Dou Po: the Wind Rises in Utan

Rushing to lick Medusa? Have you never seen the world? Do you still want to lick Medusa when there are two Douzong subordinates? She has to accept whatever is given to her. The strong are respected and the strong are the rules. Can she still show off to the protagonist? In addition, it is ridiculous that the physical body needs to reach the standard to improve the soul realm. This is not in the original work. You have to come up with this poisonous point yourself. This was the old routine ten years ago. Now we still use the method of improving the spiritual energy and the physical body at the same time. Isn't it just to suppress the protagonist's combat power?

After reading three chapters, the system has given so much, can the author grasp it? Another point is that if you have to identify the whole nephew, you might as well just give the surname Xiao. I have read several books about this kind of nephew, relative and so on. Maybe he wanted to be different from his surname Xiao. As a result, because he had no relatives, he felt like licking the Xiao family in the future, especially in some books. The Xiao family was not good to him, but Xiao Zhan and his son were good to him, so he was too good to the entire Xiao family. Can the author grasp that balance? I still think it's better to just use the surname Xiao. What's the point of the whole foreign surname?

To be honest, what do you think of what you wrote? It's just that the protagonist feels like everyone will believe what he says. In fact, it's not about how you say it, but how you do it. Moreover, your pace is too fast. You will definitely have to slow down later and not let up. Your chapter will be finished soon. You need to write more detailed dialogues and battles, you know? And don't always write about something, a feeling of warmth in your heart, etc. You have to write about the details. You have to write about the details. Don't write about it as if you can see his goodness at a glance. You have to write about the details, you know? Otherwise, when it is over, you will really want to open the next book.

The plot is good, I hope there won't be more than seven female protagonists and there will be more updates

The harem can accept it, but forget about the stallion. He collected two vases before leaving the novice village. Moreover, when two potatoes are summoned and two heroines from other works are summoned, the system forces the master to be recognized. How is it different from the puppet? It is better to set two randomly. According to the current way of writing, in the future, you will have to go to the world of these two summoned heroines. Isn't it confusing people? And the hangup is so big, why do you want to summon it? It will collapse too easily. The author is obviously not sure. This is just my personal opinion. It is not easy for the author to write, so I will not rate it.

1: Single-day monthly ticket sales exceeded 10 plus one chapter added 2: Reward over 1,000 in a single day 3: The number of recommended votes in a single day exceeded 500 Maximum of 3 updates per day, I can't write more.

I think it's okay. This novel is better.

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Not bad, the author will update it well😴😴😴

It was supposed to be updated normally in February. On the 5th, I had a car accident and my right leg was broken. Now I have thick swelling and fever around my anus for a week. I can't bear it anymore and I have to go to the hospital tomorrow.