Twelve Mice in a Garden Box

Recommended by the author, suspenseful, western background, I like this name very much. It can be seen that I have written an outline and the writing style is average. It's not clear who the protagonist is at the moment, and it feels like a period drama. This type of online novel is quite rare, and the style is also very unique. It is very slow and requires readers to have enough patience. - After reading two volumes, I feel that the narrative lines are a bit confusing. There are many parallel lines and each line is not at the same point in time. The connection between different narrative lines is not strong and is a bit fragmented. I feel that there is no meaning in alternating different lines... Maybe it would be better to adjust the order. - Mild spoilers I can understand that the two narrative lines of whaling and reporter interviews are parallel. After all, it is the survivors who are telling their experiences on the ship. However, even if the narrative line of the cruise ship is connected with the other two, it is still too disconnected. Every time the scene changes, it is very abrupt. It feels more like a story that is half-written and not written, then turns to another one, and then turns back to write the first story after writing part of it. It makes people confused, which is a drawback.

This author is one of a kind. The chapters are short and weak, but unexpectedly very interesting. The introduction is also very interesting. Unfortunately, the number of words is too short, which makes me feel like I am reading a medieval detective novel.