Dou Po: I Can Hang up and Practice

There is nothing poisonous about it, but throughout the whole story, the dialogue is the same as between man and machine. The content of the novel is basically the same, practice, man-machine conversation, practice, man-machine conversation, repeat.

How should I put it? It's okay to practice while hanging up, but when it comes to practice, I don't have a concept. It is okay for you to be one or two ranks higher than others, but the resources you consume are not directly proportional to your speed, which is too unreasonable. You are also just coming of age, and the original protagonist has just joined the Doujie. If you are a direct Doufu master or a six-star, you need to pay attention to consumption while practicing on the idle. It is normal for people to have little secrets, but your secret can make people commit crimes to some extent. If you are a pure novel, you don't need to worry about these unreasonable things. The routines are the same, but the content cannot be boring. Random additions are okay, but at least they have to be interesting, otherwise you won't be in the mood to continue reading.

There are quite a few poisonous points. . The puppets trained by Dou Ling can reach the peak of Douzong. . And he still uses the body of Dou Wang and Dou Ling. . You don't even know what the power of space is. The original Douzong only used the power of space initially, barely used it to travel. Even at the peak of Douzong, you can use part of it. When you reach Douzong, it means teleportation, strangulation, and blockade. And the whole text is verbal. The plot is nothing interesting.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but the more I wrote later, the less basic logic became lost. Seventh-level weapon refining and puppet techniques in the Dou Ling realm can produce semi-holy puppets. Is Dou Huang going to become Dou Emperor? The author might as well just go up and kill the Soul Emperor and end it directly.

From the current point of view, the protagonist wants nothing. The demon fire map and Qinglian's heart fire are all given to Xiao Yan. If you don't exchange Yao Lao's entire wealth, I can only say that he is a nanny and a licking dog. Don't say that he can't exchange it. From Yao Lao's perspective, exchanging all his wealth for strange fire is no different from pie in the sky.

Gou Daozhongren is very suitable for a time traveler mentality, striving for victory in a stable manner.

Just brag, no matter how awesome the materials you find are for a four-star Dou Ling, a Thunder Cultivation Technique mixed with only a little fire attribute, Ren Kui can actually make a semi-saint. The raw materials used are still based on Dou Wang Dou Huang, and they are not afraid of draining you... The next few chapters are all about Ren Kui, so why not do it like this, just train yourself to become a semi-saint? It's fine if we write it, but it can be a little more reasonable.

I don't want you to write a Nimu fanfic for anything.

Can you write novels? How come fighting skills are always dependent on iron mountains? How much do you like that Tieshan relies on this fighting skill? Is there no other fighting skill except Tieshan's fighting skill?

There is a poisonous point in refining the puppet. It's too fake.