Zhutian: I Have a Main God Fragment
by Winter Sun
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Incarnated as the son of Tang Guogong and the half-brother of the future Emperor Taizong Li Erfeng, he should have been lying down with his arms crossed and enjoying the wealth. But here there are actually the nine elders who opened the Sui Dynasty, Yang Lin, the patron king, Ning Daoqi, who is known as the great master of Taoism, Song Que, the heavenly sword of the Lingnan Song family, and Bi Xuan, the great master beyond the Great Wall. There are hidden dragons and crouching tigers in the world. If you practice martial arts to a profound level, you can condense the Yuan Dan, nurture the Yuan Shen, and even shatter the void... Fortunately, there is an accompanying treasure, a fragment originating from the Supreme God, with which I can travel across the heavens and travel across all realms. It draws its origin from the world of heavens and becomes the supreme myth.
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In the first world, he wanted to take people with him for fear that others would not know about his golden finger. If the protagonist hadn't become wise, everyone would have been hunted down and exterminated in any normal fairy tale.
The protagonist's thinking is very contradictory and I really can't understand it.
As the title states, the protagonist met Huang Rong in the first dungeon world and directly promised to take her to the main world (it has been delayed for almost five years and it has not been done yet). Okay, you have to do it at the risk of exposing your golden finger or losing control. Maybe the protagonist really likes Huang Rong to the extreme, and he is a pure lover, right? However, in the second mixed martial arts world copy, the protagonist slept with a group of beauties such as Mu Wanqing, Wang Yuyan, A'Zhu, Yao Yue, Li Qinglu, etc., And even forced a monologue to explain that it was for their own good, which was quite speechless! Then, from the perspective of daily interactions, the protagonist, as a time traveler, is not particularly close to the Li family. Especially in the plot of making achievements after breaking through the great master, it is obvious that Fu Cailin is regarded as a human machine at the expense of his family's life, and he is betting that he will not go crazy and take action for at least a month! Although the bet won in the end (the author's will), judging from this incident, the protagonist's not planning to be an emperor, and some inner monologues, the relationship with the family can only be said to be a plastic family relationship. However, what is very strange is that the protagonist clearly intends to "become a monk" in his heart, but every time he downloads a dungeon, in addition to collecting exercises, he also tries his best to collect treasures and materials. The inner monologue actually says that he plans to bring it back to the main world to help his family raise an army in the future, which is very confusing! Especially in the latest chapter, after the protagonist breaks through the Grand Master and kills Fu Cailin, he suddenly becomes paralyzed. Inexplicably, he has to go to Yang Gong's treasure house to join in the fun, and he can't understand it at all - the only thing that is useful to him is the Evil Emperor's relic, and everyone knows this thing, and there is a high probability that he will encounter Xiang Yutian, the hidden boss of the main world. In other novels, the protagonists of this old monster basically only dare to touch it if they are at full level and fully equipped with gods. Especially the main world has been strengthened. The grand master is comparable to the golden elixir, the supreme grand master is comparable to the Nascent Soul, and the broken level is not to mention at least the transformed god. But the protagonist is very confident. As soon as he cultivated the golden elixir, he took the initiative to confront Xiang Yutian, and then he was indeed tricked... Of course, I believe that the protagonist, as long as he moves his golden finger or rushes to the next dungeon, the problem will be solved immediately, but I really don't understand why the protagonist would take this risk? The Evil Emperor's relic is not very high-end, and it is not irreplaceable for the protagonist who can download a copy at any time, so why do we have to go to Yang Gong's treasury? Is it just for the treasures and materials inside? It seems that this is the only way to explain it, but this is too contradictory. The protagonist's thoughts and actions are almost in conflict! If this is not foreshadowing, it can only be said that the image of the protagonist is very awkward. It is suspected that the thinking is chaotic, the IQ is low, the small head controls the big head, the mind is inconsistent and the will is weak... In short, the protagonist's image has been stretched to the waist, and is only a little stronger than Long Aotian in Xiaobai's novel! However, the author has three completed works and has read them all. They are all good and he is considered an experienced author. How come this book is of this level? !
The result of reincarnating as Li Yuanba is not as good as the original version. You might as well reincarnate as other ordinary people and rely on cheats to rise up. You will lose all the b points.
