Paper Fruit in One Piece

1. The protagonist used various intelligence manipulations, knowing that he was not domineering, and then unprepared to challenge Lao Sha... Well... Without any testing, he went to the meeting alone and ran towards Lao Sha... The most interesting thing was that the protagonist poured sea water all over Lao Sha... But Lao Sha had no reaction... Um... Sea water... Poured all over him... Actually did not lose his power... Not only did he not lose his power... He could also use domineering... He could also fight back... Lao Sha's combat power is close to the vice-emperor level combat power... Just a pure shark arm... 2. He gave Lao Sha an invincible trick, and then when Luffy came, he gave Lao Sha another invincible trick... The author's tricks for Lao Sha include: ① Fruit awakening... ② High-level knowledge color that can predict the future... ③ High-level armed color Hmm... Lao Sha must be so strong... At least he has the strength between the three disasters and the deputy emperor. He can't beat a bullshit protagonist for a long time... In the end, he let the protagonist run away... After being convinced... A person who can be hacked to death with a single knife is armed with color, and he has to fight for a long time with the giant hook and eight poisons... Luffy is here... The protagonist asked Nami to make it rain with dancing powder, and then destroyed the awakened Shasha Fruit... Why? Even the magma that is as strong as Aoki cannot destroy Akainu. Why do you think a little rain will destroy the awakened Shasha Fruit? And why didn't Lao Sha use the armed color to wind up and kill Luffy with a knife? Why do you have to fight? Can a group of people release their murderous intent to destroy the Haki that can predict the future? ? ? What hook eight settings? ? ? Then if you find 100 marines to unleash their murderous intent, wouldn't it mean that the lieutenant general would kill the four emperors without any injuries? ? ? Are you sick? As soon as Luffy arrived, he acted as if he had no brains. The rain area is not very large. If you have to fight within the rain range, you can't run out... Obviously, Luffy can be killed with a knife, but no, he has to fight with his fists... 3. The protagonist has the ability to pour other people's blood on paper, and then he can use other people's abilities through the paper. Then the protagonist makes these "ability papers" into books. So the question is, with such an important prop, why does the protagonist think that the book will never break? Why not make a few more and keep them for later use? 4. The author wanted to give the protagonist a straight-steel man design. I understand that this stupid setting was very popular in the past, but the author was not strong enough in writing, so he wrote it with steel shark arms. The reason for the straight-steel man is because the expression of a woman is not obvious, and the protagonist cannot understand it. Nami even confessed to it, and the protagonist wanted to pull Nami's hand... I don't hate the straight man design, but I hate the steel shark arms. 5. Everything else is trivial. The protagonist is a fool at first. He robs, kills, and kills people first before he takes action... Quirks are okay, but don't explain it, don't say it as if it's self-defense and counterattack. It's shameless. Also, the author wrote the novel after reading the plot summary on Baidu. I thought it was copied from the One Piece anime, but it turned out that I copied it from Baidu... Then there will be all kinds of strange nouns in it, such as: the historical text becomes a historical monument... Tina becomes Hina... Well... There are many more, you can read it yourself if you want to see it. I can't stand it. I'm very picky and I will never watch it if it looks disgusting. Gone, gone.

Will he still be slapped away by the Tyrant Bear? If you want to write about a protagonist who has been practicing for two years, it is best to write a few more chapters. If there is no shooting, will all the members of the top war team participate in it? There are also theatrical versions of Golden Lion, Zefa and Barrett, can you write them, the funny daily lives of the Love Luffy Group, etc.!

Advantages of following the boat flow: Most of the novels on the market are naval and pirate novels. In fact, the protagonists in most novels are more or less arrogant. They think that they know that they looked down on the protagonist group before, so they either become a navy or become a pirate leader. The advantage of following the ship flow is that there are fewer companions, and secondly, it is not as mindless and fun as other pirate fans. My thoughts on this book: 1. This novel is not mindless. The protagonist doesn't have a harem or an empress, indeed! I also covet the Empress, but those novels treat the Empress as a fool. In other novels, the protagonist only needs to fight the Celestial Dragons, and the Empress will fall in love with you? No kidding! The first reason why the Empress fell in love with Luffy was that she was not crazy about herself, but wasn't the protagonist of the novel very serious on the outside but a dog on the inside? As the author said, those who can be with the empress are probably naturally stupid. This novel has Nami as the main character, but the process is clear and the result is reasonable. 2. The protagonist group is not overly enhanced. This at least made me feel comfortable reading it. Compared with other novels such as "The Sand Crocodile" with 30W words and "Little Invincible" with 50W words, this one is very comfortable. 3. Protagonist problem. Compared to novels in which he was a fat nerd in his previous life and became awesome after time travel, this novel does not clearly describe what the protagonist did in his previous life. Think about it, a fat nerd is a loser in this peaceful era, but he is awesome in the pirate era? And this kind of novel that doesn't clearly describe the protagonist's life story is very good. 4. The inner activities of the protagonist. The writing is very real. When you travel to a chaotic world like pirates, you should feel uneasy inside. You are the only one, and you feel the despair of being abandoned by the world. And those mindless and cool articles are about time travel, calculation, and murder without blinking an eye. Brother! How can anyone from peaceful times be so awesome? So awesome, how come you were a loser in your previous life? There is no change at all and the plot is blunt! 5. Pirate is a passionate fan. Most of those Pirates fans are dark writers and invincible writers. Every step is calculated and non-combustible. Although this novel is also calculated, the problem with the ship is solved directly. The ship itself is burning because of its companions, the Pirate King Luffy. The protagonist's calculation is more similar to JOJO's direct battle. 6. I would love it if the update speed were faster...

In the second chapter, he was directly persuaded to quit, and the male protagonist Roman was both responsible and established. And this plot...😬, Alas, no need to say more. .

Maybe it's because I didn't like it. I felt that this book had no passion at all. In addition, the reason for getting on the ship was not explained clearly. Why did Luffy just do it if he asked him to be his companion? Because of what!

Obviously I have nothing wrong with this book and the writing is good, but why is the rating so low?

The writing is broken. This is going to develop in the direction of mythology. You can control your clones and learn Haki from across the island. Oda didn't even dare to write like this, and even drew a symbol

When the protagonist of Alabasta meets Ace in a group, he almost gets mad at himself by thinking about it. He wants to get involved in everything he encounters, and acts as if he has been wronged a lot. He also likes to spoil the story when nothing happens. Anyway, if reality wants me to meet such a person, I have to stay away.

The protagonist has his own position and integrates well into the Straw Hats. In terms of plot, he can also use his advantages as a time traveler to use intelligence to improve the strength of the members and perform as they should. That would be great. However, I still hope that the plot can be changed, and I hope to see more changes and impacts when it comes to the war. However, I hope the author will think carefully about whether to save Ace or not. Anyway, I am quite confused. Save him. This man is going to die. Others have tried their best to kill him. But don't save him. The result of the war will not change at all, which is also a pity. . . Looking forward to further developments. .

Forget big things and remember small things. . Can there be less plot like this? It's so bloody.