From Liancheng Jue to Achieving Martial Arts Myth

Although the protagonist of "The World of Liancheng Jue" is a bit long-winded, to be honest, the writing is pretty good, but the second part of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is too languid. A good martial arts novel has been turned into a Qiong Yao drama. I don't object to the protagonists chatting, but flirting with each other is too much. In addition, Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu had already arranged well before, but later arranged for Xiao Longnu to run away from home. Didn't you say so yourself, brother? Fan fiction should respect the original plot. If there is just a little change, will the plot be completely different? Since the protagonist has already told Yang Guo about his parents, he has also let Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu understand each other's feelings in advance, and also reminded Yang Guo not to tell others that Xiao Longnu is his master if he wants to marry Xiao Longnu. In addition, Xiao Longnu has not been bullied by Zhen Zhibing, so why did Yang Guo just say something about going out for no reason, and then run away from home without saying goodbye? After the protagonist has done so much, Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu appear in Jianghu for no reason, and they always have a relationship with the protagonist. I want to say, author, what do you want to do?

Author, if you don't know how to write about Machiavellian tactics, then don't write about it. The main character is like a clown.

A common problem when traveling through the world of martial arts novels is to add your own understanding of the novel to each paragraph and blindly analyze it. It's a lot of nonsense, I can't stand it.

Isn't it disgusting that you just wrote this and then created a system?

I'll give it 3 stars. If someone wants to kill you, just kill the other person's family. There's so much nonsense.

It's really too verbose and uncomfortable.

There is a lot of nonsense. Although it is reasonable and well-founded, it cannot be so superficial.

The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this. Author, please update quickly.

The author's part of the Tianlong Babu is pretty good. I found the first two of his books too long-winded to read, but as soon as I got to the Tianlong part, I suddenly found them quite interesting.

It's just too long-winded. The author wrote out what was in my mind and planned out a lot of things. The sentences are thought-provoking and heartfelt! OK OK OK!