Perfect: He is the Emperor of Heaven, and I Am the Emperor of the East!
by Shadow Burt
About This Novel
A speck of dust can fill up the sea, a piece of grass can cut down the sun, moon and stars, and a bell can hold down the universe forever. When the innate treasure Chaos Clock comes to the wilderness with the soul of the 21st century, will the eternally arbitrary Huang still be the same person? My name is Shi An, from Shicun! This book was once titled "Perfect: I am Shi An in Shi Cun, Huang Ta's Brother!"
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Official(219)Scraped 4d ago
The protagonist is so useless, it's 2025 and there are still people writing novels like this
The emotional line at the beginning is very awkward, and it feels like the protagonist is doing this and that. The protagonist of this book does not have his own main plot and just follows Shi Hao. On average, every chapter has Shi Hao's plot. In this case, I might as well read the original work. The protagonist has the Chaos Clock, the Blood Essence of the Ancestral Witch, and the top skills of the ancient world, but Tianhu is still so useless at the beginning. Cultivation is so slow! It took more than ten years of practice to become a master. Author, do you know what the essence and blood of ancestral witches is? After absorbing a few drops of Daluo Jinxian's ancestral witch essence and blood, did he actually break through to the Cave Heaven Realm? Author, do you need to put so much pressure on the protagonist? This is the most useless time traveler I have seen this year. With around 200 chapters in his fan fiction, he is already a regional leader. It's 2025 and I'm still writing novels like this. Please change the first picture, don't say that the protagonist is a time traveler. From then on until the protagonist goes to the upper world, he has always followed Shi Hao's old path. Losing nothing reflects the advantages of the time traveler.
It's so pretty👀. The single female protagonist Yun Xi. Just less. I hope the author will write more, update more, and publish more.
The author wants to ask you. You think about it as you write. You write the outline first and then write the novel. I also want to write fan fiction. But I can't write an outline. I would like to ask the author
How good is Yun Xi? Not to mention the weakling in the vase, she only focuses on the troubles caused by Milkman. There are so many beautiful women and she can't find them. While she and Shi Hao are good brothers, she brings trouble to them and kills her future little nephew.
I will only say it once. Chen Dong himself said that the Immortal Emperor is equal to the Great Luo Jinxian, and the Sacrifice does not transcend the Immortal Emperor. Do you not even respect what the original author said? Being above the Tao is equivalent to being a saint or above a saint, because the original work explains that one has transcended the Tao, and the performance of a saint is similar, but it is not clearly stated.
In the original work, the reason why Chen Dong asked Yun Xi and Shi Hao was far-fetched. He refused to save him even though he tried it at the beginning. In the end, he had no cultivation and had to follow the feeling just because of guilt. The first time I watched it was in junior high school several years ago. At that time, I felt like the Celestials were planning something.
Too childish
I have read more than ten chapters, and the protagonist is still a childish ghost. You could say he is an aboriginal, and he knows a little bit about it. You say he is a time traveler, but you can't tell it, he feels like a child
It feels like the author didn't go his own way and kept surrounding Shi Hao. This is very boring. You should use a perfect background to show yourself on a perfect stage instead of following Shi Hao all the time. The golden finger on your body is much higher than all the opportunities of Shi Hao. The ancestral witch is at least at the priest level, so there is no need to surround Shi Hao.
Suppressing the protagonist's strength. In the original work, Shi Hao's resources were limited in a few years. However, it would take nearly ten years for the protagonist's essence and blood to reach its limit. Even 120,000 kilograms is unreasonable.
So which one is written? The length of the passers-by is probably longer than the length of the protagonist. Why do you feel that the protagonist is specifically for Shi Hao to protect the bid? And is there too much description of Shi Hao than the protagonist? Or I feel that if you directly write about traveling through Shi Hao, it will be more immersive 😂😂
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Official(219)Scraped 4d ago
The protagonist is so useless, it's 2025 and there are still people writing novels like this
The emotional line at the beginning is very awkward, and it feels like the protagonist is doing this and that. The protagonist of this book does not have his own main plot and just follows Shi Hao. On average, every chapter has Shi Hao's plot. In this case, I might as well read the original work. The protagonist has the Chaos Clock, the Blood Essence of the Ancestral Witch, and the top skills of the ancient world, but Tianhu is still so useless at the beginning. Cultivation is so slow! It took more than ten years of practice to become a master. Author, do you know what the essence and blood of ancestral witches is? After absorbing a few drops of Daluo Jinxian's ancestral witch essence and blood, did he actually break through to the Cave Heaven Realm? Author, do you need to put so much pressure on the protagonist? This is the most useless time traveler I have seen this year. With around 200 chapters in his fan fiction, he is already a regional leader. It's 2025 and I'm still writing novels like this. Please change the first picture, don't say that the protagonist is a time traveler. From then on until the protagonist goes to the upper world, he has always followed Shi Hao's old path. Losing nothing reflects the advantages of the time traveler.
It's so pretty👀. The single female protagonist Yun Xi. Just less. I hope the author will write more, update more, and publish more.
The author wants to ask you. You think about it as you write. You write the outline first and then write the novel. I also want to write fan fiction. But I can't write an outline. I would like to ask the author
How good is Yun Xi? Not to mention the weakling in the vase, she only focuses on the troubles caused by Milkman. There are so many beautiful women and she can't find them. While she and Shi Hao are good brothers, she brings trouble to them and kills her future little nephew.
I will only say it once. Chen Dong himself said that the Immortal Emperor is equal to the Great Luo Jinxian, and the Sacrifice does not transcend the Immortal Emperor. Do you not even respect what the original author said? Being above the Tao is equivalent to being a saint or above a saint, because the original work explains that one has transcended the Tao, and the performance of a saint is similar, but it is not clearly stated.
In the original work, the reason why Chen Dong asked Yun Xi and Shi Hao was far-fetched. He refused to save him even though he tried it at the beginning. In the end, he had no cultivation and had to follow the feeling just because of guilt. The first time I watched it was in junior high school several years ago. At that time, I felt like the Celestials were planning something.
Too childish
I have read more than ten chapters, and the protagonist is still a childish ghost. You could say he is an aboriginal, and he knows a little bit about it. You say he is a time traveler, but you can't tell it, he feels like a child
It feels like the author didn't go his own way and kept surrounding Shi Hao. This is very boring. You should use a perfect background to show yourself on a perfect stage instead of following Shi Hao all the time. The golden finger on your body is much higher than all the opportunities of Shi Hao. The ancestral witch is at least at the priest level, so there is no need to surround Shi Hao.
Suppressing the protagonist's strength. In the original work, Shi Hao's resources were limited in a few years. However, it would take nearly ten years for the protagonist's essence and blood to reach its limit. Even 120,000 kilograms is unreasonable.
So which one is written? The length of the passers-by is probably longer than the length of the protagonist. Why do you feel that the protagonist is specifically for Shi Hao to protect the bid? And is there too much description of Shi Hao than the protagonist? Or I feel that if you directly write about traveling through Shi Hao, it will be more immersive 😂😂
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