The God of War

Usually, the protagonist procrastinates in doing things. While he wants to achieve martial arts transcendence, he also has a lot of information that he doesn't want to check out. The eldest princess has the key in her hand. She can just go and get it. Why wait until she comes back when she is here? With the protagonist's strength, isn't this something that can be solved in a short time? It's okay to just pretend to be awesome at the beginning, but keep doing the same routine over and over again (without the energy~it can't be him~it's really him). Just do it once or twice. It's really boring to keep doing it. Killing Luoshen Peak is still grinding, flying over to kill it and coming back, it won't take more than a few hours, right?

In Chapter 56, I said I was going to destroy the Divine Peak, but I ended up dragging my feet. It's chapter 165, and we haven't even entered the gate of Luoshenfeng Mountain.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you wait for the second update, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is taken more seriously. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are 20 years old, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating your heart may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them All come from insufficient updates.

Is the author confused about priorities? ? Shouldn't invincible novels have a compact plot? Starting from the capital to annihilate Luoshen Peak, he started inserting other events into it, and in the end, it was all just to show off? After dozens of chapters, we still haven't reached Luoshen Peak. Is this because we have to exhaust the audience's patience? Shouldn't the protagonist carry out one thing according to the plot and then start another thing? Shouldn't he have to insert dozens of chapters of other things into the implementation of one thing to drag out the plot?

Because I am often in a hurry when I write, I may change the article. If you sometimes see something wrong, you can re-read it. Thank you. Thank you🙏

Two hundred chapters later, the first climax has not even reached the door. It was really an old lady who was crossing the zebra crossing and everyone was watching.

Unbelievable female channel, bastards are better than biological ones

After reading more than 100 chapters, I turned to chapter 200. Before I arrived at Luoshen Peak, I had to complain about this book before I deleted it from the bookshelf.

A bookworm for many years, I think it's still worth a read. There is no dramatic plot, and the protagonist does not always hang around at the bottom. It feels good when it should, but does not limit the scope of the protagonist's activities. One thing is that although it is an invincible style, there are too many masters. Other invincible styles are masters who brag about various realms. You are a master and you are not as good as the dog world and the people. It feels like this master is worthless. The framework of the realm is not set up properly. But even if the flaws are not concealed, it can be regarded as a clean stream in the invincible flow. It does not have the aesthetic fatigue of the traditional invincible flow.

It's not that this is pure nonsense. A talented fake prince still dares to keep him. The emperor is still having a relationship with the fake prince. It smells like a cuckold.