Really, don't insult Li Yuanba with this setting. Change the setting to suppress combat power at the beginning. Then what kind of shoe factory do you have? It is impossible to travel back in time and become Li Yuanba, no matter which version, he only has the strength of a thousand catties, let alone your story of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. It is originally this template. If you have to admit it, you can only say that he can only be a high martial artist, and you want to follow the template, but you don't want the protagonist's combat power to be so outrageous. Really, either you just write a cool story and don't overwhelm your ability to fight, then we can write one by ourselves and don't follow someone else's plot. Not good at anything, but still trying to get along, well, it's really rubbish
Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with writing about fragments of the Lord God traveling through the heavens, but writing about changing destiny and then harvesting the original power is extremely toxic. 1. The plot is very boring and nauseating. Second, improving strength is brainless. No matter what reasons you give, you can't explain it perfectly. Third, you can't live without the plot of the original work. The biggest opportunity to travel through the heavens is to cultivate civilization in the heavens. It is the background version of the plot. As for the original work, it is only a corner. It is boring to pay attention to other people's grudges and hatreds all day long. How much does it have to do with you? To be honest, changing the plot to get the origin of the world, or the power of merit, etc. Is all nonsense. The world will not rotate without the protagonist? What does killing or saving people have to do with the world? There is no difference whether there are humans in a world or not. It will not affect the operation of the world. It is impossible to give you merit or karma. A book that takes brainless logic and then adds it to a brainless plot is a mess.
Li Yuanba was a peerless figure who could block and kill gods, not to mention carrying a weapon. However, he was beaten into a dog by a messy little loser in the same realm.
The biggest poisonous point is that the reincarnation of Li Yuanba is not as good as the original Li Yuanba. Without such overwhelming combat power, he might as well be reincarnated as a passerby.
In fact, overall, I think this book is okay. But if the protagonist is Li Xuanba, it immediately stretches the crotch because it puts too much pressure on the protagonist. Dugu Feng is about the same age as the protagonist, and is about to break through to the master level. The protagonist drank the blood of medicinal snakes in the world of the Condor Shooting, and obtained the energy equivalent to seven or eight years of hard work, and the skill has only reached the fourth level. Only at the ninth level of Kung Fu can one break through the innateness and become a master. This seems like the protagonist's qualifications are very poor. You just have to set the protagonist to be a person with low qualifications. If you set the protagonist to be Li Xuanba, it turns out that it will take at least ten or twenty years to cultivate to the ninth level of the technique and break through the innateness. Is this reasonable? Dugufeng didn't eat any natural treasures, right? People are about to achieve their innate breakthroughs when they are thirteen or fourteen years old, but the protagonist is too profitable in comparison.
Summary of poisonous points in Internet articles 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of bursting into a small universe, awakening mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being hunted by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and keep a low profile, rather than continue high-profile murderous adventures. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, mutilating corpses, and eradicating traces to prevent enemies from coming to your doorstep, or even harming relatives and friends, should be the protagonist's basic IQ. 4. Make good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins, which should be based on the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. It should be the protagonist's basic IQ to hide one's cheats/plug-ins, avoid being discovered, kill people and seize treasures. 6. Do not ridicule others in person, including the protagonist, for no reason. Basic IQ of faction, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. If you work for others, including women, you should negotiate the remuneration in advance. 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires a good reason. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the protagonist needing to save his life frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends. 12. Monks will not be slaves to mortals. 13. Being free and unrestrained is a fairy. 14. Tell more stories and less reasoning.
It's too overwhelming. There are more than 100 pictures. The protagonist can't beat others at the same level. Those who get good reviews are also useless.
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Official(71)Scraped 2d ago
In the first world, he wanted to take people with him for fear that others would not know about his golden finger. If the protagonist hadn't become wise, everyone would have been hunted down and exterminated in any normal fairy tale.
The protagonist's thinking is very contradictory and I really can't understand it.
