Above the Pirate King

Author, you are going too far. I have been chasing you until chapter 297. But look at what you've been updating lately? Various character descriptions. Various character dialogues. The last two or three pictures are about the president, and they don't have any plot. If you talk about free chapters, then it's just watery. You are in a paid chapter now, how dare you be so stupid.

Warning the author for the first time, I don't want a second time, This is my first warning to the author, please be careful. First of all, I don't care what your status is, what background you have, whether you are a great or a platinum player, or how high your status is in the circle. I don't know any of this, and I don't care at all. The only thing I care about is that you must remember every word I say below and read it carefully. The weather has been a bit cold recently, so go out less at night, wear more clothes, don't catch a cold, be more efficient, and have a good rest.

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When you see a woman who can't walk, and others kill you 10,000 times, why don't you kill her just because she is a woman? How do you decide whether to kill her or not? When I see she is a woman, I know I will definitely not kill her, but there is so much nonsense, the child's heroic spirit template has no role at all, training in war, and being killed, I don't want to make my own mistake, so I just get angry.

This one star gives Goldfinger a setting. It looks pretty good at first, it's really good, and the writing is very attractive. After all, I want to see what kind of sparks Saint Seiya and Naruto Shinigami will create in the world of pirates, but the more I read later, the more disgusting it becomes, and it's poisonous! (I've only read four to five hundred chapters, and I can't hold on anymore) 1. It's okay to set your own settings, but don't you read this novel as a fantasy or a magical modification? The technology line is booming. Some kingdoms in the West Sea either have something that can immobilize Kaido and directly pull him away, or a white phosphorus bomb can kill 10,000 pigs. Then won't the Grand Line have nuclear bomb-level black technology? 2. Pig's trotters have no time traveler or kingly temperament at all. Everything is based on profit. If someone blows up 10,000 of you to death, it's normal to just kill them. (When I saw this, I thought I should massacre the country. The angry description of Pig's trotters.) After all, we own the army. As I said before, just because you are a woman? You can bring benefits that are worth the death of ten thousand people just because you are a woman. I am vomiting. What do your relatives of ten thousand people in the kingdom think? What do your comrades who get along with you think? What do the leading generals think? 3. There is no problem in vigorously developing the army. After all, the king and the country are the main line. After the world is destroyed, the government will also have to have a country and an army to manage and guard it. But you will just write a military war novel. What world is a pirate? Why not develop it vigorously with your golden finger settings? When the overlord sex does not exist? And the overlord color that Pig's Feet awakened before? There is no description at all after five years. Oh, I'm surprised that a character like Pig's Foot can have a domineering look. Can he be called a domineering person? Dad! When you meet someone who can bring you benefits, call him daddy! For Smoothie, he calls his mother-in-law, and for Capone, he calls him his cheap brother-in-law. I was just thinking about pig's feet seeing a woman unable to walk? Do you lack the combat power of a lieutenant general? Where is your golden finger? Where is Naruto, the Saint Death God? That's all. If you are immune to all poisons, you can try it.

I think that as a king, and having been a king for so long, he should have more of a kingly demeanor later on, instead of being like a child who was robbed of something like in the latest chapter. A king should behave like a king.

The author's ideas are very good. Within the big framework of One Piece, add other anime. Naruto, Death, Saint and so on. But this requires your early outline setting. It's a pity that this novel does not have an outline. The most important thing about a novel is its setting. The good thing about doujin is that the settings already exist and you don't need to reset them yourself. But if it spans several fandoms and doesn't have an outline, wouldn't you just be writing blindly? Pirate Haki is the most powerful, so can Haki defeat the God of Death? Can it smash the armor of Saints? Can it defeat the Death-Tailed Beast? In the same system, can it defeat elemental Devil Fruit? These are conflicts in the settings of different anime. After all, every anime must have a certain invincible system, and you must have something to defeat it. Writing across so many animes, do you, the author, have the writing style and ideas?

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The Death God and the Saint Seiya are too weak, and Fruit Development is too weak. Currently,

It feels like the author has never seen a woman before. He is a woman and the protagonist is asked to do whatever he wants. I am really speechless.