has always been about assisting or not describing the protagonist's battle scenes. Being biased towards assisting can understand that the protagonist is not very strong and relies solely on ninja tools. However, there are some slightly more powerful situations where the protagonist really does not appear at all. Even if he throws more detonating charms at the Minato station, it is better than not moving at all.

Filling in the additional world view does not allow you to ignore the basic settings. How has Daming Mansion been strengthened? The Twelve Guardians asked you to write about all the movie-level abilities, so what else are you playing with? Hinata Katsu is wearing a Byakugan Uzumaki Kaguya blood fusion. Byakugan has evolved to the point where it can ignore the caged bird. He can also use Bone Release fused with Wood Release. He is beaten by four twelve ninjas. Are you really awesome? What kind of thing are you writing? The protagonist and subordinates are written as if they are extremely evolved, but in the end they are unable to suppress a famous man. How have you evolved? You can't snatch a weasel back in a long time. Expanding the world view is not for you to write randomly. The power behind the Daming Mansion is not for you to mess up. Why should Konoha be afraid of such a thing?

The angles and some understandings are novel, and most of them feel reasonable. But there is nothing wrong with saying that the protagonist wants to become stronger in order to live. However, in order to become stronger and to catch himself to death, he conducts neurostimulation experiments. This feels contrary to his desire to live well, and the sense of violation is strong. There are many ways to become stronger, and planning is much more stable. This kind of gambling on life and death for partial improvement does not feel like the operation of a person who wants to live.

It's slow, but it's really beautiful.

It is creative, reflected in the feeling that the ninja world is similar to the step-by-step martial arts training during the Republic of China. I can't quite explain this feeling. It's like it's not Naruto, but the martial arts or fantasy world of ninjas, such as the early world of My Attribute Life in Get Out.

I am not stingy with my praise. Among the dozens of Naruto fan novels I have read, this one can definitely be ranked in the top five. The extremely detailed description and theory of training and fighting even have a real feeling. This novel shows the real ninja world. There is no deliberately created conspiracy theory of bitterness and hatred, but only the precipitation left behind by the laws of the world.

Let's take care of it for a few days first, then we'll take care of it after the Chinese New Year.

The ideas and creativity are very good, but there are too many secondary creations, and occasionally the work is messed up. I really can't stand it anymore when I see Itachi being snatched away by the enemy. You want the protagonist to go through ups and downs and encounter setbacks, which is normal, but don't make it a mess. Also, when writing a fanfic, don't have too many second creations. It's best not to have any. I felt something was wrong after paying, but your writing style and some good ideas are really attractive. Overall, it's 3 stars (actually, I feel like the more I read, the lower the rating gets). I sincerely suggest (without any sarcasm) that you consider what to write in your next book.

Not bad, reading smoothly and with a strong sense of immersion.