As the title states, the protagonist met Huang Rong in the first dungeon world and directly promised to take her to the main world (it has been delayed for almost five years and it has not been done yet). Okay, you have to do it at the risk of exposing your golden finger or losing control. Maybe the protagonist really likes Huang Rong to the extreme, and he is a pure lover, right? However, in the second mixed martial arts world copy, the protagonist slept with a group of beauties such as Mu Wanqing, Wang Yuyan, A'Zhu, Yao Yue, Li Qinglu, etc., And even forced a monologue to explain that it was for their own good, which was quite speechless! Then, from the perspective of daily interactions, the protagonist, as a time traveler, is not particularly close to the Li family. Especially in the plot of making achievements after breaking through the great master, it is obvious that Fu Cailin is regarded as a human machine at the expense of his family's life, and he is betting that he will not go crazy and take action for at least a month! Although the bet won in the end (the author's will), judging from this incident, the protagonist's not planning to be an emperor, and some inner monologues, the relationship with the family can only be said to be a plastic family relationship. However, what is very strange is that the protagonist clearly intends to "become a monk" in his heart, but every time he downloads a dungeon, in addition to collecting exercises, he also tries his best to collect treasures and materials. The inner monologue actually says that he plans to bring it back to the main world to help his family raise an army in the future, which is very confusing! Especially in the latest chapter, after the protagonist breaks through the Grand Master and kills Fu Cailin, he suddenly becomes paralyzed. Inexplicably, he has to go to Yang Gong's treasure house to join in the fun, and he can't understand it at all - the only thing that is useful to him is the Evil Emperor's relic, and everyone knows this thing, and there is a high probability that he will encounter Xiang Yutian, the hidden boss of the main world. In other novels, the protagonists of this old monster basically only dare to touch it if they are at full level and fully equipped with gods. Especially the main world has been strengthened. The grand master is comparable to the golden elixir, the supreme grand master is comparable to the Nascent Soul, and the broken level is not to mention at least the transformed god. But the protagonist is very confident. As soon as he cultivated the golden elixir, he took the initiative to confront Xiang Yutian, and then he was indeed tricked... Of course, I believe that the protagonist, as long as he moves his golden finger or rushes to the next dungeon, the problem will be solved immediately, but I really don't understand why the protagonist would take this risk? The Evil Emperor's relic is not very high-end, and it is not irreplaceable for the protagonist who can download a copy at any time, so why do we have to go to Yang Gong's treasury? Is it just for the treasures and materials inside? It seems that this is the only way to explain it, but this is too contradictory. The protagonist's thoughts and actions are almost in conflict! If this is not foreshadowing, it can only be said that the image of the protagonist is very awkward. It is suspected that the thinking is chaotic, the IQ is low, the small head controls the big head, the mind is inconsistent and the will is weak... In short, the protagonist's image has been stretched to the waist, and is only a little stronger than Long Aotian in Xiaobai's novel! However, the author has three completed works and has read them all. They are all good and he is considered an experienced author. How come this book is of this level? !
The result of reincarnating as Li Yuanba is not as good as the original version. You might as well reincarnate as other ordinary people and rely on cheats to rise up. You will lose all the b points.
Really, don't insult Li Yuanba with this setting. Change the setting to suppress combat power at the beginning. Then what kind of shoe factory do you have? It is impossible to travel back in time and become Li Yuanba, no matter which version, he only has the strength of a thousand catties, let alone your story of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. It is originally this template. If you have to admit it, you can only say that he can only be a high martial artist, and you want to follow the template, but you don't want the protagonist's combat power to be so outrageous. Really, either you just write a cool story and don't overwhelm your ability to fight, then we can write one by ourselves and don't follow someone else's plot. Not good at anything, but still trying to get along, well, it's really rubbish
Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with writing about fragments of the Lord God traveling through the heavens, but writing about changing destiny and then harvesting the original power is extremely toxic. 1. The plot is very boring and nauseating. Second, improving strength is brainless. No matter what reasons you give, you can't explain it perfectly. Third, you can't live without the plot of the original work. The biggest opportunity to travel through the heavens is to cultivate civilization in the heavens. It is the background version of the plot. As for the original work, it is only a corner. It is boring to pay attention to other people's grudges and hatreds all day long. How much does it have to do with you? To be honest, changing the plot to get the origin of the world, or the power of merit, etc. Is all nonsense. The world will not rotate without the protagonist? What does killing or saving people have to do with the world? There is no difference whether there are humans in a world or not. It will not affect the operation of the world. It is impossible to give you merit or karma. A book that takes brainless logic and then adds it to a brainless plot is a mess.
Li Yuanba was a peerless figure who could block and kill gods, not to mention carrying a weapon. However, he was beaten into a dog by a messy little loser in the same realm.
The biggest poisonous point is that the reincarnation of Li Yuanba is not as good as the original Li Yuanba. Without such overwhelming combat power, he might as well be reincarnated as a passerby.
