Lords: Build an Extraordinary Empire
by Chili Stew
About This Novel
This book is also called: Building a Kingdom from the Village Chief -------- Holy Lord Guard. The Dragon Knights who bring death and fear. An elemental shooter who uses the power of elements to snipe accurately. On the assembly line, wizard apprentices were making artificial magic stones one after another. Outside the towering city walls. The bright red wheat fields breed extraordinary power. The roaring magic energy blast furnace flows down countless molten steel. Legends are made of iron, blood and song. This! It is: [Holy Noma Empire! ! ! ]
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Official(16)Scraped 22d ago
The progress of time is too slow. After reading more than sixty chapters, only more than a month has passed in the book, but the author has indeed arranged a lot of things. Reading at this pace makes my expectations less and less! The panel says that the protagonist's talent "can be improved", but it has never been improved, nor does it say how to improve it. Then the wizard setting appeared. With the wizard's knowledge, the protagonist really couldn't understand it. If I continue writing at the author's current pace, I personally feel that I won't be able to continue writing for a long time! Because the writing is too detailed at the beginning, it is difficult to change into the rhythm of "a few months have passed" later. There must be a clear main line (the kind of main line that readers can feel). Only by using the main line as the branch of the novel can the rhythm be controlled! For example, if the protagonist's training is the main line, then other things can be arranged, such as the protagonist's training or small breakthroughs, and the time rhythm can be controlled like fast forward. If farming is the main line, then don't release too many business types at once. The territory's population is only over 100, so is it reasonable to do so many things? There must be a backbone to support it, such as expanding the population, forming an army, and other commercial methods, etc., All serve the backbone, so there is no need to write in too detail. Use the advancement of the backbone to control the rhythm, otherwise it will be very confusing to read!
2025.1.2
I won't have a grandma anymore
Is there a huge gap between wizards and knights? Can you give the knight some face? It can't be too outrageous, right? If you look at wizards and knights of the same level, wizards are equal to people holding guns, and knights are equal to bare hands. Immortality novels can't be so outrageous, right? If it really breaks down, it would be better to kill the Sky Knight directly with a first-level wizard.
In the first knight, more than 100 chapters later, the knight said that the protagonist's talent is so good that Goldfinger should speed up his training. Also, if the protagonist is not there, something will happen. A wolf will come and be bitten to death by the old village chief when he goes out. When he goes out to meditate, the monster will attack the village and his father's fiefdom will be fine for a hundred years. When the protagonist comes, he is either a wizard or a beast king.
The writing is neither right nor wrong. The knight is neither a wizard nor a wizard. The description of the war is a mess. He even got involved in League of Legends. Otherwise, just write a game fanfic.
Pig's trotters have been written very well, and they can do everything! ! ! ! !
I think it looks good
If you want to write about farming, you should farm well. This novel is very suitable to my taste.
The subject matter is novel and suitable for the appetite.
Although it's two updates, I'll continue to ask for updates, come on 666 (👍ᐛ )
The map is too small. A viscounty is about the same size as our town.
It's such a great and beautiful book. Apart from Global High Martial Arts, this is the first time I've read such a beautiful book.
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Official(16)Scraped 22d ago
The progress of time is too slow. After reading more than sixty chapters, only more than a month has passed in the book, but the author has indeed arranged a lot of things. Reading at this pace makes my expectations less and less! The panel says that the protagonist's talent "can be improved", but it has never been improved, nor does it say how to improve it. Then the wizard setting appeared. With the wizard's knowledge, the protagonist really couldn't understand it. If I continue writing at the author's current pace, I personally feel that I won't be able to continue writing for a long time! Because the writing is too detailed at the beginning, it is difficult to change into the rhythm of "a few months have passed" later. There must be a clear main line (the kind of main line that readers can feel). Only by using the main line as the branch of the novel can the rhythm be controlled! For example, if the protagonist's training is the main line, then other things can be arranged, such as the protagonist's training or small breakthroughs, and the time rhythm can be controlled like fast forward. If farming is the main line, then don't release too many business types at once. The territory's population is only over 100, so is it reasonable to do so many things? There must be a backbone to support it, such as expanding the population, forming an army, and other commercial methods, etc., All serve the backbone, so there is no need to write in too detail. Use the advancement of the backbone to control the rhythm, otherwise it will be very confusing to read!
2025.1.2
I won't have a grandma anymore
Is there a huge gap between wizards and knights? Can you give the knight some face? It can't be too outrageous, right? If you look at wizards and knights of the same level, wizards are equal to people holding guns, and knights are equal to bare hands. Immortality novels can't be so outrageous, right? If it really breaks down, it would be better to kill the Sky Knight directly with a first-level wizard.
In the first knight, more than 100 chapters later, the knight said that the protagonist's talent is so good that Goldfinger should speed up his training. Also, if the protagonist is not there, something will happen. A wolf will come and be bitten to death by the old village chief when he goes out. When he goes out to meditate, the monster will attack the village and his father's fiefdom will be fine for a hundred years. When the protagonist comes, he is either a wizard or a beast king.
The writing is neither right nor wrong. The knight is neither a wizard nor a wizard. The description of the war is a mess. He even got involved in League of Legends. Otherwise, just write a game fanfic.
Pig's trotters have been written very well, and they can do everything! ! ! ! !
I think it looks good
If you want to write about farming, you should farm well. This novel is very suitable to my taste.
The subject matter is novel and suitable for the appetite.
Although it's two updates, I'll continue to ask for updates, come on 666 (👍ᐛ )
The map is too small. A viscounty is about the same size as our town.
It's such a great and beautiful book. Apart from Global High Martial Arts, this is the first time I've read such a beautiful book.
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In terms of setting and writing, this book can only be regarded as a good book. However, the protagonist's communication and interaction with his family, master, confidants, subordinates and people are all very natural, and the writing is not deliberately ugly or dark.
I recommend my own books. After reading books for so many years, I also came up with the idea of doing my own thing. Please give me a collection recommendation. Thank you.
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