Patrolling Colonel

The golden belt of murder and arson, you only know how to kill, and all you get is the law. Where did the money go? If you want to make progress, both the wealth, law, and land are indispensable. Everything is put to its best use, no wonder there are no ratings or reviews for more than 60 chapters. You stand too high and never care about the details. Often such humane descriptions are important points for the sublimation of the character's personality. It can also be a few thousand words longer. You can not only provide an honest summary, but also enrich the characters and stories. But you know the word "kill". After killing one person, you go to the next one without stopping in the middle.

The chapters where the protagonist breaks through the fourth realm are really poorly written. It's the worst novel I've written in the past few years. .

Also the Demon Suppressor? Wouldn't the Demon Suppressor have died long ago?! As mentioned earlier, the supreme commander is the demon-suppressing general. Dao Thirty-Six Mansion, below is a demon-suppressing envoy, three Deputy Commander, Twelve Mountain Expedition Army, Thirty-six Prefectures Lieutenant Commander of the Tianxian Division. Another sub-town pops up from behind Lord Gou, the demon envoy, is now the deputy commander, Pei Yanhu. He has become the Demon Suppressor again, and there are a lot of inexplicable things in front of him. Too many typing words are confused with the person's name and position, so it's not precise. What? And the protagonist Goldfinger deliberately suppresses the drama? Love, what about rationality?

Oh my God, it's so embarrassing. It makes me feel tingly all over. The protagonist is always there at the last moment and does everything by himself. I don't know what the use of this shitty position is. He just manages a county by himself. It's a pure fantasy of a middle school boy to save the world.

I think there are a lot of trolls. Did the author mess with someone? There are so many bad things to say, but I think they are very good. They are pretty good. Come on.

The writing is really irritating. The first part is so good, but after the fourth level, I can't read it. The plot is simple and dull, and the combat power is vague. The protagonist always appears last. I thought I had found a good book, but after reading it for so long, I found out that it was a piece of shit.

You should practice the Thirty-Six Tiangang and the Seventy-two Earthly Fiends. You don't need to be a master of them all. You should be invincible in the world once your magical power is revealed. Fighting across boundaries is like drinking water.

We were decisive in killing before. What's going on now? Robots are writing for us, and our cultivation level can't keep up. Why? The cultivation method doesn't work anymore. Are we falling behind? ? ?

The update is so slow. Now I can't read such an appetizing book. I also advise the author not to think about a single win. Either you hurry up and we will read it closely, or we will abandon your book and read other books. I believe that similar books will come out soon.

The first one is typos in the article. The second one is that the sentences are not fluent and the content is not well transitioned. The author must have written it from the top. The content looks awkward. This is the third one. There are other things, etc.