Naruto: the Born Evil Hyuuga Brat

It's too vicious. It's too weak to answer Hizashi's questions. It's too weak to ask Hizashi to agree and keep Hizashi before he dares to take the position of clan leader. What a big joke. When the time comes, both the protagonist and Rizu possess the Caged Bird Seal, who will they listen to when the time comes to separate the families? Obviously, as long as you kill all the heads of the clan, you will be the uncrowned king in the family, but the time traveler is different. He keeps the children of the clan and the original clan leader. Isn't it funny?

The author's logic level is too poor. The author thinks that the protagonist letting the enemy go and letting others see how useless the enemy is is just showing off? In fact, wouldn't the protagonist who can't even take down trash be even more trash? If the protagonist twists off the enemy's head and throws the head out when other enemies are quarreling, the protagonist will immediately be full of character, and the reader will be full of pleasure. The way you write it now really makes people don't know what to say. The writing of the book was okay at the beginning, but when it comes to rebellion, it starts to talk a lot of nonsense. The thinking logic is very problematic, and there is a reason for the poor performance.

When the protagonist seizes power and goes to the battlefield, if you say that the protagonist is strong, then just overthrow the Hokage and become Hokage himself. But if the protagonist is not strong enough and can't do it, then if he can't do it, then he will be insignificant and develop. He must go to the battlefield to give the Hokage a chance to kill him. Normally, the leader of a large clan will have a position when he goes to the battlefield. The Hokage said that he would not be given a position, so he said no. Ryoma arranged a task for him, and he went straight to it even if he knew it was a trap. He said that he was strong and was not afraid. You are not afraid to go directly to the Hokage, and if you are not afraid, you can let others do whatever you want? There is no way to resist. At least you still have the right to refuse. It is impossible to say that a leader of a big clan cannot even refuse a task. The author just doesn't know what to write, so he forces some witty manipulations to advance the plot.

If you don't know politics, why don't we just stop writing?

It doesn't even follow logic. It seems that the protagonist group can easily become jounin. They really treat the entire Hyuga clan as fools.

The monkey and its two plug-ins are written too recklessly. With their stable personalities, it is impossible for them to interfere in the affairs of the ninja clan.

The ink stains and water injection are serious, and there is too much useless nonsense.

Trash, poison, loser, coward, idiot

The protagonist is too childish and full of nonsense

After reading Chapter 9, the writing is sparse and the adjectives are used indiscriminately.