Side Swordsman in the Steam Age

When the secondary plane appears, the plot changes later in a weird way.

I don't understand, what exactly do you want to do? I don't even have a plan. I'll learn this one at a time and that one the next. I only know a little bit about both Eastern and Western fantasy, but I want to write a combination of the two. It's neither fish nor fowl. After reading a hundred chapters, I still don't understand it.

It's very interesting, good luck to the author

Report it, come on, come on, come on! I hope all goes well with the new book!

The leader is weak and the minister is strong, what a strange setting

After reading some, I found that although the title of the book is quite attractive, the more I read the content, the more I feel a sense of inconsistency. On one side is the Eastern cultivation of immortality, and on the other side is the Western bloodline of cultivation (the book feels incompatible with the Eastern "Sword Immortal"), which is why the comments on the book are somewhat resentful. It is recommended to change the title of the book, which is also the most convenient way (to put it bluntly, some details are not described clearly, which makes people feel a little inconsistent)

This book is average, the writing is not concise enough, and the description is not clear enough! There is a hammer here and a mallet here and there, and it is very long-winded. If you don't read every word, it will be very difficult to read! The various nouns, names, and names are very problematic. There are several names for the protagonist named John, and there are several names for Nicholas including nicknames and swords. The names of places, exercises, spells, realms, and even the sizes of various units of weights and measures are all over and over again. One acre is one pound, one pound is equal to one pound, and one gold pound is equal to how much silver or gold! Showing your uniqueness in every detail is a completely brain-draining act! The storyline is also a mess, there is a main line, but it advances slowly, is too long-winded, has no ups and downs, no climax, and no excitement! The writing is not like modern online novels at all. One of the characteristics of modern novels is that you can understand what is written at a glance! If this book doesn't work, I suspect that I have Alzheimer's disease and cognitive impairment!

The first few pictures were okay, but when I got to the dozens of chapters, I felt uninterested. After seeing more than 100 pictures, I felt a little sick. This book was ruined.

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After looking at it for a long time, I became a forest seeker, and then I wanted to refine the flying sword, and then I wanted to come out with a card? I really can't stand it anymore