Starting from Xiaoao Jianghu, Heading Towards the Heavens

You forced yourself to write a bad martial arts novel into a fantasy luck flow. Why can't you kill the protagonist? I don't know, I thought you were writing about a perfect world that covers the sky.

Let me say a few points: the first protagonist's skills are not practiced by himself. The system can travel through thousands of realms. It is an assistant. If he can master the skills at every turn, it is the system's skill that is returned to the protagonist. Isn't luck also improving personal luck? If you want to use Hongjun like this, you have already surpassed the avenue.

Ah Fei really doesn't know how to use swordsmanship, he's just fast. He can do everything quickly, so he can only be used as a backup tire.

After watching Swordsman, I was addicted!

Which messy Ming Dynasty had the most rebellions? Emphasis on literature over martial arts? I'm afraid you didn't wake up.

It was Dongfang Bubai who created the Sunflower Book. The martial arts agreed depended on who practices them.

Let's not talk about the starting rhythm of destroying the universe in three days. You gave people advice at night, and the imperial edict arrived the next day. At this time, the court was still in Zhejiang, and it was crazy in Hunan. It was too late to make a phone call or take the high-speed train! No one else has this rhythm. To say it is brainless is a compliment! I was reading a book recently. Cao Cao of Yanzhou wrote to Yuan Shao who was near Youzhou. He received a reply the next day along with provisions, equipment, etc. Brother, it will take three days for SF Express to arrive. You come and go and receive it the next day? ? ? There is also a book about fighting on a 300-mile mountain road. Even if it takes half an hour to chase the enemy, the plane is too late, because there is still fighting. Chasing the enemy, returning to the mountain road, and showing the sword is even more exaggerated. The fierce battle in Cangyunling for three days and three nights, and another 300 kilometers at night, attacked Heiyun Village, and marched 60 kilometers in the early morning to attack the county town. Is this a human being? Is it written in human language? Why don't you mention carrying rations, light and heavy weapons, mountain roads, and hiking to Africa in one day without rest? Running faster than light? No wonder no one reads books anymore, and there are no classics anymore, it's all nonsense! No brainer!

Is the realm set in the book confused with internal power? The realm is the realm of martial arts, and the internal strength is the internal strength. What is the reason why the improvement of the martial arts realm requires the improvement of internal strength? If the author doesn't understand this, you should just rest. Writing martial arts books is not for you!

It's so embarrassing. I can't even finish the first chapter. No wonder there's no rating.

This first picture made me look very embarrassed!