In fact, overall, I think this book is okay. But if the protagonist is Li Xuanba, it immediately stretches the crotch because it puts too much pressure on the protagonist. Dugu Feng is about the same age as the protagonist, and is about to break through to the master level. The protagonist drank the blood of medicinal snakes in the world of the Condor Shooting, and obtained the energy equivalent to seven or eight years of hard work, and the skill has only reached the fourth level. Only at the ninth level of Kung Fu can one break through the innateness and become a master. This seems like the protagonist's qualifications are very poor. You just have to set the protagonist to be a person with low qualifications. If you set the protagonist to be Li Xuanba, it turns out that it will take at least ten or twenty years to cultivate to the ninth level of the technique and break through the innateness. Is this reasonable? Dugufeng didn't eat any natural treasures, right? People are about to achieve their innate breakthroughs when they are thirteen or fourteen years old, but the protagonist is too profitable in comparison.
Summary of poisonous points in Internet articles 1. When encountering an enemy that is too strong, you should run away instead of bursting into a small universe, awakening mysterious power, having epiphanies and breakthroughs in battle. 2. When being hunted by the enemy, you should remain anonymous and keep a low profile, rather than continue high-profile murderous adventures. 3. Killing people, seizing treasures, mutilating corpses, and eradicating traces to prevent enemies from coming to your doorstep, or even harming relatives and friends, should be the protagonist's basic IQ. 4. Make good use of your own talents/cheats/plug-ins, which should be based on the protagonist's basic IQ. 5. It should be the protagonist's basic IQ to hide one's cheats/plug-ins, avoid being discovered, kill people and seize treasures. 6. Do not ridicule others in person, including the protagonist, for no reason. Basic IQ of faction, supporting characters and passers-by. 7. If you work for others, including women, you should negotiate the remuneration in advance. 8. Talking in a battle will make both sides look stupid. The more words, the more stupid they will be. 9. Taking risks requires a good reason. 10. Realm division is the cornerstone of the combat power system. If you casually cross large realms to kill enemies, the combat power system will soon collapse. 11. Being able to take care of oneself without the protagonist needing to save his life frequently should be the basic IQ of the protagonist's relatives and friends. 12. Monks will not be slaves to mortals. 13. Being free and unrestrained is a fairy. 14. Tell more stories and less reasoning.
It's too overwhelming. There are more than 100 pictures. The protagonist can't beat others at the same level. Those who get good reviews are also useless.
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The new book of Zhutian, a 70,000-word serialization, is the new book of Winter Yang, a veteran author of Zhutianliu. His several excellent works of Zhutianliu and one excellent work of Summoning and Hegemony are quite good. It is worth reading in the book shortage! The plot of the book begins with Li Yuanba, the half-brother of Li Shimin, a prince of the Tang Dynasty in the late Sui Dynasty. The time is when Yang Guang conquered Goguryeo. There are characters from the Sui and Tang Dynasties as well as sect backgrounds from the Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty. The protagonist is extremely talented and has also obtained fragments of the main god. Starting from the first Condor Shooting in the World of Heaven, he has conquered the girl Huang Rong, which contributed to the marriage of Guo Jing and Mu Nianci... Food and grass recommendation! Introduction: Incarnated as the son of Tang Guogong and the half-brother of the future Emperor Taizong Li Erfeng, he should have been lying flat on his back to enjoy wealth and wealth. But here there are actually the nine elders who opened the Sui Dynasty, Yang Lin, the patron king, Ning Daoqi, who is known as the great master of Taoism, Song Que, the heavenly sword of the Lingnan Song family, and Bi Xuan, the great master beyond the Great Wall. In the rivers and lakes, Buddhism travels all over the world, Demons hide in the marketplace, and Taoists hide in the mountains and forests. There are hidden dragons and crouching tigers in the world. If you practice martial arts to a profound level, you can condense the Yuan Dan, nurture the Yuan Shen, and even shatter the void... In the outer areas of the Central Plains, there are many strong people, powerful and wealthy, but they cannot settle down and live in peace. This is the world of Tang Dynasty with high martial arts level! Fortunately, there is an accompanying treasure, a fragment originating from the Supreme God, with which I can travel across the heavens and travel across all realms. It draws its origin from the world of heavens and becomes the supreme myth.
In the outer lands of the Central Plains, there are as many strong men as clouds! With power and wealth, can you settle down and live in peace? Fortunately, with the accompanying fragment of the treasure Lord God, I was able to travel through the heavens, absorb the origin of the world, and become a supreme master.
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