Payne of Six Paths Arrives in American Comics
About This Novel
My name is Tsunemon, and when I saw Naruto, I actually traveled through time, and it was still in the Marvel universe, with a system, and the Six Paths of Payne. This time I will let you see the power of the Seven Paths of Payne (plus outsiders). If anyone knows anything about it, please correct me.
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The author of my jo will not be online at this time
Author, don't you update it? Do you have the heart to leave us behind?
Overall it's okay.
Mistakes: 1. There are too many words in each paragraph, which makes it boring if you read it for a long time. 2There are so many typos. 3. Don't use the second person from time to time (I don't know if it's a typo). 4. Try to write the protagonist as individual as possible and not a bit silly.
renew
Not ordinary slow... Slow , so slow!
Strengthen your ninjutsu
Will there be a space war in the future? If there is, ninjutsu will be useless if it is not strengthened. There is no point in just playing on the earth╮(╯＿╰)╭
I want to ask if there is any writing about the protagonist in One Piece Summoning Naruto and Naruto being 100% loyal to the protagonist.
I want to ask if there are any books where the protagonist summons Naruto in One Piece and the Naruto is 100% loyal to the protagonist.
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Good, good, good, good, good
This book can
I read it and the subject matter of this book attracted me very much. I hope the author can add a scene where the Akatsuki members fight against the purple sweet potato spirit. It will feel very interesting😘
Sorry, everyone
To all readers: The Taiwan College Entrance Examination is on January 22nd. I am so busy writing questions now that I am so busy that I have no energy to write, so I can only put it aside for a while. Sorry everyone, I am only talking about it now. Sincerely salute Yin Yang Yufan AD2020/12/19
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Come on, Ollie, good work, good work
Rating
Community(0)
Official(10)Scraped 2d ago
Free
The author of my jo will not be online at this time
Author, don't you update it? Do you have the heart to leave us behind?
Overall it's okay.
Mistakes: 1. There are too many words in each paragraph, which makes it boring if you read it for a long time. 2There are so many typos. 3. Don't use the second person from time to time (I don't know if it's a typo). 4. Try to write the protagonist as individual as possible and not a bit silly.
renew
Not ordinary slow... Slow , so slow!
Strengthen your ninjutsu
Will there be a space war in the future? If there is, ninjutsu will be useless if it is not strengthened. There is no point in just playing on the earth╮(╯＿╰)╭
I want to ask if there is any writing about the protagonist in One Piece Summoning Naruto and Naruto being 100% loyal to the protagonist.
I want to ask if there are any books where the protagonist summons Naruto in One Piece and the Naruto is 100% loyal to the protagonist.
Check in
Good, good, good, good, good
This book can
I read it and the subject matter of this book attracted me very much. I hope the author can add a scene where the Akatsuki members fight against the purple sweet potato spirit. It will feel very interesting😘
Sorry, everyone
To all readers: The Taiwan College Entrance Examination is on January 22nd. I am so busy writing questions now that I am so busy that I have no energy to write, so I can only put it aside for a while. Sorry everyone, I am only talking about it now. Sincerely salute Yin Yang Yufan AD2020/12/19
.
Come on, Ollie, good work, good work
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