Chef's Special Cooking Master

This article is okay, but there are three shortcomings that I would like to point out. First: The plot often advances suddenly, making people feel that the rhythm of the story is chaotic. Many readers have said this, so I won't say more. Second: The frequent skipping of picture descriptions makes people feel that the picture is lacking, which also makes the first shortcoming more prominent. Maybe the author thinks it is fan fiction, and everyone has read the comics so there is no need to describe it too much, but this idea is wrong. A good fan fiction should be like writing an independent novel. The most important thing in a novel is the scene description and character dialogue! Description is a must! It may even feel a bit protracted at first (isn't this just the word count?) (The last parenthesis was treated as shit, you didn't see anything)! Third: Character portrayal, the most obvious one is Erina, what kind of trouble do you want to make by seriously apologizing! My words and body are too honest! I will never admit it to the eldest lady! This is not arrogant at all! Even if you are wrong, you still have to put the blame on others! And the protagonist is carrying inexplicable rumors (or real rumors (?Ω?)) Such as being a pervert. Isn't this the highlight? In fact, the main problem with this is that this is a fanfic. The most taboo thing about fanfics is to change the image of a deeply rooted character according to one's own will. You have to follow the original author's character and go to the dark side. Erina can be gentle occasionally, but in the end she will definitely become angry from shame! And Miss Secretary Zi must be firm that Miss Erina is always right, and it is also right to hit you! It is a sin for any man to come within one meter of Erina! That's about all. It's a good first book. I wish the author will write better and better in the future.

This is the worst Shokugeki novel I have ever read, bar none... A bunch of anecdotes, and the pace is too fast. Is it a novice novel? But this is a two-dimensional novel, bro.

I feel like most writers who write about Shokuki fanfic see Einari like a dog sees a bone, they have to find ways to flirt with her, it's so disgusting. (I didn't read the introduction before, but it's even more disgusting now that I've seen it)

Ahhhhh! Jiang Yunfeng belongs to Erina, so she can't have Tiansho, she must be a single female protagonist.

I suddenly discovered that it felt different from the original work! In the original manga, after Soma Kohei and Erina won the battle together, Soma Kohei took the first seat. But why are you only in the fifth seat?

I have to say that this is the most rubbish food novel I have ever read.

Who of you writes the monster list?

I feel so tired. The update is too slow.

Author, what you wrote is okay, but you should give the protagonist some extras, such as kitchen utensils and cooking skills. Don't worry, I will follow your books every day and recommend them.

Author, please divide it into paragraphs, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable to look at the densely packed pages.