Starting from the Deadlock, the Ultimate Derivation
by Fangsuo
About This Novel
Goddess raises ghosts and takes their lives to occupy fields, evil spirits exorcise corpses to find poison and make money, warlocks occupy mountains and bloodbath villages for bandits, demon babies possess pregnant women and eat human flesh and blood, evil gods seduce people and steal their minds... Song Yihang traveled to this ghost film world, and all he could rely on was the ultimate killing system in his hand. He used the orders of monsters and monsters to deduce his supreme achievements and carve out a majestic avenue!
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Official(56)Scraped 22d ago
It makes my head hurt to look at it
After reading Chapter 30, the protagonist of the waste stream is a yamen, and there is a protagonist Lin Wushuang who beats him and runs all over the map... The whole story is dry.
Isn't it true that the author has masochistic tendencies?
Every time the author writes a book, it's like this, semi-depressive. I feel like your writing technique is a bit monotonous! This kind of desire is first suppressed and then suppressed at every turn, and many plots are unreasonable! Can Shi Jian become the leader? I am also speechless. The description in the movie "Zombie Supreme" is very clear. It is the senior brother, or at most the boss of one lineage in Maoshan, who is invincible. You really increase the difficulty for the protagonist in order to suppress the protagonist. Many plots are just written in the head. If your writing attitude and technique are not improved, you will not be able to make a lot of money! The reason why the performance of your novels are so low now is also because of this, it is still the same old routine from a few years ago. All I can say is that I hope you can improve! After all, if you really want to transfer more money, you can't make a lot of money without improving your writing skills. I also hope you can go further on the spiritual path! Well! ~
Fool! Knowing that it was a country goddess who had done the dirty work, she knew that she couldn't be pinched to death in the daytime? When the iron cloth shirt became a success, a landowner who was not a small warlord couldn't wipe out the family in one night?
It's a bit ridiculous to think about going hunting. Each person has more than 100, and you only have 90 for a wild boar. There are so many guizi out there. Just use some poison or add a few more fires. If you kill them by 10% or 20%, you will become immortal immediately. Are you trying to suppress the protagonist and suffer a bit?
There's no fun at all, everything is dead. You can't beat a shop in town even if you have perfected all four martial arts skills?
Too watery
I saw the latest scene where the main character meets a thief. It was too watery. I didn't understand it. You are a lot of watery people. Does it have anything to do with the plot? The protagonist says, "I'm looking for the thief." The master just says, "Let's cover this person up and start fighting." I have been deducing the word count of water, and then the word count of data panel. There will be two or three data panels in one chapter, and then the word count of introducing some unrelated things. If you say that the master talks about a lot of incisions, and then the protagonist cannot connect, it is reasonable to introduce the rules, incisions, slang, etc., But the protagonist does not know it, and the master is embarrassed. The protagonist asks about a thief, and the master says Xiaoliu, just say that Xiaoliu is a thief, and pull out a bunch of them. You are not detailed. You should just say that thieves have been around since the Stone Age, but it was only officially known as Shi Qian in the Song Dynasty after the integration of Shi Qian. Sometimes watching the original version is so fucked up.
Seeing that the Tan family can be destroyed in Chapter 30, hey, I just want to play if I don't go. I just want to wait for the Tan family to deal with me. What is it about?
This strength is overwhelming🉐The dogs shook their heads when they saw it
Don't build the foundation for ten thousand years. Bit by bit, the pure system is given to the dog.
Keep suppressing the development of pig feet! The ordinary people in the front were worth 200+, but the ones in the back immediately turned into energy and were only over 100!
The problem is that although you pretend to be cool, although you are selfish, and although you feel you have a clear conscience, it seems that all the disasters are coming because of you. Why do you harm others when you are obviously capable? What about the disasters that come because of you? If I had you as a friend in real life, I would definitely stab you to death with a knife.
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Official(56)Scraped 22d ago
It makes my head hurt to look at it
After reading Chapter 30, the protagonist of the waste stream is a yamen, and there is a protagonist Lin Wushuang who beats him and runs all over the map... The whole story is dry.
Isn't it true that the author has masochistic tendencies?
Every time the author writes a book, it's like this, semi-depressive. I feel like your writing technique is a bit monotonous! This kind of desire is first suppressed and then suppressed at every turn, and many plots are unreasonable! Can Shi Jian become the leader? I am also speechless. The description in the movie "Zombie Supreme" is very clear. It is the senior brother, or at most the boss of one lineage in Maoshan, who is invincible. You really increase the difficulty for the protagonist in order to suppress the protagonist. Many plots are just written in the head. If your writing attitude and technique are not improved, you will not be able to make a lot of money! The reason why the performance of your novels are so low now is also because of this, it is still the same old routine from a few years ago. All I can say is that I hope you can improve! After all, if you really want to transfer more money, you can't make a lot of money without improving your writing skills. I also hope you can go further on the spiritual path! Well! ~
Fool! Knowing that it was a country goddess who had done the dirty work, she knew that she couldn't be pinched to death in the daytime? When the iron cloth shirt became a success, a landowner who was not a small warlord couldn't wipe out the family in one night?
It's a bit ridiculous to think about going hunting. Each person has more than 100, and you only have 90 for a wild boar. There are so many guizi out there. Just use some poison or add a few more fires. If you kill them by 10% or 20%, you will become immortal immediately. Are you trying to suppress the protagonist and suffer a bit?
There's no fun at all, everything is dead. You can't beat a shop in town even if you have perfected all four martial arts skills?
Too watery
I saw the latest scene where the main character meets a thief. It was too watery. I didn't understand it. You are a lot of watery people. Does it have anything to do with the plot? The protagonist says, "I'm looking for the thief." The master just says, "Let's cover this person up and start fighting." I have been deducing the word count of water, and then the word count of data panel. There will be two or three data panels in one chapter, and then the word count of introducing some unrelated things. If you say that the master talks about a lot of incisions, and then the protagonist cannot connect, it is reasonable to introduce the rules, incisions, slang, etc., But the protagonist does not know it, and the master is embarrassed. The protagonist asks about a thief, and the master says Xiaoliu, just say that Xiaoliu is a thief, and pull out a bunch of them. You are not detailed. You should just say that thieves have been around since the Stone Age, but it was only officially known as Shi Qian in the Song Dynasty after the integration of Shi Qian. Sometimes watching the original version is so fucked up.
Seeing that the Tan family can be destroyed in Chapter 30, hey, I just want to play if I don't go. I just want to wait for the Tan family to deal with me. What is it about?
This strength is overwhelming🉐The dogs shook their heads when they saw it
Don't build the foundation for ten thousand years. Bit by bit, the pure system is given to the dog.
Keep suppressing the development of pig feet! The ordinary people in the front were worth 200+, but the ones in the back immediately turned into energy and were only over 100!
The problem is that although you pretend to be cool, although you are selfish, and although you feel you have a clear conscience, it seems that all the disasters are coming because of you. Why do you harm others when you are obviously capable? What about the disasters that come because of you? If I had you as a friend in real life, I would definitely stab you to death with a knife.
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